Manan FF : Will u be my Girlfriend /LINK TO THREAD 2 PAGE 1 - Page 49

mujhe bhi aisa lage raga tha ki manan k engagement hogi...
yipee!!!! sache mae manan ki engagement hua ha...
plz next part asap...plz

Yaar m in love with ur story..
Plx update soon
Eagerly waiting for the update
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If possible

Arushee

Really cute update, love all theteasing and pouting and the engagement, looking forward to cuye manan

Superb story...it is really amazing

HI...
i recentaly started reading ur story...its amazing...i just loved the plot...woow...i mean srsly awesome...
manik n nandus nok jhok...hehehe...n cabir n navyas romance is really very sweet...
n the surprise...i was like...omg!!!!!...they all planned manan ki sagayi without telling them...it was amazing...
finally they are engaged...
ab toh nandini officially manik ki girlfrnd ho gayi hai...
continue soon...
waiting eagerly for ur next upadate...

Part 12A :

Manik looked at nandini and gasped as she came out wearing a tee shirt and wrapping her lower half with a towel. Manik immediately closed his eyes as he was that nandini didn't yet see him sleeping on their bed. He laid down with his eyes closed waiting her to scream or shout something, but nothing like that happened. The moment nandini saw manik she too was shocked for a moment but when she noticed his eyes closed she sighed in relief but nandini was not sure whether he was sleeping or acting so she took baby steps towards him and sat beside him on the bed. Nandini ran her small fingers through his hair gently and smiled looking at his calm face. On the other manik was having really tough time controlling himself even after knowing that she was half wrapped in a towel. He fisted his hands to control his anxiety but to his dismay nandini noticed all his movements in his body and smirked seeing the effect she has on him.

"hmm.. karo karo aur acting karo Mr.Malhotra.. mai bhi dekhthi hun till what time u will control yourself.." nandini thought with a naughty smirk on her face. She thought to tease him more and bent down and placed a looong kiss on his forehead and that was it for manik, he immediately opened his eyes and in a fraction of second pinned nandini beneath him on the bed holding her hands above her head and she was shocked as she didn't expect this from him atleast not in her that state. Nandini's eyes widened in shock and she looked at manik with a questioning expression on her face and now it was our naughty manik's turn to smirk. Eyeing her lips manik said "what was that..?" bending down to her ear he whispered huskily and she shivered with the intensity in his voice. "ma..mani..manik..k..kya kar r...rahae ho..?" she stammered very badly pausing after every word she spoke. Manik bent down more near her face and slowly rubbed his right cheek with his left and did the same on other side too. Nandini's breathing pace increased, she could feel her heart thump against her chest because of his proximity. Her voice died in her vocals long back. She was struggling to free her hands from his grip but was feeling too weak to do so. His touch made her crazy. Same was the case with manik too, her fragrance her, her hardly audible voice, her proximity were doing nothing but were forcing him to kiss her hard till she was breathless but his mind was stopping him doing so as he wanted her to first feel comfortable with him which at present she wasn't. but he couldn't even leave her so easily so he moved close to her lips which were almost touching and said "nanduu.. what was that..?" he asked in a tone which was almost a whisper. He could feel the thumping of her heart as their bodies were touching each others and he really enjoyed his that effect on her. Nandini didn't reply anything and stopped struggling her hands to get out of his grip and closed her eyes tightly as she expected him to kiss her then. But he didn't and she opened her eyes to look at him and as expected he smirked seeing her open her eyes not feeling him close and said "what were u expecting me to do hmm..?" she turned her head sideways to hide her blush and nodded her head in a no. he held her both hands in his one and with the free hand palmed her cheek and made her face him. He again came close to her and kissed her forehead her eyes her nose and almost smooched her cheeks, nandini was turning more red with each passing second and with increasing manik's kisses. She was not able to do anything and bit her lip to supress her moan watching which the half sleepy desires of manik woke up again as he forcefully pushed them to sleep and not to poke him again and again. But the damage was done he moved to her lips and nandini could feel his breath over her lips and licked her lips due to nervousness and manik immediately pecked her lips and nandini who had her eyes tightly shut at once opened her eyes wide and looked at him with shocking expression. He chuckled seeing her expressions and again gave a tight peck on her lips shocking her to the core and made her turn beet red as the realisation hit her. Manik moved his free hand down to her waist and she again gasped. Manik was moving his hand on her bare waist and nandini felt a thousand butterflies in her stomach all of a sudden. Manik was moving his fingers lazily on her stomach and all nandini could do was shiver at his touch. After gathering a lot of courage nandini spoke "ma..ma..manik.. p..pl..ple..please..." but all her words fell in deaf ears as he continued nuzzling his face in her neck inhaling her sweet scent and moving his fingers on her waist making her go crazy. He soo wanted to kiss her but refrained himself from doing so not knowing what her reaction would be..!

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"yaar yae dono kya kar rahae hai..?" cabir said impatiently as he expected manik to come running down the steps followed by nandini with a bat in her hand to hit him but nothing of that sort happened..!

"shayad they r talking to each other.. all this happened all of a sudden.. they need some time na.." aliya suggested

"I wish manik hum sabko maar na dalae yae pata chalnae kae baad ki we all knew it before itself and hid it from him.." dhruv said nervously

"haan.. yaar.. dhruv nae toh marae muh ki baath cheen li.." abhi supported him equally nervous of manik's reaction.

"bhai tum dono ko khanae nai wala.. just chill.. bolna ki even u don't know.. aur haan agar kisi nae bhi bhai ko yeh bataya ki I was the one who told u all about this toh surely ill kill u.." mukthi warned everyone.

"hum toh nandu kae liyae parshan hai.. kitni der ho gayi.. yae dono neechae aanae ka naam hi nahi lae rahae.." navya said worriedly playing with the corner of her dupatta and this drove everyone's attention towards her.. mukthi and aliya winked at each other and mukthi said "arae wah navya... tumhara ghagra to bohath beautiful hai.. where did u get it from..?" and as expected despite getting warning from cabir navya spoke "arae yeh.. yeh toh humhae cabir ji nae gift kiya hai.. accha hai na..?" and cbair slapped his forehead and palmed his face knowing what was coming next.

"arae mujhae nahi pata tha ki cabir ki itni acchi choice hai ladies dresses select karnane mai.. kyu dhruv..?" aliya asked looking at dhruv and he continued "haan yaar navya.. aur dekho toh he brought a dress for u which complements with his.. hai na..?" dhruv indicated abhi to carry further and listening dhruv's words navya blushed a little and cabir started a fake cough and ran into kitchen to drink water ( god knows how long will he have to stay in kitchen to escape from them ) and CaVya teasing session continued with navya blushing and cabir peeping from kitchen to listen what they were talking.

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"nandu.." manik whispered in her ear and she just hmm'ed in response.

"kuch bolo gi nai..?" manik said in the same tone shifting his face to the other side of her neck and she slightly nodded her head in a no and she felt his lips curving into a smile against the skin on her shoulder where he was dropping feather kisses and she giggled feeling ticklish. Suddenly manik's hands went to the knot of her towel which was around her waist. The moment nandini felt his fingers on the knot a current ran down her spine and she looked at manik with utmost shocking expression on her face and nodded a no nervously to which manik nodded his head in a yes. Nandini was helpless her hands were also not in her control and even in such a weak situation she tried to blackmail manik by saying "manik mai.. mai chillaungi...!!" to which manik replied " carry on.. mai bhi dekhtha hun who comes to your rescue" and winked at her continuing to linger his fingers around the knot of the towel and nandini's throat went dry listening to him. She struggled to free her hands from his grip and manik said " don't try the things which you cant.." and lightly tickled her on her tummy she giggled a bit but was thinking of ways to get out of his grip asap. And finally she spoke those words for which manik did all this

"manik what do u want..?" nandini said in a hardly audible tone manik moved back and looking into nandini's eyes he said "everyday.." she repeated looking deep in his eyes "everyday.." manik continued "u will.." and nandini was trapped in his eyes she spoke as if she was hypnotised "I will.." and manik said the last word coming deadly close to her "give me.." and she said still in the trance "give you.." manik pecked her lips and said "one kiss.." and the word KISS brought nandini out of her hyptonised state and she said in a horrified tone with her eyes widened to the fullest " kiss...????" and manik with a single jerk held her by waist and lifted her a bit and said "yes.. kiss..to be Mrs. Manik Malhotra.." and smirked. Nandini was shocked happy on mention of her name as Mrs.Malhotra and blushed but the kiss thing was manik her worried and she couldn't say anything as now the total situation was under manik's control and she had to agree at any cost. "but manik.." she tried to protest even after knowing that there was no use and was hushed by him as he placed his finger on her lips and nodded a no and said "u cant even imagine what all im feeling like doing to u now.. so don't instigate me to do what all that u haven't imagined.. just say yes and u r free to go.." he said looking deep into her eyes. Nandini silently nodded a yes as her no would really scare the hell out of her. Manik slowly got of her as said and she heaved a sigh of relief but was lying on the bed still in the same position. Manik saw this and extended his hand towards her to get up and said "get up and wear something before I change my mind" and pulled her and made her sit straight on the bed.

Part 12 B :

Nandini came out of the washroom wearing her shorts but didn't find manik in the room. She wondered where would he have gone all of a sudden. She tried to open the door to go down but on finding it locked was shocked and the moment she turned her head to the other side she found a note which read as follows

"don't try to open the door.. its locked.. I have jumped off the balcony to my room will b back in 10... we need to TALK"

She frowned as she didn't understand what still he had to talk and sat on the bed waiting for him and started gazing the ring in her hand and unknowingly a smile crept her face.

Nandini's POV :

Aaiyappa... like seriously... now I and manik are engaged.. this feeling na is something different..ek taraf im feeling happy and the same time pata nai why im feeling ki "is this right..?".. I do like him but... vo kya soch raha hoga marae barae mai..? do he accepts me as his fianc...? I mean yae sab itnae achanak.. itni jaldi jaldi mai hua ki.. I didn't get time to react.. what do I do now..

(end of pov)

Manik entered the room from the connecting door of their room and came and sliently sat beside nandini. She didn't look at him but said "what do u want to talk..?" he didn't say anything but took her hands into his and looking into her eyes said "nandu.. just tell me the truth.." and she nodded a yes and manik continued "are u happy with what all happened today... I mean.." he caressed the ring in her hand and looking at it said "r u happy with their decision..?" and looked at nandini who had a smile on her face and got confused for a moment and she continued "manik.. vo log humsae badae hai.. and this is a very big decision.. toh un logon nae bahuth soch samajh kae I faisala liya hoga.. and I trust them.. aur rahi baath tumhari toh don't worry mai tumhae apnae line mai la dungi.. its very easy for me u know..?" and smirked looking at his face which was totally in a shock with mouth opened as a perfect O.. he took time to register her words and then said "matlab u accept me...??" he said still a bit shocked. And she nodded a yes with a huge smile and manik said "matlab u really accept me.. tumhae is rishtae sae koi problem nahi hai..?" and she nodded a no.. he smiled and said "tum koi preassure mai aakae toh nahi bol rahi ho na..?" and again she nodded no.. manik felt so relieved that he hugged her immediately and said "pata hai nandu I loo..." and stopped abruptly as he came into senses and recognised what he was about to say.. and how could nandini leave a chance of getting it out from himself and sweetly whispered in his ear gently brushing her little fingers on his nape still in the hug "i.. agae bolo manik.." manik understood that she was trapping him and he too played along "I am hungry.." and broke the hug and made a bad face.. nandini made a bad face as manik escaped very easily noticing this manik said "saara khana tu nae hi kha liya tha.. aur nervousness mai mainae kuch bhi nahi khaya.. itna khao gi toh moti ho jao gi.." and filled air into his cheeks bulging them out and indicating with hands like shez fat (same like we used to do in childhood.. remember..?) and nandini started hitting him and he caught her hands and folded them on her back and said "and what were u saying.. ki mujhae apni line mai lao gi.. in your dreams..Mrs.Malhotra.. coz vo line mera hai.. ill mould u according to me.." and nandini retorted back angrily "in your dreams you motu.. chod mera haath.. leave me..!!" and struggled hard to free her hands but was not able to do. And she being a boxer hit him in his stomach using her knee and manik left her and wrapped his arms around his stomach and winced "ouch.. u stupid panda... inti zor sae koi Martha hai kya..???" she smirked and said " isae kehatae hai.. line pae lana.. marae punches ki adat dal lo Mr.Motu.. tumhae bohath milnae wala hai.." and moved to door forgetting the fact that it was locked from outside and tried opening it but failed doing so and taking this as an opportunity manik grabbed her by waist and pinned her to the wall beside and placed his lips on her without waiting for her reply and nandini was shocked to the core... he was kissing her madly.. biting chewing and sucking her lips hard making her moan in his mouth.. her hands which were pinned to the wall manik entwined their fingers and kissed her deeper.. nandini didn't understand and stood there all surrendered letting him do what he wanted to.. what else could she do.. manik was kissing her madly with so much passion and hunger that nandu felt weak in her knees.. she dug her nails in his knuckles but manik was in no mood to leave her.. he bit her lower lip and she gasped and manik entered her mouth exploring every corner on her mouth kissing her more and more deeply... nandini was out of breath and was moaning continuously to leave her but manik had no mercy.. not this time.. nandini stopped struggling as she knew he wouldn't leave her until he felt like doing so.. manik calmed down a bit after some time and slowly broke the kiss... both were panting heavily and manik joined his forehead with hers and after gathering his breath enough to speak he said "iski bhi adat dal lo my dear nandu... and remember one thing... excluding the daily kiss.. if u dared to hit me.. u ll have to pay the penalty like this..." and opened his eyes to look at her.. she had her eyes closed and was breathing heavily.. face completely flushed.. he again pecked her lips and said "the thing which u want to hear from me.. itni asani sae nahi milnae wala tumhae.." and moved back from her. Nandini still didn't open her eyes and was standing to the wall itself blushing hard...

But the fighter nandu woke up all of a sudden and she shot a glare to him and said "aur tumhae kaisae laga ki tum mujh pae haq jata saktae ho.. stay away from me.. aur yae jo tumhara daily dose and all.. har haalath mai tumhae nahi milnae wala.. so keep your expectations to yourself.. and stay away from me.." and crossing her hands across her chest turned her face away..

Nandini's pov :

(aaiyappa...! First kiss... hawww...!! Yae manik bhi na.. har waqt itna impulsive kyu behave kartha hai... aaisae forcefully mujhae kiss kar diya.. stupid.. idiot.. ghada...!! Huh..!!! isae apni full rights tabhi milengi jab sab kae samnae officially propose karaega aur mujhae sab kae samnae jor jor say I love you bolaega.. tab tak mai isae chunae bhi nahi dungi..duffer..!!! )

Manik's pov :

( stupid panda.. mera first kiss kharab kar diya.. kya jatha agar respond kar deti toh.. stupid ladki I say.. kuch bhi nahi pata.. aur upar sae bol rahi hai ki mai uspae haq nahi jata saktha... isae dikha tha hun ki haq kaisae jatatae hai... get ready nandini...!)

End of pov's

Both looked at each other and turned their faces to the other sides opposite to each other and sat on the corners of the bed. Manik got irritated and walked to the interconnection door and walked to his room locking the door behind him and laid down on his bed and closed his eyes.. nandini was getting irritated locked in the room and started banging the door hard..

Down in the hall :

"yaar I think we should open the door.." mukthi said hearing the sound of the banging door, hearing this cabir came and said "haan.. haan.. we should open the door.. pata nahi kya kar rahae hai dono upar.. chalo chalo.." and rushed upstairs without waiting for their response and opened the door of nandini's room and she came out with and irritated expression on her face and after giving a glare to everyone she went down and rest all except navya who went along with nandini came into the room only to get a shock of not finding manik there.

"yaar.. yae kahan chala gaya..?" abhi said worriedly

"yahan bhi nahi hai.." dhruv said after checking the wash room

"shayad he used balcony to go to his room.." mukthi said who knew about manik very well

"we should go and check his room.." aliya said and all moved to manik's room only to find him sleeping ( they thought ) and didn't dare to disturb him and silently went to hall to get the details from nandini.

"thank god.. chalae gayae sab ... warna ajeeb ajeeb sawal puchtae.. nandu toh kuch bolnae wali nahi.. toh manik beta ur secret is safe.." manik murmured to himself and smiled naughtily. "Finally I have u in my life nandini ... ab dekhnae... what all I will do.." he thought to himself and moved to his cupboard to get something and opened his secret drawer only to find it empty and his eyes widened in shock.. he started searching for IT in his whole room but didn't find it anywhere... "last time I completely remember I had kept it there only... kisnae nikali hogi.." and thought for the possible people who knew about it "mukthi.. no no.. mukthi doesn't know where its key is kept...only I know about it.. phir kaun ho saktha hai...?" and thought worriedly as if IT reaches the wrong hands his whole secret will be out.

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"nandu kya hua hai.. kuch toh bolo na.. hum pareshan ho rahae hai..??" navya said worriedly seeing nandini not even speaking a word and keeping mum. Fab4 and abhi came down and saw nandini with an angry face sitting with navya. Aliya and Mukthi looked at each other and smiled and aliya said making an innocent face "arae nandini what is this on your face.." pointing on her cheek and mukthi too joined "arae haan nandu yae tarae gaal pae kya laga hua hai...?" nandini immediately wiped her cheek's with her palms and asked "ab gaya kya..?" to which the duo nodded a no and being a navie soul navya said "arae gaal pae toh kuch bhi nahi hai.. tum logon ko kya dikh raha hai..?" Mukhlya slapped their foreheads and replied in unision "blushhh...!!" and all smirked watching nandini really blushing. She shooed away her blush and covering it with fake anger she said "kuch blush wush nahi hai.. stop it all of u..!" and threw pillows at mukthi and aliya who doged it in time and started chasing them as they were not stopping teasing her and all the elders entered the hall, and dadu said in a stern voice

"kya ho raha hai yahan...?" making everyone freeze at their places and all turned towards the elders who came into the house hearing noises from the lawn outside. All the kids became quite when dadu said "aaisae koi shor machatha hai kya..? kya ho gaya hai hum logon ko.. khana theek sae nahi khaya.. common mukthi start the music.. arae thoda dance ho jayae..?" and winked at them who were standing there making a prefect O mouth's and on registering dadu's words screamed loudly and mukthi went and started the music system and all were dancing crazily and happily. Cabir and navya were stealing glances but cabir didn't dare going close to navya as he would be definitely caught badly this time and maintained a safe distance from her.

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After some time :

Everyone retired to their homes after dancing till there was not even 1% energy wasn't left in them.

In shalini and kishore's room :

"nandu u r happy na..?" shalini asked her and she nodded a yes

"beta tu sach mai kush hai na.." Kishore came and sat beside the maa- beti and placed his hand on her head

"yes papa.. im happy.. because marae liyae aap jo bhi decide karogae marae bhali kae liyae hi hoga.. I know manik thodi shararath kartha hai.. but don't worry ill handle him in my style.." nandini said and winked at Kishore and the trio laughed

"hum kal manglore wapas ja rahae hai.. ammp shanno tare chahcu rishab aur preethi kae saath.." shalini said and tears welled up in nandini's eyes as her parents would be leaving her

"beta ro math.. u r strong na.. and yahan ajnabee koi nahi hai beta.. its your home too now.." shalini said caressing nandini's head which was now in her lap. Nandini just hmm'ed in response and dozed of unknowingly in the same position.

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Sorry for delay but im back as promised.. hmm.. nandu itni jaldi man gayi.. isn't something fishy.. to know more.. stay tuned to my story..

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Neeraja..😊

Awesome. . Manik is such a tease...

Awsome update dear...will be waiting for ur next update..ad ur concept is also nice one

It's awsm yaar
Too gud
Bt I wntd a mature conversation btw Manan abt marriage n their relationship thng
Update soon
N ty for pm