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wow nice update the conversation btw cabir n manik was 👍🏼.he is a true friend who will be always loyal to manik he knows abt him ...n read his face ...nandani 's dress awesome her first hug loved it they will go out after their performances ...👏

Wow that was awesome one
ANTWAYS now waiting for some action
If harshad is doing anything Ik he will do
But plzz don't bring our Nandu performance n Hold n don't ruin der first outing also
Continue soon
Eid Mubarak

and your super late reader is again back to comment...i just simply loved the chapter..i loved the convo between cabir and manik...the way he explainde him and their talk was worth reading...and moreover their fist hug and she took the lead...wow...and that last convo between manik and nandini was somethin i liked very much. the way he asked her to come out with her...
thanks for the pmm..do pm nxt time also

lots of love
Manan

plz update next part dear ...
waiting... 👏

This was something really interesting..

Beautiful..
Missing manbir alot..
Their bonding was really adorable..
Loved it.
Cont soon.

awesome update

Hey when will you update next? Its been some time now...waiting eagerly...
Love
Arunima

Oh god please performance achhe se ho jae bas.

SORRY FOR THE LATE UPDATE. I'M SORRY BECAUSE I'M BUSY WITH MY STUDIES AND TO UPDATE A BIG CHAPTER IT TAKES TIME THAT'S WHY I TAKE A BIT TIME TO POST THE NEXT PART. THANKS FOR ALL YOUR COMMENTS AND RESPOND IN THE PREVIOUS CHAPTERS. HERE IS THE AWAITED CHAPTER , TALENT PARADE DAY 😊 HOPE YOU ALL WILL LIKE IT. DO READ HAPPILY, LIKE, COMMENT AND LOVE

PART 16

Manik entered the jamm room and found rest of the gang all ready dressed perfectly for the talent parade. his smile was the sign for cabir that he was now okay.

m=sorry guys.. i was unavailable last night

mu=manik tu kabse itna formal hogaya i mean seriously theek ha yar chill

a=and we are ready for the performance

c=yes... fab5 is ready to bang the floor

m=so guys group hug???

manik stretched his hands and immediately he was hugged by rest of them. they stood there like this for sometime and then headed towards the backstage. First number was harshad's. he was going towards the stage when passed fab5. manik glared at him and harshad gave him a smirk

a=all the best bhai

alya said in a polite tone.

h=thanks but no thanks alya. cause as far as i know you guys need this all the best more.

manik rolled his eyes and alya felt bad hearing his taunt

a=bhai..atleast not today please

m=leave it alya... if ur brother loves to day dream then let him do that

mu=exactly alya and wasebhi harshad has a good record of loosing from fab5 right harshad???

h=mukti tum..

a=bhai..please dont create a scene or else main apko kuch kehdungi.please just leave. it was my mistake to wish u luck.. its all my fault

alya left from there in tears. druv went behind alya

h=all the best manik..

manik didnt say anything and began to talk to cabir. harshad left from there passing an evil smirk.

before going towards the stage harshad dialed a number and

h=you know what to do aur ha mera performance khatam honese pehle kaam hojana chahiye

...

Fab 5 were standing in the backstage and waiting for their turn. manik wanted to meet nandini but as his friends were around he was not being able to escape from there. so instead of meeting, he texted her. Nandini was sitting in the green room with navya when her phone beeped

Sorry can't come to meet, everyone is around-- Manik

nandini smiled and texted back

It's okay. concentrate on your performance. Best of luck :) -- Nandini

c=kya karraha ha tu?

m=kuch nahi..

...

Green room.

n=navya hua kya tumhara makeup?? chalo abhi second turn tumhara ha

navya who was doing her touch up for the last thirty minutes and nandini was standing with an irritated look

na=bass hogaya

n=navya tum chal rahiho ya phir main khud akeli jau???

na=ek kam karo tum jaw.. hum bass abhi aye

n=navya seriously i mean...

na=uffo nandu samjho na.. humara dance ha toa humhe thora toa accha dikhna parega nah

nandini sighed in disbelief

n=accha theek ha.. main backstage ki taraf jarahihu tum bhi ajaw jaldi se theek ha?

na=theek ha

nandini came out of the green room and was heading towards the backstage when suddenly she felt two strong hands covering her eyes and mouth and pulling her somewhere. she started to move her hands trying to rescue herself but the grip on her mouth was tighter than hers. she felt her eyes being tied with a cloth and then it was her mouth and hands ..her heart skipped thinking what was happening with her, why would someone try to kidnap her or harm her, were was manik?? yes she was calling out his name but unfortunately her mouth was covered and he wasnt there with her. tears were flowing from her eyes and she was continuously trying to open her hands

"humhe isse go down me leke jana ha, yaad ha na sir ne kaha tha " ..

"ha lekin sambhal kar.. kisine dekh liya toa" ..

"ek kaam karte ha isse yehi chor kar jate ha. bahar bohot log ha.. isse leke jayenge toa pakre jayenge. wasebhi iske hath , mu pe toa tape laga dia ha.. yeh bahar nahi ja payegi"

...

It was now time for navya's performance. she was dancing on "radha"

c=yaar this madhubala... dances well i must say

mu=ya cabir.. talent ha isme. i mean now-a-days its really hard to find someone dancing so well that too classical type thing

while everyone were cheering and enjoying navya's performance manik was looking here and there trying to figure out were nandini was. he dialed her number for three four times but she was not taking the call. he was about to go in search for her but

dr=buddy... need ur help

m=kya hua buddy??

dr=woh.. mera guitar string.. not able to fix it.

m=okay come.. i'll help you.

...

nandini was kept in an empty class room, tied up and thrown in one corner. as her hands, legs everything was tied it was hard for her to move or make any sound. moreover her mouth was also sealed up with tape.

n(to herself)=ayippa.. yeh kaise problem me phass gayi main? please meri help karo.. meri performance ka time horaha ha.. manik, manik mujhe dhund raha hoga.. i cant let him down ayippa. he has so much expectations from me, how can i not sing today?? ayippa..please abhi ap koi rasta dikhaw. please. save me ayiappa.

...

navya came to the backstage and met fab5

c=miss madhubala

cabir started and navya rolled her eyes

c=the dance was superb

he said in a polite tone which surprised navya. he gave her a normal smile and she too smiled back

na=thank u very much. glad ke ap sabko accha laga

c=nahi seriously ur quite good dancer

a=ya thats true.

na=thanks

mu=come on guys.. its our turn now. manik aur druv kaha reh gaye?

dr=we are here mukti

manik saw navya but before he could ask her about nandini she left from there and mukti dragged m(to himself)=nandini kaha ha?? kitni der se dikhi nahi..

na=uffo..yeh nandu kaha reh gayi??humne toa usse backstage me ane ko kaha tha.. woh toa mr india ke jaise gayab hi hogayi.

...

the room was dark and nandini was lying in one corner of the room. she tried to move her hands and legs but they were tightly tied up. moreover her mouth was also sealed up. the corridor was also empty as everybody were busy in the backstage and rest of them were in the auditorium. tears were continuously dwelling from nandini's eyes. suddenly she heard footsteps

na=nandu ... nandu kaha ho tum???

n(to herself)=navya!!! please meri help karo..please navya... please yaha ao

na=kaha ha yeh ladki?? green room??? check karti hu

...

On the other hand, fab5 were performing on "Yaro Dosti" . even though manik was not letting his tension and distraction be visible on his face, still he was looking towards the back stage every now and then, hoping she would come and watch him performing but she wasnt there. he wanted to look for her but he couldnt leave the performance like this. manik's tension was not hidden from cabir. he noticed the stress on his face, the frown , anxiety which was making him look a bit worried. cabir guessed it was something related to nandini and waited for the performance to end first.

him to the stage.

Finally after the performance ended fab5 headed back towards the backstage. manik was about to look for nandini but a peon came and told that the principal wanted to meet him now

m=guys i'll be back now.

a=mukti.. come with me na, mujhe washroom jana ha

mu=alya tu jaa na, this my guitar..dont know yeh strings loose hogaye ha

a=accha theek ha, i'll be back guys

...

"so guys, i hope all of you enjoyed Fab5 performance very much. moving towards the end.. our last performance is from our new member, presenting nandini murthy" the anchor announced and everybody started to cheer and clap. manik reached the back stage.

c=manik nandini kaha ha?? uska name announce hua ha..

m=kaha ha matlab?? usse toa stage pe hona chahiye tha..

c=ha par she is not here...

m=kaha reh gayi??

mukti and druv found it a bit weird manik being worried for someone else except fab5. he dialed nandini's number but it was unreachable. suddenly they heard the audience clapping and a sweet melodious voice singing

Mere chote chote khwab hain

Khwabo mein geet hain

Geeto mein zindagi hain

Chahat hain preet hain

Manik cabir druv and mukti rushed towards the stage and saw nandini standing and singing. alya also joins them along with navya. watching her finally on the stage manik was now relief

Abhi main na dekhu khwab woh

Jinme na tu mile

Le khole hoth maine

Abtak the jo seele

Nandini looks at manik and smiles. he too smiles and shows her his thumb indicating best of luck which makes her smile even more wider. she was even more confident now. manik's dad who was siting on the judge's position saw manik's face glowing while nandini was looking at him

Mujhko na jeetna mujhpe

Utna iss dilko tujhpe

Hone laga aetbaar

Nandini remembers all the moments from the very beginning of the college till now she spent with manik, their fights, their unspoken friendship, his care for her, her support towards him , in one word Everything !

Tanha lamhome apne

Bunti ho tere sapne

Tujhse hua mujhko pyaar

His smile and happiness knew no bounds as if he himself was singing there. watching her singing so beautifully made him proud of her . unknowingly he knew those lyrics which she was singing were for him. even nandini didnt except the fact but but yes she was singing for him. a way to express her thanks gratitude and FEELINGS

Puchungi tujhko kabhi nah

Chahu main ya na

Teri khwabo me ab jeena

Chahu main ya na

As soon as the song finished, his claps were not stopping as well as his smile was not fading away. the judges stood up giving her a standing ovation. cabir looked at manik and gave a smile to himself. those who were standing with manik at that time found it a bit weird but yes even they also clapped for nandini as she sang very well. her eyes became teary as she thanked her ayippa for making her performance a memorable one and finally her eyes met his. both smiled at eachother and nandini headed towards the backstage.

c=nandini...u were fantastic i mean just superb. kya gaya tumne??

navya ran up to nandini and hugged her tightly

na=pehli aur akhri baar.. hum iss cabir ke bat se sehmet ha.. nandu tum toa chaa gayi ekdam

manik was just watching her while everyone were praising her. alya joins them and seeing alya nandini hugs her. this was a surprising scene for everyone including manik.

n=thanks alya.. thank u so much

nandini broke the hug and both smiled

a=its okay nandini..um glad ke tum perform kar payi...

mu=ek minute..kya horaha ha?? tum dono kuch bologe please???

alya and nandini exchanged looks and then looked at them.

Alya's POV

i was going to the washroom once our performance was over. suddenly i heard some noise, pehle maine socha ke mera vehem ha..par nahi, it was something very strong sound. then suddenly kuch geera... it was coming from one of the classrooms which were at the end of the corridor. as i was walking closer to the classroom, sound aur bhi clear sunai de raha tha... the door was locked. "koi ha andar??? hello!!! " i called... knocked on the door yeh soch ke shayed koi andar phass gaya ha... jaisehi mane awaz di.. i heard something being banging inside the wall. mujhe sure hogaya ke andar kuch garbar ha.. i tried to open the door but it was locked. i found it surprising as classroom was locked? how come?? "hang on".. i said and began to look for something,idhar udhar dhunda.. nahi mila. luckily store room pass mein tha and i found a rod there.. somehow i managed to break the lock and what i saw inside ... "Nandini" i screamed.. woh waha zameen par pari hui thi... uske hath per muu sab bandhe hue the, she pushed the the chair with her tied legs and woh gie gaya... i ran up to her and began to untie her. in the mean time navya bhi usse dhundte hue agayi..

a=nandini tum yaha kaise???

nandini was coughing badly. navya hugged her tightly and rubbed her back. alya bought water from the outside filter.

a=nandini..hua kya ha??

na=alya... abhi nahi hum badme baat karnege, nandini ka name announce horaha ha stage par..

a=ha nandini u should go..

n=alya thanks... than...

a=nandini yeh sab badme..u should go and perform first.

...

a=this is it guys...

all of them were shocked. manik couldnt just move his eyes from her. thats why he was having bad feeling, she was in some kind of problem and he couldnt protect her. but her eyes were assuring him that she was fine

dr=but yeh sab hua kaise... i mean.. nandini yeh sab kisne kia??

nandini lowered her gaze.. this made manik even more desperate to know the name who did all this.

c=bolo nandini..kisne kiya yeh sab??

after a big pause in the back stage... finally nandini stated

n=it was harshad...

"Harshad" it was enough for manik to dig his grave. he always knew harshad wants to hurt him but this time he took nandini's advantage to hurt manik, to make him feel low, to win. manik couldnt expect or even think he could stoop so much low to win against him. alya could now no more meet anyone's eyes specially nandini's. mukti gritted her teeth and uttered some deathly words for him while cabir was staring at manik who knew he would blast in any moment.

mu=woh..jerk... but... tumhe kaise pata???

Nandini's POV

jab un goons ne mujhe tied up kiya, i heard them talking ke sir ne kaha mujhe yaha rakhneko. then suddenly one of their phone rang and he said "harshad sir ka phone ha" and went outside to talk. thats when i understood ke yeh sab

a=i just cant believe this..

alya began to back off but druv held her and pulled in a side hug

dr=alya...no need to feel guilty. tumhara koi fault nahi ha.. tumne toa help ki nandini ki

n=ha alya, isme tumhara koi dosh nahi ha... im grateful to u ke tumhari wajase aj main perform kar payi..warna i had lost hope

a=i cant believe ke bhai... itna gir sakta ha...

manik was about to leave to find harshad but nandini came in front of him

n=manik please... please kuch esa mat karo jisse tum problem me phass jaw

the frown anger on his face and hands turned into fist..

m=nandini... just move aside..

cabir came in between

c=dude...its not the correct time. we'll settle down with harshad later on. right now alya needs us more

cabir knew this would pull him back as for manik his friends were more important. manik looked at alya who was sobbing in guilt. he went to her and pulled her in a side hug

m=alya... its not ur fault.please khudko doash mat do.

"all the participants of talent parade please come upon the stage"

na=hum sabko stage me jana chahiye...

...

fab5 and navni were standing in one corner and harshad on the opposite side. manik was ready to kill him right there and harshad was just not getting how come nandini was there. the winners were announced and as per as the record, FAB5 won the title of "Winner of talent parade-2015" and nandini won the award of "Performer of the Year-2015" they received the awards from the principal and manik's dad. but manik didnt have the real smile rather was showing a fake smile on his face. nandini knew she needed to talk with manik but was not being able to as everybody was with her

n(to herself)=ayippa..please manik shant hojay.. i just dont want any more fights between him and harshad. please ayippa, dont let manik do anything wrong,