A Fan-Fiction//OurLoveWillHealUs\\Chapter 13(b)! SENT via PM - Page 30

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Posted: 9 years ago
Read both the chapters. Thanks for the pm. Romantic dance,drunk nandu,caring manik😊😊😊all was so good. So abhi aur mukti ka bhi koi connection hai.😲 Waiting to know what is or what was between abhi and mukti. Loved your update.👏👏👏 Pls post the next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
update ws so good...

nandu in drunk state always treat to watch n read too...

really loved ol the looks wale sentences...
Manik was giving nandini...
1) You-Want-To-Get-Admit-In-Mental-Hospital-Right-Now ...
2) Mein-Kahan-Kuch-Keh-Sakta-Hun look...



nandu irritated manik so much in her drunken state n their dialogues were so good...
"Itna time pass karne ke baad bhi bore horhi ho tum..
Seriously?",... HEHEHEE😃🤣

mere jesi hot ladki Kisi ko kiss karne wali ho toh koi ladka backout krega kya?"...🤣🤣 REALLY NANDU KYA BOL RAHI HO... SUBAH JB TUM UTHO GAYI TOH BAHUT EMBARRASS HOGI TUM...
"Lo.. Meri neend kharab karne ke baad khud sogyi... POOR MANIK...
...


long drive... excuse...hahaaha 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
drunk nandu???it was seriously funny...bechara manik,nandu ne apna crazy bate boli bhi to kise?teasing karne wale cabir ko.kiss miss,that means manik is really good,wo use drunk state main kiss nahi karna chahta tha.Seriously,the update was amazing,but present wala track kab ayega???I wanna see that soon.
update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneha_glamarous

update ws so good...

nandu in drunk state always treat to watch n read too...

really loved ol the looks wale sentences...
Manik was giving nandini...
1) You-Want-To-Get-Admit-In-Mental-Hospital-Right-Now ...
2) Mein-Kahan-Kuch-Keh-Sakta-Hun look...



nandu irritated manik so much in her drunken state n their dialogues were so good...
"Itna time pass karne ke baad bhi bore horhi ho tum..
Seriously?",... HEHEHEE😃🤣

mere jesi hot ladki Kisi ko kiss karne wali ho toh koi ladka backout krega kya?"...🤣🤣 REALLY NANDU KYA BOL RAHI HO... SUBAH JB TUM UTHO GAYI TOH BAHUT EMBARRASS HOGI TUM...
"Lo.. Meri neend kharab karne ke baad khud sogyi... POOR MANIK...
...


long drive... excuse...hahaaha 🤣



Hehe.. Thank you so much girl! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hehe.. Thank you so much girl! 😃



I'M GLAD U LIKED IT... U GUYS PUT ON SO MANY EFFORTS... SO BOSS YEH TOH BANTA H...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Manan's convos and moments were beautifully penned. Drunken nandini was amazing her dialogues were mindblowing. Manik's looks as reaction to nandini's statements were phenomenal. Manik got irritated with nandini's behaviour he had a tough time to deal with her😆.the way nandini explained manik about her 3brothers was fabulous. Cabir's entry was at right time. Mananbir's convo was mindblowing lol cabir had a great time of laughing. The way nandini complain about manik to cabir was mindblowing. Poor manik😆.manbir's convos were amazing. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.
Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sneha_glamarous



<font size="5">I'M GLAD U LIKED IT... U GUYS PUT ON SO MANY EFFORTS... SO BOSS YEH TOH BANTA H...</font>



I was very unsure about this update but m glad to know that you all liked it.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Manan's convos and moments were beautifully penned. Drunken nandini was amazing her dialogues were mindblowing. Manik's looks as reaction to nandini's statements were phenomenal. Manik got irritated with nandini's behaviour he had a tough time to deal with her😆.the way nandini explained manik about her 3brothers was fabulous. Cabir's entry was at right time. Mananbir's convo was mindblowing lol cabir had a great time of laughing. The way nandini complain about manik to cabir was mindblowing. Poor manik😆.manbir's convos were amazing. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.

Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊



Tysm. Means a lot! 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Manan scenes were so cute! Nice update!
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Posted: 9 years ago
I knw I m late b late bt kya kru yr exams...
N yes meine wo pm waala part read nai kia h bt on definitely do it once I m free..
N yes kya high condition manik ki mrng mein man nandu hosh mein aayegi n Cabir ki teasings...
Ok so muktbi has part...
Update soon...

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