Manik & Nandini-Stars & Fireflies Part 56 on Page 145 - Page 53

Originally posted by: apps33

AHHH... This alya... She nva gets enough of her stupid plans right...

I swear if i was nly allowed one murder it wud b her... N nxt half murder wud hve been of her partner dhruv... Those stupid brainless ppl...

Itna b kya koi bewaquf ho sakta h kya...!?

Like really wer on earth hv they lost their brains... Well wereva it is it wud b gud if dey get it soon...

My poor nandu has to suffer bcoz of dem... Bechari...

N our hero manik atlast managed to speak up about deir brk up... Bt dhruv d grt... Had already managed to ruin it all fr him...

How can he b so selfish... Dat DUMBO TOPIWALA...

How much evr our manan try to sort things out... Dis topiwala n dat bimbo hv to b der to mess up evrythng...

N now bcoz of dem evn manik is gonna have a hard time convincing nandu... Coz aftr seein n hearin all dis... She sure wud find it difficult to trust him. . ...

My poor babbies...

I just hope manik manages to manaofy her soon...

N evn dj knocks sum brains in him so that he can confront alya once n fr all n give her a final peace of mind to stay away... She needs it... N it will b evn more fun if it happens in frnt of all...

Nly den she can get sum brains

N poor cabir. ... Evn he'll have a hard time pataofying navya... Whos head ovr heels fr harshad...

I so want thngs to get fine btw them... Plz do sumthn... Plz pretty plzz

N ya .. Dnt frget to cont soon

Originally posted by: HTA111

Wow mindboggling wonderful update

He seems so much engrossed in her that he wants to forget his surroundings so that he can be with her only oh god damn aliya why she has to be that much ass spoiled his birthday gift for him his Nandu which he needs anyway

I just hope manik make a move now to make her understand that he has nothing for aliya anymore as he is in love with her

Can't wait for next part continue soon and thanks for pm

Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI

Amazing update di. U forget to pm but its ok. And chap was awsome but dhruv and aliya they r so annoying but i hope things got sorted between manik and nandini soon.

Originally posted by: cute-aly

specially for dhruv and aliya



i hope dhruv ko jald hi samajh a jae but in aliya 's case i think some cases are impossible


waiting for next

Originally posted by: ananya0908n

GOD!!!!!!!!!

I wanna kill alya and alya and dhruv!!!

why?? why always they need to come between them??!!

I am so angry!! 😡

but anyways beautifully penned down!!

your ff is now one of the most wanted ffs in this forum!!

it had to be!!

your story and writing skills are incredible and way too much brilliant!!

the way you write mesmerizes me and brings a smile on my face!!

actually not me only, a smile on the faces of all the readers of your ff!!

you and your ff is incredible

where from you get so much ideas and skills yaar??!!

you always manage to amaze me be your updates!!

do you know girl how awesome you write??!!

just a way too awesome!!

I don't have words for your ff!!

extra beautiful and extra alluring!!

your ff has the power to make my day!!

actually you have done that several times!!

thanks!! thanks a lot for that!!

I am so much in love with your ff!!

your ff attracts me and makes me delightful in my boring and sad moments!! it makes me extra happy several times!! actually all the times!!

however much I complement you its always less!!

because you are beyond expectations girl!!

I am just so addicted to your ff!!

please make manik-nandini together as one!!

dying to see them!!

I am so angry on dhruv and alya!!

can't alya mind her own business!! god!! she is a freak girl and she is so irritating!!

and dhruv!!is he gone??? like really!!! I am fed up of them!

but coming to the a point what's a story without a villain!!

so never mind!!

your ff is superb going and amazing!!

keep it up girl!!

thanks for the pm!!

thanks for your lovely and sweet updates!!

thank you thank you thank you so much!!

update soon

waiting eagerly!!

love you and your update

-Ananya

😊

Originally posted by: sunshinesweta

Ahha..Thanks for such a review..you know you are amazing...Your comments make me smile instantly...

Now hold your guns gal..there is something after which Alya and Dhruv won't even make it to your hitlist

Manik & Nandini - Stars & Fireflies 36

Manik took Nandini in his arms pulled her close, so close that he could hear her heart beat and her heart was beating quite fast and it increased his heart beat.. He held her tightly and admired her beauty and how she shivered and curled up every time he touched her came close to her.. He went near her ear felt her silky hair and said "I've broken up with Alya.." Manik's words broke Nandini's trance she opened her eyes and looked at him all confused.. Flashes of her and Manik, Alya's confrontation and most importantly Manik and Alya's kiss jolted Nandini and then she remembered what Dhruv said to her "Manik and Alya are like this only they fight a minute and make up the next.." Tears swelled her eyes, she couldn't stand their anymore. She pushed Manik away and ran...

Manik was confused why did she ran away but this time he was not in the mood to let her go so he followed her.. DJ saw all this and got nervous but for once she wanted Manik to charge of his life and seek what he wants and deserves...Everyone else was busy in their own dance and partners oblivious to what's heppening around.. Cabir was having gala time with Navya teaching her how to dance and for once even Navya enjoyed his company.. Harshad and Mukti were sorting or rather fighting out their stuff.. But there was one couple who was not interested in their own dance and they were Dhruv and Aliya.. They were keeping a constant eye on Manik and Nandini but as destiny would always get what it wants they somehow missed Manik and Nandini as they went out...

Nandini was running aimlessly and Manik was following her.. "Nandini.. Nandini.." Manik shouted as the distance between him and Nandini reduced.. Finally Manik caught hold of her hand and pulled her back.. Nandini turned around with a jerk and stopped.. Now both Manik and Nandini were facing each other and both were breathless.. Nandini was trying to break free from Manik.. "Let me go Manik.." She struggled but Manik was not in the mood to let her go this time, he held both her hands and pushed her close to him Nandini banged against Manik's hard chest.. "What is wrong with you Nandini? Why aren't you letting me explain?" Manik's patience levels were going down... "What do you wanna explain Manik?" Nandini asked as she looked into his eyes.. "I have broken up with Alya dammit so why can't you understand that?" Manik was frustrated... "Really Manik? have you actually broken up with Alya because what I heard you and Alya always break up and make up too.." Nandini expressed her insecurity.. "And who told you that?" Manik asked

"Dhruv" Nandini blurted out the truth in anger leaving Manik shocked how can his buddy, his best friend say this when he very well knows that Manik broke up with Alya for good.. "Do you trust me or Dhruv Nandini?" Manik asked.. "How much do you know Dhruv and how much do you know me?"

"Why did you break with Alya; Manik I wanna know.." Nandini wanted anwers.. "For you dammit.. I can't be with her.. I wanna be with you Nandini.." Manik ranted out his frustration... "Why do you want to be with me, why can't you see my tears, why do you come so close to me that i go helpless Manik.. I go weak on my knees.." Nandini questioned him.. "Why does my trust matter to you and why do I break when I see you with Alya.. "For the same reasons that I do.." Manik replied.. "Let me go Manik.." Nandini started fighting with him again trying to break free while Manik kept looking at her.. "Why won't you leave me.." Nandini kept struggling while Manik's grip on her kept tightening..

Suddenly Manik let go off her hands and grabbed her by her waist.. "Manik what are you doing?" Nandini was hitting Manik with her hands but Manik didn't budge.. He moved closer to Nandini, she tried moving away but couldn't do so... Before Nandini realized what was happening she found two warm lips pressing and kissing her soft and cold lips; it was Manik kissing Nandini.. Nandini tried resisting Manik but he kept kissing her.. Manik bit her lower lip which forced her to open her mouth and soon she found Manik's tongue exploring every corner of Nandini's mouth...

After her initial resistance Nandini finally gave into her desires... As her fightback reduced her moans increased... Manik stopped and pulled his lips out of her mouth.. He looked at her, Nandini's eyes were closed, cheeks were flushed as she was clutching his shoulders.. Manik went near her, caressed her lips with his lips before getting into her mouth this time without any resistance from Nandini... With every stroke of kiss that Manik had Nandini experienced something new for the first time..

As Manik moved his hands vigorously on her back exploring each corner of her mouth making them both breathless Nadini's hands were digging into Manik's hair at the nape of his neck occasionally digging into his flesh too.. As Manik kept on kissing her Nandini slowly lifted her left leg in the classic Victorian style which accidentally switching on the lights of the garden.. As destiny would have it Manik and Nandini shared their first passionate kiss under a starry night amidst a illuminated garden where every tree and branch was illuminated with lights and they stood right next to a kissing fountain sharing their moment of passion...

End of Part 36...