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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
unres...
your amazing writing is so much like a beautiful piece of music...
though it doesnt rhyme, yet it is like a music having a melody of its own.

here again u inspired me...to write something...
maybe i should make u my mentor...😆



I see you happy,

And the thoughts of fulfilment comes,

The world wreathing me rejoices,

My soul gets alive,

Your smile... It's a drug to me.


I see you happy,

And my heart starts beating,

My mind is at ease,

My hope relives,

Your smile... It's a drug to me.


I see you happy,

And my cherished moments recurs,

The agony disappears,

My spirit shines,

Your smile... It's a drug to me.


I see you happy,

And my personal living hell becomes my heaven,

My barren inside becomes my verdure,

My aura illuminates,

Your smile... It's a drug to me.


I see you happy,

And I don't care about a thing,

Your happiness is the music I love,

Your joy is the tune of my breath,

Your beam is the melody of my life,

Your smile... It's a drug to me.


I see you happy,

And my life's purpose is achieved,

My belief in happy endings credence,

My halo gets infected with happiness,

Your smile... It's a drug to me.

Edited by aairahahmad - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Res..❤️
you understand and express Manan as no one, no one does..
you are my friend wink, but apart from that I respect you so much and love you even more for your talent.. you feel both of them... I know you write your heart out... which I keep repeating is one pure and beautiful heart in this world.. You impress me to limitless boundaries...
Thank you so much for this analysis.. as always touched my heart...
trust me, i am tired of all the reserves... but i know you understand wink... you are my caring-bee..

Lots of Love HAMESHA..
Pankh
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Posted: 10 years ago
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WOW this post is just beyond perfection!! :D HATS OFF!! 👏👏..i just logged on today after such a long time and this post left me speechless..!! Mayn the words u chose and the way u described every scene is so beautiful..!! Really i totally enjoyed reading ur post..!! 😃..and it made me feel the true essence of today's episode..!! It was soo awesome episode..and ur description was like a cherry on the top!! 😃..'

Well i wanna say that MANIK MALHOTHRA is someone who can hurt himself just to see his loved ones HAPPY..!! He is just that kind of person who can give himself pain just to make others happyy..!! such people are very rare in real life..! He is just hiding this face from everyone..He want to be monster..he wanna be a VILLAIN..!!! But his ANGEL nandini has REVEALED his true face infront of everyone...and people think he got CHANGED as per mukti said today!! Well NO..he has always been an HERO..but he never showed it to anyone..and now if he is showing his true colours and its only because of HIS nandani..!! 😳..He always wanted to hide his emotions and feelings from everyone except his nandani..whenever he become sad he always end up calling her..no matter if they are on talking terms or not..!!

There have been a lott of things happened in their journey since today..They have faced a lott of troubles..some happy moments..and some heartbreaks as well..!! but one thing is always consistent and that is their "UNCONDITIONAL LOVE"..they can never stay away from each other..even they fight all the time but they can never stay away..and thats the beauty of their relation!! They always find reasons to bump into each other!!😳..Manik and Nandani are truely MEANT TO BE TOGETHER..!! THEY ARE SOULMATES..!! and i love they way nandani said that i can read ur eyes..!! this showed that how deeply she knows manik..!! Though he denied that he doesnt know anything about guitar but later on he accepted infront of Dhruv..!!

Well about Dhruv-Manik scene..It brought tears in my eyes..i can actually feel the pain in maniks eyes..!! His eyes was full of pain..it hurts a lot when ur closest freindx happiness lies by staying away from u..It aches to acknowledge that ur all efforts of getting ur friend back are useless...!! Its very difficult to go away from ur friend for his happiness..a person has to be strong enough to take this decision..!! Manik and dhruvs friendship has always been unique..they always helped each other and they were REAL BUDDIES..!! whenever dhruv had those attacks..no matter where manik was..he always came to help him..he was always there with him..Manik can never see dhruv in pain..and he always wanted to see him happy..and now Dhruv's happiness lies in ENDING this friendship..so yess it would be really hard to accept it..But manik did..just because he wanna see him happy..he want him to perform well..and that's why he gifted that guitar to him..HE LOVED HIM ENOUGH TO LET HIM GO..!! Well that's how our manik is..He can bear a lott of pain but he can never see his loved ones in pain..!! it was such a heart wrenching scene..!!

We never value a relation until it get away from us..!! whenever a thing remain with us..we nerver value it..but when it get away..we then realize its true importance in our life..!! and that's what happens with dhruv today..he knew that manik will never go away from him..and he will keep on trying..but today manik gave up..he accepted his defeat because of dhruvs happiness..!! and now dhruv is realizing that how he have made a GIANT MISTAKE..and now he will come to rescue manik as per precap..!!😃😃.. m really happy that dhruv got his brains and he will come around😃..Finally!!!!

And Parth..⭐️⭐️..Take a bow Boy😃..he just simply nailed that scene..!! he enacted that scene soo wonderfully that we can actually feel the pain in his eyes..he portrayed every emotion soo beautifulllyy..!! Really he was soo best in today's episode..!! 😃..

Your words and description are just mindblowing😳..Really I became fan of ur writing just by this post😉..I will be looking forward to ur posts from now on😃..BRAVO..!!👏👏

Edited by Shez.Ishra09 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14

Thankyou <3 means a lot!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: LIKEDMG

Nice ...

Harshad back...
Dhruv ne mentos ki gali khaye Manik se and uski dimak ki batti jali...

We are like...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=y6Sxv-sUYtM



Soo glad Harshad is back!! Now we can see Nyonika's chapter closing too as there is an intriguing mystery related to the both of them. Furthemore, biggest head-scratcher is will he evolve into a more positive character or still the hated little hottie.

Hahaha love you for posting that song... That is actually us at this stage!! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Preeshaxo

*SIGHHH*
THIS LEGIT BROUGHT TEARS TO MY EYES.
I CANT EVEN GET THE RIGHT WORDS OUT TO EXPRESS HOW UTTERLY BEAUTIFUL THIS WAS TO READ. YOU MADE ME SMILE AND THEN MY TEARS FORMED.. YOU WROTE LIKE YOUR INSIDE MANIKS HEAD LIKE HOW DO YOU EVEN DO THAT???? I LOVE YOU KAYYY ❤️

Today was Manik's day, the boy shone throughout the episode. Fought his way through all 3 battles and man I couldn't be more proud of the guy!!

Nyonika and Manik's scene was just brilliant. The boy handled this situation so well, how he turned it around back to her was just brilliant and she believed him!! Never underestimate Manik Malhotra, he's learnt from the best Nyonika.. You should know your son by now!!!
"ACP NYONIKA" 🤣
"IS DETECTIVE KE AKHON SE KUCH BACHTA NAHI" 🤣
YOU DA BAWSSS MANIK 😎

I loved Mukti and Aliya shying away from seeing Manik and Nandini together, with a cute smile and grin on their face! Their acceptance of Manik's change and how Nandini brought that change into Manik's life was so nice to finally hear. I felt for Aliya once Mukti said that but I loved how she accepted that change is a part of life and that she's happy for them both. To see her growth is just everything!!

"Aggar tu khush hai na...mere bina...I won't take that happiness...from you. Mai woh khushil...I won't take it...from you. Never."
I felt for Manik so much after he uttered these words 🥺 Twice he said I'll stop coming after you, if that's what you want then that's what I'll give you. No emotional blackmail, no shouting, no tricks. Just the simple truth and acceptance that Dhruv is not coming back. Giving up on Dhruv is probably the hardest thing he's ever done but he did it for his friend!

BABIESSS were cute as always, small scene but it was enough. Dhruv doesn't know Manik's handwriting but Nandini's awareness about Manik is everything
I love when she pulls him around and he lets her because that's his girl and wherever she wants to take him he'll let her because it's her 😳
Their small eye talk if she should go and his blink to say yes -gahhh these two, so in sync and their little eye talks are just love!

HARSHAD IS BACKK 🥳
I CANNOT CONTAIN MY EXCITEMENT.. IF MANIK GIVES ME A "HARSHAD..HARSHAD..HARSHAD.. TSK TSK TSK" TOMORROW I WILL LEGIT FAINT AND DIE OF HAPPINESS!!!

Love
Preesha
🤗

P.S. I've missed you 🥺
P.S.S. Love to Reya for using my word slay, Reya you've been slaying me with you words too kayy!! And it made me smile when I read it in your post 😳
P.S.S.S. I'm sorry I kept using caps? I can't contain my excitement any longer so I expressed it through this post 🤣


Awww come here you... Shall give you a massive *huggg* in return of the tears you shed because of me!!
What do I say about our Majnu, Monster Manik Malhotra. Honestly, his pain and tears compelled me to write a post dedicated to him because like you said... He shined today. He sacrificed a bit of himself for someone else again. He's let go of perhaps that one relationship that taught him that there can be a relationship other than one that is solely based on a give an take concept. And as much as the whole scene showcased the purity, the beauty of Manik's heart... Obviously we've got to appreciated the guy who's made all of these scenes, all of the pain and tears and heartaches seem so real. Parth samthaan did yet another fine job and I would like to add that Utkarsh's almost dumbfounded look... Where he's just left standing, contemplating what has just happened in his life... It was a very well effort done by him too!

So Nandini saw it through her lover boy that he still hasn't given up on his friend and hence gifted him a new guitar without him even having to tell her. And whilst most people at this stage, probably even Fab3 wouldn't be able to understand this gesture towards dhruv... Nandini needed no explanation to understand it. She was so proud of him... You could see it in her smile and the shine in her eyes. This is the Manik she fell for. The one who possesses that heart of a gold to forgive everyone before they even apologise for a mistake. Obviously some mistakes can never be forgiven like Nandini had said once, but Manik understand and values the importance of relationships. It's so easy to break a tie or end a relationship with anyone, but the difficlty lies in making relationships and keeping them, nourishing them and protecting them. And when someone like Manik who's always been love-deprived since childhood an hasn't been able to experience the true beauty of relationships... He will become selfish everytime to hold on to whatever he has.

But today he let go of that selfish act he was showing towards his brother because his brother may not be able to see it... But for Manik, Dhruv was always first. He had sacrificed his love before and today he sacrificed his friendship. Not because he's sorry for him or he considers Dhruv weak ... He loves Dhruv more than himself and hurting Dhruv would be equivalent to hurting himself. He wants to be able to fulfill all of dhruv's wishes... He wants to see him achieve his dreams and if he feels he can attain all of that whilst staying away from Manik, he is more than reasy to step down from their podium of friendship.

Got to agree with you... Love the growth in Aliya's maturity and Mukti's glee upon seeing her friend to have changed for the better was really lovely.

So can I just say... It was only the first day of the week today and already some tears were shed by our Manik and the viewers... There's so many more still to be shed. Today was his turn... Tomorrow most likely will be hers when she will see him beaten all black and blue. The fear of losing each other will only increase as the week progresses and needs of each other will escalate too. Like they say, if you want to see the sunshine...you've got to weather the storm.

Harshad is back!!! And what perfect timing. He is needed in everyone's life at this stage tbh. Fab 4... Navya... Manan... And it will be awesomely interesting to see if he can help out in seeing through panditji's mindful games. After all he's that one player whom we can say can play these games just as well as the monster himself.

I've seriously missed you too... Sorry didn't get a chance to reply to last week'a post but they were read and cherished and absorbed. And I love you for making posts like these to express your excitement and delight because obviously I need my daily dose of something beautiful to read too! <3

Lots of love
Twinkle <3
Edited by twinkle10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What can I say that u don't already know, about ur write-ups. As much as I await to see the episode, I equally wait to read ur posts.

Theres nothing much to add to what U wrote but can only 2nd everything. Parth is such a fine actor and he has brought Manik to life.

Don't want to start anything about MaNan- can easily lose track.
But a small quote about Manik and Dhruv. I have quoted the same on Sue's thread as well.

"Sometimes being a friend means mastering the art of timing. There is a time for silence. A time to let go and allow people to hurl themselves into their own destiny. And a time to prepare to pick up the pieces when it's all over."
Gloria Naylor

However heart-breaking and sad it was/is for Manik to let go of Dhruv, he did the right thing. What Dhruv needed was a big jolt and to brought back to reality. And hopefully this act of Manik will do just that. Did I see regret in the eyes of Dhruv. If not regret yet, at least he is using his brain to think and realise the implications of his behaviour now.
Cant wait for the Fab 5 and to see the beautiful relation of the 2 'BUDDIES'. And yes, Harshad is back.
🤗



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: riddhima11

Res..❤️

you understand and express Manan as no one, no one does..
you are my friend wink, but apart from that I respect you so much and love you even more for your talent.. you feel both of them... I know you write your heart out... which I keep repeating is one pure and beautiful heart in this world.. You impress me to limitless boundaries...
Thank you so much for this analysis.. as always touched my heart...
trust me, i am tired of all the reserves... but i know you understand wink... you are my caring-bee..

Lots of Love HAMESHA..
Pankh

Pankh!!! Again you leave me with such loving words which make me feel so blessed to have found you. <3 Truly an angel because you never fail to make your loved ones feel neglected! Like Manik <3 hehe
I'm so glad you liked the analysis again and seriously... your inspiring words and Manan's indescribable love is what inspires me to write every day I reckon so I can hardly accept all this credit!
Love you loads and hoping you have a lovely week ahead me darling!

Your
Wink <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinkle10

Pankh!!! Again you leave me with such loving words which make me feel so blessed to have found you. <3 Truly an angel because you never fail to make your loved ones feel neglected! Like Manik <3 hehe
I'm so glad you liked the analysis again and seriously... your inspiring words and Manan's indescribable love is what inspires me to write every day I reckon so I can hardly accept all this credit!
Love you loads and hoping you have a lovely week ahead me darling!

Your
Wink <3

Wink... :) "Like Manik".. that is the biggest compliment ever.. I just woke up and read this and you made my day... specially after yesterday's episode... I am amazed by Manik as a friend.. maybe I dont deserve to be entitled like him... but still since you said it... It means a lot dear...
You know actually you are like Nandini.. atleast for me.. always looking out for me, always having a bigger heart, pure heart and forgiving me for my absence... and then complimenting me in the best way possible.. may be that is the reason you understand Manik so well..😊 (Because Nandini understands Manik the best..)
I'll always be there for all the love and appreciations because you deserve it.. Love you!!
M still at home and cant explain how much m enjoying being with my parents and my sister..😃
I wish you an amazing week too..

Love
Pankh
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shez.Ishra09

WOW this post is just beyond perfection!! :D HATS OFF!! 👏👏..i just logged on today after such a long time and this post left me speechless..!! Mayn the words u chose and the way u described every scene is so beautiful..!! Really i totally enjoyed reading ur post..!! 😃..and it made me feel the true essence of today's episode..!! It was soo awesome episode..and ur description was like a cherry on the top!! 😃..'

Well i wanna say that MANIK MALHOTHRA is someone who can hurt himself just to see his loved ones HAPPY..!! He is just that kind of person who can give himself pain just to make others happyy..!! such people are very rare in real life..! He is just hiding this face from everyone..He want to be monster..he wanna be a VILLAIN..!!! But his ANGEL nandini has REVEALED his true face infront of everyone...and people think he got CHANGED as per mukti said today!! Well NO..he has always been an HERO..but he never showed it to anyone..and now if he is showing his true colours and its only because of HIS nandani..!! 😳..He always wanted to hide his emotions and feelings from everyone except his nandani..whenever he become sad he always end up calling her..no matter if they are on talking terms or not..!!

There have been a lott of things happened in their journey since today..They have faced a lott of troubles..some happy moments..and some heartbreaks as well..!! but one thing is always consistent and that is their "UNCONDITIONAL LOVE"..they can never stay away from each other..even they fight all the time but they can never stay away..and thats the beauty of their relation!! They always find reasons to bump into each other!!😳..Manik and Nandani are truely MEANT TO BE TOGETHER..!! THEY ARE SOULMATES..!! and i love they way nandani said that i can read ur eyes..!! this showed that how deeply she knows manik..!! Though he denied that he doesnt know anything about guitar but later on he accepted infront of Dhruv..!!

Well about Dhruv-Manik scene..It brought tears in my eyes..i can actually feel the pain in maniks eyes..!! His eyes was full of pain..it hurts a lot when ur closest freindx happiness lies by staying away from u..It aches to acknowledge that ur all efforts of getting ur friend back are useless...!! Its very difficult to go away from ur friend for his happiness..a person has to be strong enough to take this decision..!! Manik and dhruvs friendship has always been unique..they always helped each other and they were REAL BUDDIES..!! whenever dhruv had those attacks..no matter where manik was..he always came to help him..he was always there with him..Manik can never see dhruv in pain..and he always wanted to see him happy..and now Dhruv's happiness lies in ENDING this friendship..so yess it would be really hard to accept it..But manik did..just because he wanna see him happy..he want him to perform well..and that's why he gifted that guitar to him..HE LOVED HIM ENOUGH TO LET HIM GO..!! Well that's how our manik is..He can bear a lott of pain but he can never see his loved ones in pain..!! it was such a heart wrenching scene..!!

We never value a relation until it get away from us..!! whenever a thing remain with us..we nerver value it..but when it get away..we then realize its true importance in our life..!! and that's what happens with dhruv today..he knew that manik will never go away from him..and he will keep on trying..but today manik gave up..he accepted his defeat because of dhruvs happiness..!! and now dhruv is realizing that how he have made a GIANT MISTAKE..and now he will come to rescue manik as per precap..!!😃😃.. m really happy that dhruv got his brains and he will come around😃..Finally!!!!

And Parth..⭐️⭐️..Take a bow Boy😃..he just simply nailed that scene..!! he enacted that scene soo wonderfully that we can actually feel the pain in his eyes..he portrayed every emotion soo beautifulllyy..!! Really he was soo best in today's episode..!! 😃..

Your words and description are just mindblowing😳..Really I became fan of ur writing just by this post😉..I will be looking forward to ur posts from now on😃..BRAVO..!!👏👏

Wow!!! This was amazing!! Firstly I'd like to thank you for all the love and praise-filled words you showered me with. It always feels nice to have someone who was casually browsing the forum to spare a few minutes to write a comment because your inspiring words further motivate us as writers to continue writing for you. Such a sweet gesture. Will always cherish it <3

Now what I actually found amazing in this post was your analysis! Simply superb! 😃 You mentioned some brilliant concepts...I especially liked what you said that he loved him enough to let him go. Bang on! Isn't that the reason he left Nandini at one point? Yes he knew Dhruv loved Nandini and he could do anything for his happiness but he also loved Nandini boundlessly and he felt she would be more loved, and more happy with him. He's never thought about himself. Never! So there is no way he can think about himself at this stage either. We saw in the precap... one punch to dhruv and he automatically yelled "Dhruv". He sees above his hurt, his pain...and just focuses on the pains of his loved ones.

You said it... Manik is someone who would wordlessly take in all the pain if it meant he can protect his dear ones. He can continue sacrificing himself for his friends and well for nandini...he can even sacrifice his own heartbeat, his own life. Just imagine... this is the boy who's never had fortune of experiencing his parent's love. Despite all the darkness during his childhood, if he can still possess such a loving heart and such a selfless soul...just imagine how beautiful his life would've been if he had been able to experience a childhood like a normal child is fortunate to have. He has so much love for his friends, his Nandini but he never has felt love for himself. He's always been inflicted pain, he's drowned in guilt and has lost himself again and again in darkness.

You're right... we always continue to take our relationships, our people for granted because we know that no matter what...they will never leave us. Dhruv continuously demanded Manik to leave him...to not talk, he meant it in a way that he doesn't want manik around him but he knew that Manik would never really walk out of his life. I remember that scene when Dhruv said to cabir that look, even today you all are supporting manik and everyone was left confused because dhruv was the one who had said to leave him alone. But when he could see his friends walking out forever, his grounds seemed to have shaken. And last night...when Manik so selflessly gifted dhruv everything he wanted...it felt as if his whole world came crashing down because he knows it too that there is no world for him without Manik. You could see it on his face that he doesn't know how he'll live alone, walk alone, sing alone. He wants to yell at Manik, to puch him, to scream at him...but he never wanted him to leave.And that showed how much he loves Manik in return too. It's so similar to how Manik expressed his "so-called hatred"to nandini. He would make her suffer, he would push and pull her around, he even made her his slave. He would taunt her, yell at her...but he could never let her go. He kept her in the college saying he wanted to make her life hell... but the truth is if he has the right to shower her with petals of his love, he has the right to yell at her too during frustrating times. Same was the case with Dhruv.
They say you're prone to becoming upset the most with that one person you love the most and that was Manik for Dhruv.

Okay sorry...this got way too long again! :P

But can I just say...your ability to write so coherently about Manan and the various relationships being explored in KY2 is so brilliant! I loved reading this and honestly hope to read more of your work in the future!!

Keep writing and Take care <3

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