Manan and fab4 os part 2 pg1

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Hi this is my first os hope u like it..
i have not seen the episode so starts from precap of yesterday..
Manan os night and day
PART1

Manik spits the drink he was drinking and look to nandini in shock- what are u doing here?
Nandini(innocently)- what do u mean? i have come to meet u.
Manik- butt..
Nandini- Tumne kaha tha na to understand,so i got it and decided to come here!
Manik smirks n says so u need me?
Nandini moves back and says ya wo ams hai na she is not talking to me,i m scared..what she thinks of u n pandit ji thinks ..
Manik keep his finger on her lips- shh..listen nandini everything will be ok.
Nandini asks but how??
Manik- trust me..
Nandini(smiling)- i do!
Manik- ok so nandini tomorrow is our day..
Nandini- no manik..
Manik(thinking)- kya matlab?
Nandini- I mean not tomorrow manik its today! She shows him his watch n points at the time..
Manik- oh u mean its 12..
She nods cutely.
He smiles!
Manik- ok then lets celebrate the start of our day..
Nandini(confused)- huh? how?
Manik- by letting all go.. n saying this he jumps in pool!
nandini is shocked first bt follows soon..
Manik and nandini look lovingly at each other!
Nandini suddenly speaks- manik i m scared kal kya hoga..
Manik( cupping her face)- i dont know what will happen..what matters is ki tum kya sochti ho kal kya hoga.
Nandini(smiling)- i think sab acha hoga...my hope will win!
Manik(smirking)- no our hope will win!
Other side Dhruv thinking about all that happened! All thinks playing in his mind nandini saying i'll help u trap harshad,i'll always be ur friend dhruv,he sacrificed me for u dhruv..
Dhruv- ughhh( throws all things..)
how could i hurt her? shit..i m wrong nandini i m sorry..(cries)
Other side
Cabir- ok so we will send goons to hurt manik.
Muklya- what?
Cabir- are fake goons..we'll show dhruv ki nandini cares for manik coz i know for sure tht she will defend and save him.
Mukti- nice idea..
Alya- what abt pandit and the girl then?
Cabir- i'll take care of manik and dhruv..u both take care of pandit and the girl..
Other side
Manik- and dont worry abt ams she will love me coz of my big fan following..
Nandini- matlab?
Manik- matlab all are my fans chacha chachi rishab so its very easy..
Nandini- i m not ur fan
Manik(pulls her closer)- ya u r my star!! now go home ams must be waiting..
nandini kisses his cheeks and goes ,he smiles..
Manik thinks i will show u n ur ams the true face of pandit..Dhruv thinks i'll back out from the concert as my apology nandini..cabir thinks i'll show u dhruv the true love of manik n nandini..mukti thinks fab5 will get together again..alya thinks i'll drive ur ego away dhruv..
Nandini thinks i'll make sure this day is a new beginning for us Manik..A new day after a new night..
PART 2
Next morning in practice room dhruv is present nandini enters n her eyes well up remembering all about yesterday's incidents.Dhruv sees her n feels bad!
Pandit enters in not so good mood n nandini immediately understands the reason.
Dhruv n pandit start speaking at the zame time bt dhruv continues..
Dhruv- pandit ji i want to back out from fusion concert..
Pandit- but y dhruv?
Dhruv- kuch wrongs kiye hain jinhe right krna hai!(eyeing nandini)
Pandit(angrily)- fine nandini manik tumhare saath perform karega! he leaves in anger..
Pandit thinks nandini bahut smart hai dhruv ko bhi pata liya n ams ko bhi kya patti padha di..
Flashback
Nandini comes back all drenched n sees ams sitting.
Ams- kahan thi itni raat ko?
Nandini fumbles.
Ams- nandini manik acha ladka nahi hai!
Nandini- ams manik bahut acha hai (thinking how to put it up) acha chalo ams aap manik ko mere saath gane do in concert n phir dekh lena ki woh kaisa hai?
Ams- theek hai main trilok se baat krungi wo na nahi krega..
Present
Nandini and dhruv remain silent when suddenly dhruv starts crying n comes on his knees..
Nandini- Dhruv kya hua i m sorry tum fusion concert mein part le lo i'll ask panditji to take u!
Dhruv(sobbing)- tum kyun sorry bol rahi ho sorry to mujhe bolna chahiye for behaving like a jerk! I m so sorry nandini..
Nandini- its ok dhruv..chalo ab sab se mil lo and complete fab5 again..
Dhruv- no after ur performance not now..
Nandini- but dhruv..( he leaves)
Nandini wonders y he said so..
Meanwhile mukti and alya track the girl and convince her to come with them..
Cabir also arranges goons to attack manik and thinks to set the plan in motion after the concert.
The concert is about to start and manan wish each other luck..to make their hope win.!!
Thats a wrap i know a small one but could not make it big next part will have pandit,dhruv's apology and manan performance so stay tuned n tell me if u want the next parts or not..
thanks to everyone who liked n replied on the story..
Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago

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richarius thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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that sounds awesome. pls continue. loving the os
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it's amazing...different ..'
plz cont soon
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Nyc os... continue... and do pm me plz...
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awesome part. thanks for the pm. 😊
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hi i left it midway yaar dont know if iv'll continue but will write other stories!!

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