Manan ff LOVE BRINGS HATRED ALONG(LINK TO THREAD 2/PG1) - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago
Gal iam loving it
The whole mystery makes me think too much abt ur story
Amma death was the biggest shock
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Eagerly waiting for next update
So want to knw how they found her
Aryamann?
Where dhrvlya?
Navya kya sheerni bnni h 😛
Loved the way mukti and cabir r taking care of her
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Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
so much pain and sadness engulfed their lives...
can't wait for all the mysteries to unfold...
can't wait to see hat happens next...
keep up the good work and continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Omg your story is sooo awesome
Just loved it
Red it in one go
U r too good
Cont soon
Please ln m for next update pls
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART-9 NANDINI OR...??

Hey...!!! Extremely sorry... I know I am very very late this time... 7 days late... but what to do... I was overloaded with work... now let's continue with the story...

Hard Rock cafe 12.30 pm-

Cabir: they are not here with us but but are always there with us...

( Manik was confused so he just said to say it all clearly...)

Mukti: manik when nandini was recovering... that we thought that may be we will get her back... we were happy... and by then dhruv and alya had sorted all their problems... they were getting back... and nandini's recovery was a happy moment... so they confessed their love to each other...

Cabir: and just 2 days after their confession nandini got her attack and then amms decided to take her along... and that time alya and dhruv were full of guilt... that day... they decided something which shocked us...

Mukti: they said jab tak hamari wahi hasti hui nandini wapas nai Mil jaati tab tak... hum bhi apna relation aage nai bhadayenge... the day when we will see our nandini happy again that day we will be together... manik tere ek decision ne... naa sirf teri love story ko aadha choda balki dhruv aur alya bhi apni story complete nai kar paye...

(This came as another shock for manik that his friends had to sacrifice their love because of him... he was more guilty now...)

Manik: (blanky) it's all my fault... how can I do this...

Navya:(mockingly) Manik' how can I do this' nai... u have already done this... tum already yeh kar chuke ho... jinko tum takleef mai bhi nai dekh sakte the... tumhare dost aur tumhari star... unhe hi sab se bade ghaav de diye tumne...
Tumhe pata hai aaj dhruv aur ek dusre se sirf professionally milte hai... unki aakhon mai ek dusre ke liye itna pyar hai... par wo aaj bhi apne Un shabdo pe tike hue hai...
(Manik was not looking at anyone he was just looking at the table aimlessly and then asked...)

Manik: vo abhi kaha hai...??
(Just then cabir's phn rang and it flashed dhruv... as manik was looking on the table and Cabir's phn was on the table he saw the name... and pleaded cabir to keep the phone on loud speaker... as he wanted to hear his buddy talking... after such a long time...so cabir agreed and received the phone...)

Cabir on phone...
Cabir: hello !! Haan dhruv...

Dhruv: cabir nandini kaisi hai ... vo theek hai naa... ab... kya hua use... firse usne drugs liye...
(Dhruv asked in one go as he was really worried... for her and here manik's eyes became moist after hearing his voice... )

Cabir: shaant hoyega tab hi toh mai bolunga na... vo ab theek hai kal hi use hospital se discharge kar diya tha... aur fir mai Mukti aur navya khud use chod kar aaye the... uske ghar...

(Then manik became curious... as he was there but he never saw any of them in the house... last night... he saw only nandini entering... then he thought of asking it later...)

Dhruv: oh...!!! Mai yaha fas gaya tha isilye nai pohoch Paya... yaha saari flights cancel ho gayi thi...
( with this manik came to know that dhruv is not with them then where is he right now... and he got his answer...)

Cabir: haan pata chala mujhe Mumbai to London saari flights cancel ho gayi... mai samjh gaya tha fir...
(Cabir purposely said Mumbai as he saw manik's expressions... )
Tu jaldi aa jaa... yaha... bohot zaruri kaam hai...

Dhruv: kya kaam cabir...?? Mai kal tak pohoch hi jaunga vaise bhi...

Cabir: hai tujhe kisi se milaana hai... aur tu bas kal aaja ... and now bye...
(With this cabir cut the phone...and then said to manik...)
He is in Mumbai with his mom... as he didn't wanted to leave her... and settle here... he comes to visit us... and mostly he visits only when we have some work or if nandini is in hospital...

Manik: and where is alya...??

(This question reminded Mukti that that she forgot to inform alya... In all this fiasco... as Cabir informed dhruv and told her to inform alya...)

Mukti : shit...!! I forgot to tell alya about nandini... and then she just picked her phone and dialed Alya's no.

(She kept it on speaker as again manik pleaded...)

Mukti on the phone...

Mukti : hello alya...

Alya: hey Mukti... how's u... and evryone... how's nandini...??

Mukti: actually alya I called to inform u about nandini only...
(With this she told alya everything abt nandini being in hospital)

Alya: Mukti till when she is gonna punish herself because of us... how much she will suffer... I wish sab pehle jaisa ho jaye... and we get our nandini back...

(Alya said this all crying... and here manik also wish the same that everything becomes the same like before... but he knows what he has done cannot be undone so easily... he cannot heal the wounds that he has given... but he will try... and will do whatever it takes to bring everything back to normal... just like the old days...)

Mukti : alya sab theek hoga... ab sab bohot jaldi theek hoga... tu bas kal yaha aa jaa... tujhe kuch dikhana hai...

Alya: Mukti kya hua... u sound tensed... kuch serious hai kya... if it's so then I'll come as early as possible... mujhe aana hi nai chahiye tha is fashion show ke liye...

Mukti: alya tu aaja fir bata ti hu... and don't get hyper... and drive slowly... no need to rush... u just reach by tomorrow... OK... now I'll talk to you later...

Alya: ok bye... and take care of her...

With this they kept phone... and then manik asked... where is alya and this fashion show... ? To which Mukti replied...

Mukti: manik since u left... music also left our lives... we never played together again... dhruv started his career in dance ... I run a NGO ... cabir have his own radio station here... here... and navya is an event manger...and alya is a fashion designer... that's why she is gone to Paris fashion week...

(As manik got to know this he was blank ... as the people for whom music was their reason of existence had now left music... he was now a little unsure on himself whether he will be able to bring them back to their music... whether he will ever be able to bring back fab 5... but he will never loose hope... of bringing them together... so he demanded them to continue... how did they found her here then... )

Flashback-

They tried to find her everywhere... they were in regular contact with chachi for any news about nandini... as now Chacha chachi and Rishabh shifted back to mangalore... for they had to take care of everything there...
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In searching her... around two months passed but they never got a single ray of hope... and the fab 4 was shattered again... as first their protector left and then their angel also left them... they were worried for her...
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In these two months they were searching for her... as well as new ways for themselves as music no longer gave them that same peace... which it used to give... and they found their ways ... and started their careers... as well ...

But they never stopped searching... and then suddenly they found hope to find her...
...
They were sitting together at cabir's flat.. as now this was their common hangout place... just then Navya's phone buzzed and screen flashed nandini's chachi...
And chachi called to inform them that... she had asked some of the people there... and one of them saw nandini taking bus for pune... and then kept the phone... after telling navya to inform her if they find anything about her...
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Then they left for pune together... and searched for her there.. but all went in vain... they didn't found her there also... and they came back... they felt that she has really lost herself among the crowd...
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And then... as they came back to Mumbai... alya got an opportunity... to gear up her career... she was offered to attend a fashion show in London...
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Alya: guys I don't want to go... plz...
(She was convenscing them since one hour but they were not listening to her... as this was really a good opportunity for her... they didn't wanted her to miss that... and then after lots of pleads... dhamkis... and orders... she agreed...
She never knew this trip will bring them to their destination...)
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She left for London... and when she reached there... all the arrangements were already done for her... whether it was transport facility... or the hotel... or her meals... everything was set... this was a three days long event...
Two days went well... it was the third day... the last day... and she was to leave for India the same day... but what she saw made her cancel her tickets and call her friends also there...
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As the fashion show finished she was on her way back to hotel... and she was looking out of the window of her car... just then she noticed a familiar figure walking on the street... all lost... and she just asked the driver to stop the car... and came out of the car to become sure that the one she is seeing is the same one they were searching for since so long... and then she walked up till there... and now she was sure... that it's true... she saw NANDINI...

She thought of approaching her but then dropped the idea ad she can't take the risk to loose her all over again..
So she just followed her... to know where she was going...??? what is she doing here ...?? And then she saw her entering in a cottage type of house... where an old man was sitting in the garden...
She saw nandini going in without talking to that man... but then the man stopped her... and what he said gave her a big shock...
He said... ANAMIKA BETA... U ARE HERE... WHERE WERE YOU... HOW MANY TIMES I HAVE TOLD U TO INFORM AND GO WHERE EVER U WANT... I AM UR FATHER... ATLEAST I HAVE THIS MUCH OF AUTHORITY... TO KNOW WHERE MY DAUGHTER IS... ??? To which nandini or I should say ANAMIKA replied... I JUST WENT FOR A WALK... and went inside the house...and the old man followed her in...
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Alya was shocked... baffled... blank ...
She was not getting how to react... one side she was happy to see her... and other side... she was confused whether it's her or not...??
Thinking this she also left from there and reached her hotel... cancelled her tickets... as now she has to find out everything... then she called her friends and told them everything... about what she saw... and heard...
To which they were also shocked... as how come she reached there...? How she started talking...?? Why was the man calling her Anamika... ?? Then they also decided to go to London and booked their tickets... they didn't informed chachi as they first wanted to be sure themselves... that was it really her...??
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Present-

Manik was again shocked with this new information... and out of curiosity he asked in between not letting them tell further...

Manik: ANAMIKA... why that man called her Anamika... and who was he... and how she reached there...??

Cabir: manik let Mukti atleast continue... then only u will get to know naa... so then... we all left for London... and then on reaching there we straight away went to that place again... but this time we entered inside... the house...

As he was about to continue... just then Navya's phone buzzed... and it was from nandini's place... and she picked it up... as the call cokes only when there is something serious... so she picked up her phone... and other side a lady said... BETA SHE HAS WOKEN UP ... AND IS ASKING FOR HER PACKET... YESTERDAY ALSO I DIDN'T GAVE HER... AND NOW WHAT TO DO...?? then Navya said... DON'T WORRY I AM COMING... with this navya got up and informed them the same and left saying that she will meet them in evening... at home...

All this while manik was curious to know what had actually happened and who called but didn't asked her... as he knew she will come up with another taunt... for him... so he kept mum that time... and as she left he... asked cabir and Mukti... about the lady...
Tho which cabir said...
SHE IS NANDINI'S CARE TAKER... WHO STAYS THERE TILL 5 IN THE EVENING... AND GIVES ALL HER INFORMATION TO US...

Then manik said that TUM LOG KHUD KYU USKE SAATH NAI REHTE... VO AKELEY KYU REHTI HAI...?? AUR VO ABHI BHI DRUGS HI MAANG RAI HAI... ITNI ADDICTION...??

Mukti: kyuki vo kisi ko bhi apne pass nai aane deti... vo Akeley hi reh na chahti hai... uske jeene ke liye uska akelapan hi bohot hai... esa wo soch ti hai... aur drugs manik... vo toh ab roz ka ho gaya hai... do Din se humne use uske drugs lene nai diye... isilye vo aur hyper ho gayi... hai... par hum bhi samjh nai pa rahe ki ab hum kya kare...? Kyuki vo drugs bohot harmful hai... and uska koi treatment bhi nai hai as such...

Manik: koi naa koi toh treatment hoga naa... esa kaise ho sakta hai... ruk mai abhi pata karta hu...

With this he picked his phone and searched for a name in contact list... and as he dialed that number... cabir and Mukti were able to see the name... flashing on the screen... and the name shocked both of them... and they looked at him... just to confirm was it the same person they they were thinking... to which manik just nodded... and Mukti's eyed filled with tears...
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So people here is the update ... and sorry for being late... also the whole mytsery is not revealed still but what to do... I thought of revealing it but... this has already become so big... and my hands are also paining now... so now... please wait for the next update... for further mystery... till then keep thinking...

Why she left for pune...??? And them reached London...?? Who is that old man...?? Anamika...??? Is it nandini or Anamika...?? If nandini then how she started talking...?? Whom did manik call...?? Why Mukti cried then...???

And plz click like if u liked it... and also comment... lamba lamba... as I also gave such a long update...

AMAAYA...😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome plz face off karado
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hea thanks for the pm
So drhuv alya are alive rhank god aha i toh thought they re dead
Silly.me
Story is progressing nicely!
Loving it
Looking forward to more manan scenes though!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Amaya thanks for another wonderful update.
The whole chapter was awesome with lots of details.
My heart goes to Dhruv and Alia. ..
What a sacrifice. .they both are very pure souls.
So much mystery dear..
I like it every detail.
Mukti is narrating the whole thing very good.
Now manik is getting the reality very clearly.
How much he hurts everyone.
You penned every character in very interesting way.
This is one story which I love too read more and more.
This is one very emotional and beautiful story.
I am very glad you update dear.
For readers like me who loves to read emotional stories.
And I just loved it.
Please try to update next chapter soon.
Thanks for sharing this awesome chapter.
Thanks for pm.
Stay blessed dear.






Love..
Jyoti.






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Posted: 9 years ago
wow amazing..but anamika there r so much thing to be revealed...n manik ne kisko ph kia..oh sab messed up
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Posted: 9 years ago
Itnwas just awesome..love..!!!
And yeh Anamika.. What is this..!!! You know what..?? Jaldi se face off karado..!!!
Wait nahi ho raha uska reaction dekhne ke liye..!!!
But then Manik ko Nandini maaf bhi nahi kare..!!!
He's so wrong.. I just don't know what to say..!!!
It was just too much to handle..!!!
😭😭

REGARDS..
ADYA..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi I want to tell you that I love your ff. i feel bad for Nandini and Manik both. Its good to know how everyone cares for Nandini. I wish MaNan come back together soon!! keep writing. Thanks for the Pm and sorry for not commenting before. 😊

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