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PART 2

manik came in between the crowd and stood infront of navya. he was glaring at her which made navya a bit scared.

m=kya horaha ha yeh sab SPACE me??

his voice created complete silence around there. nandini thought its does not look good if navya creates more scene so she proceeded and took the lead

n=woh.. im sorry on behalf of my friend. she has made mistake i agree, but woh ladka humare sath battamizi karraha tha , humne usse kaha ke humara rasta chor de but he didnt..thats why still we are sorry

manik kept on looking at her, she was so simple and innocent. though having no fault she was taking the lead to apologize and to settle down the matter. she did have manners manik thought

m=its okay...

he moved aside and let them come.

c=are yaar kya yahape mela laga ha?? chalo chalo..sab theek ha

everybody started to move. nandini and navya also moved from there but maniks gaze didnt move from her. cabir came to manik

c=tujhe kya hua???

m=huh? kuch nahi chal...

The party was on a bang. loud music, spot lights, drinks everywhere. navya was fully enjoying the party giving thumkas on the dance floor, while nandini was standing with rishab in a corner. she wasnt feeling that much comfortable. rishab gestured that he needs to go to the washroom. nandini wanted to go with him but he insisted that he can go by on his own so nandini stayed back. while looking for the washroom, maniks eyes found rishab

m=are rishab..kaisa ha??

he shook hands with manik and gave him a side hug. manik asked him with whom he had come here but because of the loud music rishab couldnt understand anything so manik took him aside.

na=nandu..chalo nah dance karte ha

n=no navya, um okay aur tum bhi thora careful raho

na=uffo nandu, hum theek ha dekho na kitna accha party ha.. sab humari pasand ke gane baj raheha..hum toa chale dance karne tum bhi ajana badme

n=but navya suno toa... navya toa kuch sunna hi nahi chahti.

nandini stood in a corner and looked around the people. they were so much full of life she thought. suddenly her mind cracked that rishab had gone to the washroom and still he wasnt back. she became worried and began to look for him. while searching nandini reached the empty corridors of the buildings. she was passing by the corridor when she heard some noise coming out from the music room. nandini peeped through the glass side and saw rishab sitting with manik and manik was teaching rishab play the guitar. nandini remembered manik was the same guy whom she saw in the crowd a few minutes before and how come rishab was so much friendly with him. she smiled seeing this as it was rare that rishab would like someone and chit chat and laugh with someone. she was brought back into reality when cabir patted on her shoulder. she turned around and saw him looking at her with a raised eyebrow

n=ab woh...main...i...

c=main... I.. woh... then?? next??? out of speech right???

n=huh???

c=ghabraw mat, main tumhe kha nahi jaunga. fresher?

n=hmm

c=toa?? yaha kya karrahiho?? party toa bahar ha ya phir ajsehi class karneka maan ha??

n=nahi woh actually mera bhai

she pointed towards the room, cabir opened the door and saw manik-rishab laughing and talking.

m=tu yaha??

c=main nahi yeh yaha ayi ha..

cabir moved aside and let nandini in. she was a bit nervous and playing with her fingers. she nervously looked at manik who gave her a smirk. seeing nandu rishab stood up and pointed manik towards her.

m=what????

he again gestured that she was his guardian

m=yeh tumhari behen ha???

rishab nodded and manik smirked looking at nandini

m=hiii...manik, manik malhotra

he forwarded his hand for a shake. nandini thinking for a while shook hands with him

n=nandini murthy.

m=welcome to SPACE

n=thanks

m=tumhara bhai bohot accha ha, usse kabhi kabhi college lekar ana

she gave him a weak smile and nodded

n=rishu, chale???

rishab nodded and gave manik a side hug and bye

m=take care, we'll meet again

rishab and nandini came out of the room and nandini asked rishab how and when did he met manik? rishab told her he met him in the morning and that he is a good guy. nandini gave him a smile

c=kya baat ha? tu bara uske bhai ke sath ghul mil raha tha

m=dont know but... i felt some kind of connection with him like i feel around druv

c=druv??? tera bhai ha woh

m=yaa thats why..yeh sab chor party me chalte ha?? kisiko bakra banaya??

c=nahi yaar party bohot boring horahiha. sab apne ap mehi dance masti karraheha humare lie koi fun nahi ha sivay woh ek pataka ke

m=pataka?? whos that??

c=are wahi...yeh nandini ke sath o dusri ladki thi.. thumke pe thumka mar rahiha..

m=accha?? then chal.. we also see some of her thumkas

manik and cabir joined the party. mukti alya druv were standing in a corner

mu=manik whats ur plan?? tune toa kaha tha ke thori ragging hogi but yaha toa kuch

manik was smirking and tossing some tiny marbles in his hands

c=ab yeh kya ha??

m=it seems that this behenji fresher loves to dance... chalo dekhte ha in marbles ke upar kaise dance karti ha yeh

all four smile and manik throw the marbles on the floor. nandini saw all this standing behind them. she runs to navya to stop her but it was late, navya's feet spinned and she fell down infront of everyone. the spot light was on her and everyone was laughing on her..

n=navya tum theek ho???

nandini rushed upto her and made her stand .. navya was feeling embaressed trying to hide her face. nandinis eyes were stuck on manik who was giving smirks to cabir

"lagta ha kuch zyada hi josh me dance karne laggayi thi"... " Behenji kahiki".. students were passing comments on navya and she ran out of the hall.

n=navya sun toa...

nandini turned to manik but he wasnt there. she looked here and there and saw him near the drinks corner. she went to him and started to shout

n=tumhari problem kya ha ?? tum ne esa kyu kia??

m=chill babes.. itna gussa kyu horahiho? mane kya kia??

n=listen dont act smart okay. tumne floor par marbles throw kiya tha mane dekha tha... kyu kiya tumne esa?

m=oww... relax babes..its just fun. ab thori bohot masti mazak toa hota ha na

n=what?? fun?? masti mazak?? like seriously... kya name ha tumhara manik??? mr manik , yeh koi tareeka nahi ha kisike sath mazak karne ka i mean seriously uss bechari ko sabke samne girake kya proof karna chahte the tum??

m=tum itna hyper kyu horahiho?? kaunsa uska hath per tuta ha and dont worry yeh sab yahape common ha

n=ooww.. look at ur attitude, ekto galti karte ho uparse sorry kehneki jagah tum itna chill aur relax hokar bat karraheho? u no what?? mujhe laga tha ke tum ek acche insaan ho, rishab ke sath tum itne achese behave karrahe the mujhe laga ke shayed tum acche ho but i was wrong tumhare andaar toa koi feelings nahi ha, tumhare liye ek ladki ki izzat kuch nahi ha jisse jab chaho tum apne entertainment keliye use karte ho right??

m=listen ur dragging it a bit further mane esa kuch nahi socha ha tum mujhe bolne toa do..

n=sunne aur bolne keliye tumne kuch baki nahi rakha ha..its ridiculous to talk to u. let it be

nandini gave him a disguised look and left the place. A girl,fresher insulted manik on his face but instead of being angry and out of control he was smirking

m=hmm... shes quite interesting. baki ladkiose different ha

c=woh toa ha... tujhe itna kuch suna ke gayi aur tu yahape khara hokar muskura raha ha

m=pehli baar manik malhotra ke charm par koi ladki fida nahi hui..its strange. she has got some attitude of her own dude

mu=manik whats ur plan?? tune toa kaha tha ke thori ragging hogi but yaha toa kuch

manik was smirking and tossing some tiny marbles in his hands

c=ab yeh kya ha??

m=it seems that this behenji fresher loves to dance... chalo dekhte ha in marbles ke upar kaise dance karti ha yeh

all four smile and manik throw the marbles on the floor. nandini saw all this standing behind them. she runs to navya to stop her but it was late, navya's feet spinned and she fell down infront of everyone. the spot light was on her and everyone was laughing on her..

n=navya tum theek ho???

nandini rushed upto her and made her stand .. navya was feeling embaressed trying to hide her face. nandinis eyes were stuck on manik who was giving smirks to cabir

"lagta ha kuch zyada hi josh me dance karne laggayi thi"... " Behenji kahiki".. students were passing comments on navya and she ran out of the hall.

n=navya sun toa...

nandini turned to manik but he wasnt there. she looked here and there and saw him near the drinks corner. she went to him and started to shout

n=tumhari problem kya ha ?? tum ne esa kyu kia??

m=chill babes.. itna gussa kyu horahiho? mane kya kia??

n=listen dont act smart okay. tumne floor par marbles throw kiya tha mane dekha tha... kyu kiya tumne esa?

m=oww... relax babes..its just fun. ab thori bohot masti mazak toa hota ha na

n=what?? fun?? masti mazak?? like seriously... kya name ha tumhara manik??? mr manik , yeh koi tareeka nahi ha kisike sath mazak karne ka i mean seriously uss bechari ko sabke samne girake kya proof karna chahte the tum??

m=tum itna hyper kyu horahiho?? kaunsa uska hath per tuta ha and dont worry yeh sab yahape common ha

n=ooww.. look at ur attitude, ekto galti karte ho uparse sorry kehneki jagah tum itna chill aur relax hokar bat karraheho? u no what?? mujhe laga tha ke tum ek acche insaan ho, rishab ke sath tum itne achese behave karrahe the mujhe laga ke shayed tum acche ho but i was wrong tumhare andaar toa koi feelings nahi ha, tumhare liye ek ladki ki izzat kuch nahi ha jisse jab chaho tum apne entertainment keliye use karte ho right??

m=listen ur dragging it a bit further mane esa kuch nahi socha ha tum mujhe bolne toa do..

n=sunne aur bolne keliye tumne kuch baki nahi rakha ha..its ridiculous to talk to u. let it be

nandini gave him a disguised look and left the place. A girl,fresher insulted manik on his face but instead of being angry and out of control he was smirking

m=hmm... shes quite interesting. baki ladkiose different ha

c=woh toa ha... tujhe itna kuch suna ke gayi aur tu yahape khara hokar muskura raha ha

m=pehli baar manik malhotra ke charm par koi ladki fida nahi hui..its strange. she has got some attitude of her own dude

c=mujhe esa kyu lagraha ha ke yeh ladki tujhe tuff competition dene wali ha , cause iski bate sunkar mujhe esa nahi lagta that shes those chup chap, ghabrayi hui girls

m=i know..thats why i found her interesting

SCENE SHIFTS

navya was sleeping peacefully and nandini was caressing her hair. it took her one hour to make navya sleep and console her. after making her understand for a long time navya agreed to face everything the next day with a new beginning. nandini switched off the lights and came out of navyas room. she took a glance of rishab also who was also sleeping. then nandini came into her room and lied down on her bed. her first day at college was surely not a good experience she thought. she closed her eyes to sleep but what she saw closing her eyes made her sit up like a jerk

n=woh looser manik ka face mujhe kyu dikh raha ha... hes such a looser and arrogant. ekto galti karta ha uparse attitude sorry bolneka name bhi nahi ha. idiot kahika but why am i talking about that looser???

nandini lies down and closes her eyes tightly but everytime she tries to sleep maniks face appears..after a long time fighting sessions nandini fell asleep.

The Next Morning

nandini and navya came to college. navya was all again cool and jhakkas while nandini was as always calm and quiet. they bid eachother good bye and went to their class rooms. navya was going to her class when she saw a bit smoke coming from the left turning point of the corridor. she thought it might be fire. without thinking navya started to look for water. luckily she saw girls washroom next to her and bought a bucket full of water from the washroom

na=matarani humhe ashirwad do..

and the next thing navya did was splashed the water without even looking or asking. what she saw next left her mouth opened. it was mukti standing all drenched

na=matarani yeh kya hua

mu=you looser... yeh kya kiya tumne??

na=humhe laga ke aag...

mu=what??? aag?? have u lost ur mind?? i was smoking u idiot..seriously tum behenji ho mujhe pata tha but duffer bhi ho i didnt know

na=humhe maaf kardo... humhe nahi pata tha humne socha ke

mu=sochne keliye dimag ki zarurat ha jo unfortunately tumhare pass nahi ha. i dont know how come u loosers got the chance to study in SPACE

SCENE SHIFTS

nandini was sitting in the fourth row third last bench and going through the pages of her book. she felt someone looking at her. she lifted her eyes and turned left and saw manik sitting and smirking at her

n=tum

m=hiii... whats up

she didnt say anything and continued to look at her book. manik too continued staring at her.. nandini was finding it bit irritating.

n=tum mujhe ese ghur ghur ke dekhna band karoge please???

m=nahi

n=what???

m=main tumhe dekhrahahu its my wish. i didnt say u also have to look at me

n=ur sick

m=no im not..

she stood up to change her seat but the teacher entered at that moment and nandu had no other option rather than sit beside manik. the teacher began to call out everyones names.

m=wase... rishab kaisa ha???

she didnt reply anything nor look at him

m=hello..ms murthy, maine pucha ke rishab kaisa ha???

n=accha ha

m=woh kaunsi standard me ha???

n=woh school nahi jata..woh hes here for his treatment.

teacher=you, third last fourth row.. stand up both of u

MaNan stood up. nandini was a bit scared while manik smiling with his so called attitude

teacher=get out of my class.. tum dono yeh lecture nahi attend karsakte

n=mam im sorry woh..

teacher=i said leave..

nandini took her books and came out of the class with tearful eyes. her first lecture was missed cause of manik. manik came behind her calling out her name but she wasnt listening to him

m=nandini suno toa

she stopped and looked at him

n=what?? kya sunu??? tumhari problem kya ha?? kyu mere peeche pare ho??

m=meri baat toa suno... its just a lecture take it easy. tumhe kya pareshani ha notes?? i'll give u ...its my right hands skill

n=manik..tumhare lie yeh sab bohot asaan, easy ha right? kyuki tumhare pass toa bohot paisa ha, name fame yeh sab ha... but main yahapar apni mehnat aur scholarship se ayi hu and i have always got what i want through my hardwork. i dont need ur help or notes. agar kuch karsakte ho then please mera rasta chordo... bye

her words hit his mind. "hardwork", "name", & "fame".. no one ever had taunted manik for all these things ever but he didnt felt any kind of insult or anger in himself. he was touched by her words. she was an open book he thought. her life was simple infront of his .. she had nothing except her brother and her frend. he wanted to talk to her but everytime he would try something bad will happen. but he would talk to her and so he ran behind her. manik reached the stairs and saw her standing down the stairs and talking to a guy. seeing the face of the boy's , maniks blood had risen. he tightened his fist, it seemed that he would outburst at that time. moreover he saw nandini talking to him with a calm and cold expression. as soon as the boy left manik came down, grabbed her arm and pinned her to the door of the room next to the corrider

n=manik yeh kya..

m=ssshh..just listen to me carefully. tum mujhe ek bohot bara damn care, looser , arrogant ladka samajhti ho jo kisiki feelings ki parwa nahi karta ha .. theek ha fine, but listen to me very carefully nandini... jisse tum abhi baat karrahithi stay away from him. i mean it, Stay Away from that B*****D Harshad samjhi tum??

he made his grip a bit tighter and pulled her more closer. her eyes were wide open and lips shaking.

m=im not joking nandini... tum mujhe jaisa bhi samjho but hes not a good guy. trust me on this nandini, just please listen to me and dont talk to harshad... woh theek nahi ha .no one knows him better than me.. trust me

he eyes fixed on his, his hands around her waist and holding her arm. slowly he loosened his grip on her.. she didnt know why but she said

n=i trust u...

her words surprised him. why was he concerned for a girl whom he met just a day before, why did she trusted his words and agreed to stay away from harshad. questions were confusing with no answers..they heard the bell rang and manik immediately left her.

m=wohh.. main... just stay away from harshad nandini

he said in a calm voice this time and left the room. he came to the cafe and saw fab4 sitting. he joined them giving them a casual smile

c=god mukti..seriously that behenji..it was an epic

mu=tu has raha ha cabir?? mera bass chalta toa usse...

a=chill out mukti

dr=ha mukti let it be...shes a bit simple thats why

mu=druv...simple nahi shes a gawar.. okay??? and cabir tu hasna band kar. manik tujhe pata ha kya hua ha??

manik was lost in his thoughts, what happened a few minutes ago , he was standing so close to her, he could still smell her scent in himself

c=oye tujhe kya hua??
m=huh?? nothing..

a=manik..are u okay??

m=ya um fine...

mu=yeh sab chor..guys chalo nah hum club chalte ha. we'll get some refreshments.

m=mera mood nahi ha

dr=buddy ur fine right??

m=ha buddy...mere sarme dard ha... i think i need some rest.

c=tu pakka sirf headache ha??

m=ha...tum log jaw club i'll join u guys later on bye

manik didnt want any more questions so he got up and left the canteen. he was walking through the corridors when he saw nandini standing infront of the notice board. she was looking through the "vacancy" part but having a disappointed heart she left.

m=hmmm... she needs a job

SCENE SHIFTS

na=chinta mat karo nandu..hum tum milke koi job dhundenge

n=chinta kaise na karu navya?? rishab ka treatment bhi toa shuru karna ha nah..phir

peon=ms nandini..apko library me bulaya gaya ha

n=mujhe?? theek ha ma ati hu

na=library kyu??

n=pata nahi...maine mam se pucha tha woh ke job sections ke bareme shayed kuch information dene keliye.tum chalo main ati hu

na=jaldi ana

nandini comes to the library

n=mam apne mujhe bulaya

librarian=yes nandini..tumne uss time pucha tha ke besides being a student kya tumhe koi job iss stage pe mil sakti ha kya, i thought for a while and as ur a brilliant student and studying here on the basis of scholarship i can offer u one job

n=sach mam?? please batayiye nah..any job would work

librarian=keeping ur class hours aside, u can help me as the assistant of librarian. but tumhe uske lie har din kamsekam library me guzarna parega and for that you'll get 3000 , karogi??

n=mam... i'll definitely do..thank u so much mam... main kalsehi ajaungi

librarian=theek ha, kal tumhare break times par ajana.

n=okay mam thank u.

nandini came out of the library with a happy face thanking her ayippa.. as soon as she left manik came out of between the shelves and thanked the librarian.

m=thank u mam.. u helped her

librarian=its okay manik and um glad ke tumne uske bareme itna socha infact ma bhi uski help karna chahti thi bad yeh idea mere dimag me bhi nahi aya.

m=she needs the job and money for herself, her frend and her brother... anyways thanks mam i'll see u

nandini was standing outside the library , hearing this through the window

n(to herself)=yeh kaisa insaan ha?? ek taraf itna damn care, attitude dikhata ha, kisi cheeze ki parwa nahi karta aur dusri taraf... meri madat karraha ha... kkabhi kuch aur kabhi kuch aur...manik its hard to understand u.

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