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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 28
IN MALL NEAR NANS
Nans suddenly felt smone hot breath near her hair she knew it was manik She turned around saying
Nans: WTH r u doin here
Manik: tumna mujsa juut kyu kaha
Nans: who r u to ask me this
Manik: answer me first
Nans: n y do u think il answer u n starts ignore him n goes towards the trial room
On the way manik was shouting nans name
An Aunty sees them
Aunty: ladki ko chadtha hai sharam nahi hai kya
Manik: kon ma oh hello she's mu gf
Nans: kon ma Aunty I dont even know him
All ppl started to gather around manik bcm tensed
Manik: Nandini this is not a time to joke
Nans: excuse me... fr ur information my name is nans not nandini
Every one around bcm angry N started scolding manik
Manik: excusme listen... Arra... Plzz...
Smhow he moves out frm Dr he sees nans going in dressing room
Manik goes into the room Bfr she closes
Nans: manik kya hai
Manik: so u don't know me
Nans: wt just go out frm here
Manik: Wts the problem ithna gussa kyu ho
Nans: or nahi toh kya wt do u expect me to do like tum Apna frns kaliya Kuch bhi karssktha ho n i dont hv frns
Manik: listen I didn't meant that (he says in a slow tone )
Nans: nahi manik I know u were worry about me but vn u talked to me the attitude u hv na I hate it I just hate it
She removes the door n walks out
MEANWHILE NEAR SID
Mukti :were u trying to hide frm me
Sid: no y do u think so vaisa tum yaha kaisa
Mukti :vo Aliya she's a fashion freak toh ma uska saath aaye hu so let me see wt did u buy
Sid bags were filled with all the pink n red heart stuff he didn't want mukti to see all them as surprised will be spoiled
Sid: nothing (he was hiding)
Mukti: ab toh dhekna hi padega
Sid starts running frm Dr n mukti starts running behind him in other side nans is running frm manik n manik her behind
Sid runs n reaches ZARA shop in which nans was hiding frm manik both meet eachother n sid handover all the stuff to nans
Nans frm Dr catching the heavy stuff n went into choclate room as everything was in the mall she saw manik Dr She left the stuff Dr n went into the washroom vn she came out Manik was already sitting on her bags place nans walks to him
Manik thinking: maybe nans wants to gv a surprise to me so she brought all the stuff
Nans: manik ab kya
Manik: listen I'm sorry ( he goes on his knees n says sorry)
Nans sees mukti n remember the plan as per the plan mukti shldnt know dt they r here
Nans: ohhh... Shit...
Manik: wt
Nans: manik plz take care of my baggage il be here in few hours
Manik: hours...
N nans leave frm Dr running without getting caught to mukti
Mukti enters the choclate room n sees manik with all girly stuff around
Mukti: is this ur stuff manik...
Manik: wt... No... Yesss... It's mine
As nans warned him not to tell anyone abt the stuff
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Too sweet continue soon and he will think that the stuff is for him but he didn't know that she bought it for her friend to propose mukti oh god what will happen
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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
PART 29
Manik: wt . No .. . Yes... .This is Myne
Mukti: vaisa sid ka pas bhi same bags they
Manik :Matlab sid yaha hai
Mukti :ya n uska bags tumara pass kaisa
Manik: no way these r Myne I bought them
Mukti: chill it's ok
Nans reaches sid
Sid: u know mukti got to know dt im here
Nans: wt n she's in mall n bags r near manik n mukti iss NEAR MANIK... (she freaks out)
Sid: ab kya kara
Nans calls to mukti
Nans: hey hi Nans here
Mukti: Hi Vr r u
Nans: I'm in home
Mukti: ur in home
Manik was shocked as y is she lying to mukti
Mukti: I saw sid here
Nans: actually I want u to cm near RAINBOW GARDEN TOMORROW NIGHT plzz dont say no plzzz
Mukti: okkk
Nans: dresses up like a doll ok
Mukti: but y anyways il be there
Nans: byeee
Mukti cuts the call N manik
Manik: wt was she telling
Mukti: it's a secret (nans told her dt it's. A secret n not to tell anyone)
Manik: plzzz yaar
Mukti: byee
Mukti leaves frm Dr
Manik gets msg frm nans: manik chup chap vo pura saman leka gharr aajav plzzz
Manik leaves to nans house Nans was completely busy n ignore manik Manik was. In his own thoughts dt nans is giving her a surprise
Nxt part as soon as possible
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N thanks fr all of them who r liking my Story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
I'm loving it plzzz continue soon plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85
Wow Manik is thinking that the surprise is for him.
Continue soon.liking ur story
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
Aww poor soul thinking that surprise is for him its really getting interesting continue soon and I think she should tell him abt sid liking mukti or else its going to be huge set of misunderstanding
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87
So cute... such confusion...wonder what will happen next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
PART 30
Manik was on his own thoughts that nans was planning a surprise fr him
Nans n manik both were in the room she was busy talking in phone
N manik was roaming behind her
Nans: wt?????
MANIK: wt wt
Nans: listen manik thanks fr bringing all the bags
Manik: ur most welcome
Nans: so byeee
Manik: vaisa my fav colour is black n red
Nans: Y r u telling this
Manik: just like dt
Nandini: ur acting weird today I'm busy now byeee
N sends manik out
NXT DAY AFTERNOON
Sid: Nans I informed the manager of rainbow Park
Nans : or lights
Sid: check
Nans: n... Am I missing something... Ohhh... Sh**...
Sid: wt hpnd
Nans: luk at u ur not at all ready
They get ready to go to mens parlour fr getting sids new haircut
Nans was just about to move frm the door dn manik appears frm the front
Nans: manik tum yaha
Manik: actually I wanna talk to u
Nans: ok cn u meet me in rainbow Park at 8:00pm
Manik: fine (he thinks dt the surprise is Dr )
FINALLY ITS THE TIME OF NANS SPECIAL DATE PLAN FR SID N MUKTI
Mukti reached rainbow Park she was dressed in a crop top in black n black jeans in her high boot heels
Nans n sid was watching her frm a distance
Mukti was seeing the background decoration it was of everything filled with red n pink hearts n her photo frames of huge sized. Everything Dr was so magical fr her
Nans: go sid it's time
Sid: r u sure if she says no
Nans: I'm Dr na go on
Sid goes to mukti
Mukti: Hi sid tum yaha
Sid: hi ma...
Mukti: aaj to mera bday bhi nahi hai toh yeh sabkuch kya hai
Suddenly manik enters in between there conversation
Mukti n sid: manik tum yaha
Nans: ohhh God manik yaha inka beech...
Nans immediately go between them
Mukti n sid: Nans tum yaha
Nans: m sorry sorry sorry sorry Manik... Tum yaha kya karrahaho
Manik: pehela ya batav ye dono yaha kya karrahehai
Mukti: wooo... Wts goin on here
Every one was so confused n every one were shouting specialy manik n nans r shouting
Sid in a loud voice: STOP IT...
Sid: mukti I love you ya I love you (by saying this 3 magical words he calmed him self)
Mukti Nans n manik were he'll shocked
REASONS
Manik: wth is sid talking
Nans: Y did he propose in this way
Mukti: wt...
Mukti ran out frm there
Sid went her behind
He catches her hand
Sid :mukti plzz listen to me
Mukti: I just don't know wt to say
Sid: firs listen to me i know wt hpnd in ur past but trust me I dont care abt it all the things I care is abt u I promise neve ever hurt u (he goes on his knees) I wanna marry u plzzz be mine I promise il never leave u alone plz just trust me once just gv me a chance fr taking care of u fr this life plzzz
Mukti had tears in her eyes n says YES...
Sid was thinking Dt shel reject him n he thought dt she said no
Sid: it's ok maybe I wasn't that lucky
Mukti: idiot I said YES
Sid: say wt
Mukti: yes yes yes...
Sid hugs her tight
Dts fr now hope u like it
Plz do rply

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Posted: 10 years ago
#89
Wow nice update.confusion confusion n finally mukti said yes .
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#90
Mind-blowing update the. Confusion and confession was too cute and proposal was fantastic loved it but now what will manik do either he will be angry or fight with her for not telling him

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