The man in the elevator~ MaNan OS

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Awesome update

Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

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erujaslam

@erujaslam

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

OMG. This was amaizng. Like.

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Anu

@RomComFan

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Awww..so cute, loved the little notes and the way they teased each othr, great job...

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srija-n

@srija-n

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

wow !!!
though i knew that its manik ...
bt then when she was thinking ..
no calls and msg frm manik ... and then
asked him about arav .. for a moment even i was cofused ..
bt then it had to be manik
its amazing ...
kash !!! kash !!! ea os nehi hota !! :)

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thamannamanan

@thamannamanan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

mind blowing os

superb work

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Soomikulsoom

@Soomikulsoom

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Initially i was surprised how can nandu who is that guy first in elevatr but when she said yes to go n meet him bar i realized it must b manik

Great s always n loved it full of suspene n manan amazing story by u

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manikmalhotra2

@manikmalhotra2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

It's awesome ...amazing. ... marvelous ...fantastic

Firstly I was surprised ... and shocked ...how can Nandini be attracted towards other ... but then I thought it must be Manik ...

It's really unique and different

The suspense ... the spa moments. ..elevator scene...and Nandini's POV ...All the things r written beautifully

Thanks for the pm

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zoiakanwal

@zoiakanwal

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

woow its just amazing story I really liked it liked the notes from manik to nandani very beautiful

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SehrMemon

@sehrmemon

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+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian
res
will unres at night...plz wait sweety

unres
sorry got late...

bt i loved ur os very much
nandini's efforts for navya...
the whole elevator thing...
those chits...
the clubbing scene...
bar scene...
and the suspense...

liked pov of nandini in the end the most...

would love to read more of urs work...

LOVE
SANJANA

P.S: wat other works are of urs...wanna read them too...plz reply...

hey sanjana

thanks for loving my OS
my other words include an OS and two FF i will PM you the links if thats okay with you

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sanjana

@krazzy_parthian

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: sehrmemon

hey sanjana

thanks for loving my OS
my other words include an OS and two FF i will PM you the links if thats okay with you

hell sorry for replying late...

plz...do send me the links asap...would love to read ur work.after reading ur os...