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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: mkakkar93

oh my god lovely update 😳😳

thanks a lot for the effort to write in between ur exams
thats so sweet of u 😳
i will pray u score good and well
and now about the update
cabir being restless i am loving that πŸ˜‰
and navya going with harshad its gonna be a big jealousy track
already showed by cabir taking seat beside navya πŸ˜†
i am curious to know whats he gonna write on the paper
will wait for that 😳😳😳
lovely update
thanks for updating in ur hectic schedule
all the best for the exams
and whenever free keep updating πŸ‘


You know, you are a sweet heart πŸ€— you know how to make me smile with you comments πŸ˜ƒ
Thanks for praying I really need that πŸ˜†
I have gaps between the exams so thought I would update. Yeah Cabir being restless and jealous is something I wanted to see in the show (only if he wasn't gay ) but its still happy πŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: dhruvika1991

It was nice and cute i can read cavya more and more update soon

Hey haven't heard from you for a long time, thanks for commenting πŸ˜ƒ
Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Another short update, though I have an exam tommorrow πŸ˜† Seriously guys pray for me, that't my only hope πŸ˜›

Part ~ 6


Navya was standing at the back of the college building surrounded by trees and their wild leaves, thinking about Cabir's behaviour. At first she was surprised. First he sits beside her but don't talk to her, instead hands her a tissue asking her to meet at the back of the college after the classes.
His behaviour made Navya think that maybe he was ashamed to be seen with her infront of everyone and this thought made her kind of upset but before she could think more about it a noise caught her attention. She almost screamed in fright but noticed that among all the trees and bushes an old steel door opened and came in Cabir.

"Eh kaya hain?" Her voice mixed with fright and relief.

Cabir smirked "College se andar or bahar jane ka secret way."

Navya was silent for a while but then she reacted in such a way that Cabir almost got a heart attack.

"Agar mere saath dikhne mein sharam ati hai to phir yeha bulayahi kiyu hooo?"

"Navya... kaya? Mein to tumhari madath..." Cabir tried to explain but was cut off.

"Nahi chahiye mujhe TUMHARI madaath."

"Dhiree koi sunlega Navya..."

"To aab mujhse baath karte huye kisine dekhliya to bhi problem hai? Thik hai phir mein JAA RAHI HUN!"

Cabir tried to stop her but she was in no mood to listen, exasperated he pulled her close to him and lifted her off the ground.

Top half of her body was hanging from the back of his shoulder and the other half was at the front, her legs held by Cabir. It took a moment for her to realize what happened but when she did, she threw hands and legs in the air and started hitting her capturer, but it looked like he had no effect of them because he smoothly carried her out of the secret door and moved towards his jeep which he parked there earlier.

He put her down on the passenger seat and strapped her seat belt and before she could get out Cabir quickly moved towards the driver's seat, hopped in and started the jeep.

Navya was still shaken from the incident and was breathing heavily, her face all red because of hanging upside down.

"CABIR!?!" she screeched in disbelief and anger.

"Aaa...Navya mujhe behra banane ka plan hai kaya?"

"Sirf behra? Maan to kar rahe ki...ki..." she was at loss of words.

"Hain hain I get it. Lekin itna gussa kiyun?"

"Gussa kiyu? Tumne mujhe ulta latka diya aur pucch rahego gussa kiyu?"

"Nahi usse pehle. Ese achanakse kiyu chillane lagi?" Cabir stole a glance at her.

Navya heaved a breath. She knew there was no way he would let her go away now and even if she tried he would do something stupid again so it's better she talk with him.

"Mujhe pata hai tumhe mujhse saab k saamne milne mein sharam ati hai kiyu ki mein Madhubala hu aur tum college k saabse cool dude. Lekin agar itna hi problem hai to phir baath hi kiyun karni Cabir?"

"Wait. Wait. Wait. Ye idea tumhe kahase aya?" He asked frowing.

"Hum bewakoof to nahi hai na? Saradin mujhse baath thaak nahi ki aur aab ese chup chup k milna..."

"Tum itna kiyu soch te ho? God! Kaha ki baath kaha legaya! Mein baath kese karta? Tumhari bodyguard Nandini ko dekha hai kese mujhe ghur rahi thi? Who to apne dimaag mein mujhe soo bar mar chuki hogi aur who bhi bohath creative tarikese."

"Kaya?"

"Aur nahi to kaya? Aab usske saath Mukti aur Aliya bhi hai. Un saab ko lagta hai ki mein phir se koi prank karne wala hu."

"Unki kaya galti hai tum ho hi ayesi." Navya said giggling.

"Hain. Hain mein hi shaitan hu tum saab fharishte." Cabir said sarcastically "Aur mujhe laga ese chup chup k milna bohath romantic hoga." He gave a wink.

Navya kept mum. Now thinking back how she reacted made her embarassed and also bubble with laughfter.

"Cabir I am sorry... pata nahi mujhe kaya hogaya tha..." she said in between her laugh.

Cabir looked amused at her. He will never undersrand her, first she is angry, then calm and cool and now laughing like there is tommorrow.

He shook his head, a smile playing on his lips and noticed he reached their destination.

As he reached the building the watchman opened the gate for him to entre, he parked his jeep on a near by spot.

"Cabir hum kaha hai?" Navya said as they moved towards one of the three lifts of this skyscraper.

They entered the lift and Cabir pressed the button for 15th floor.

"Tumhe kisi se milvana hai."

"Kisse?"

Cabir didn't say anything only smiled and she kept looking at him with a frown, wondering where could they be.

A noise indicates that they reached the 15th floor and they came out as the door opened. The floor were of tiles and one side of the wall had lines of tree pots and there were two doors at each end of the corridor.

Cabir went to the door at the left end of the corridor and rang the bell.

"Cabir kiska ghar hain?" Navya asked whispering.

There was a twinkle in his eyes and before he could answer the door opened and there stood a very beautiful girl. She had dark brown hair which was now tied in a loose ponytail and wore a pink top with white jeans and a set of matching flip flops.

The girl raised her eyebrows as she looked between the two people infront of her.

"Hey babe!" Cabir greeted, as he went inside and hugged the girl. After that he turned towards Navya and said to the girl "And this is the one I told you about, Navya."

The girl didn't say anything only gave a dazzling smile to the confused Navya, who didn't like that smile at all and more over she didn't like the closeness between Cabir and the girl. 'Yeh kaun hai?' Navya wondered and Cabir answered for her.

"And this is Mehak, my girlfriend."


Author's Note ~

So there is the surprise πŸ˜› Don't you just love cliff hangers? πŸ˜†

Hope you liked it and yeah don't forget to pray πŸ˜†

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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
omg thanks so much zerine for updating πŸ˜ƒu are updating inspite of ur exam tomorrow
i will pray that exam gonna be very good 😳
and now the update
omg cabir ask navya to meet her at the back wow he is getting naughty hahaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†and cabir lifted navya i am trying to imagine this scene this was so hilarious haha
love the moody navya from having misconceptions and then having a laughter love that part😳😳😳
and then the last part omg thanks a lot for this
u are a darling zerin
cabirs firlfriend and that too mehak thats my name u truly surprised me πŸ‘πŸ‘i wanna hug u for this
and now navya jealousy is gonna be on height i am sure hahaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
its an awesome update
truly i love u for this
this update is one of the best😳
thanks a lot for updating and all the bwst for ur exam its gonna be too good πŸ˜³πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
once again i am here what to do cant resist myself from appreciating 😳
i am like reading it the third tym now and as usual it is amazing
and u know this gonna be ine of the update that gonna be closest to my heart
lovely update and hats off to u to write so well in such a hectic schedule πŸ‘
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Hey Zerin!πŸ˜›


This is too good. I'm really liking this FF. In fact, I'm in love with this..!😊

I really like the way how you write yaar...😳 This is just amazing!⭐️

Do write more!πŸ˜›

Take careπŸ€—

-Arthy.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Awww Mehak thank you sooo much. You comments always make me so happy πŸ˜ƒ
I am really glad you liked it as you can see it was for you πŸ˜‰ Enjoy being Cabir's gf ir maybe something else πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
Wow you read it 3timesπŸ˜† just makes me so happy.
And also thanks for praying. My exam is going well πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: DarknessVisible

Hey Zerin!πŸ˜›



This is too good. I'm really liking this FF. In fact, I'm in love with this..!😊

I really like the way how you write yaar...😳 This is just amazing!⭐️

Do write more!πŸ˜›

Take careπŸ€—

-Arthy.


Hey Arthy. Thank you so much πŸ€—
You have always supported me, from DhruNi to CaVya. You are a sweetheart ❀️ πŸ€—
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part ~ 7


Mehak was tying Navya's hair into a french braid, actually first she tried to teach Navya how to do it herself but she was messing it up so Mehak suggested that she practiced later on and as it was time for college she will do it properly.

Navya was feeling embarassed and as their eyes met in the mirror she looked away, because their meeting from last night came to her mind.

Yesterday when Cabir claimed that Mehak was his girlfriend she just breathed a laugh and it looked like she was about to say something but when she looked at Navya's frowning and surprised face she stopped and that made Cabir look at her, confused. Mehak only smiled and said "Navya andar aao na!"

Recovering quickly Navya gave a polite smile with a lot of effort. For some reason she was not liking this girl but as she was here now she entered anyway.

Navya sat on the couch of the very beautifully decorated living room, on the other hand Cabir sat on one of the single sofas. Mehak excused herself but joined them quickly bringing food with herself.

"Best hostess as always." Cabir commented before he took a bowl of chips and stuffed handful into his mouth.

"Monster as always." Mehak replied with a laugh and Navya too joined with her but stopped as she reminded herself she didn't like this girl. Which is a good question, why didn't she like her?

The girl looked friendly and was very easy going as she started talking with Navya like a long lost friend. She was asking about her college and where she was from, she didn't even make disgusting face when Navya told she was from a small town which is surprising as she always got that reaction. But still Navya was uncomfortable.

Cabir, after finishing his bowl of chips, also joined in the conversation and some how the topic turned to Harshad and Navya found herself infront of a question "So you like Harshad?" Mehak asked curiously.

She was looking at the innocent looking girl infront of her with sharp eyes and also noticing Cabir's reaction from the corner of her eyes.

"Ummm... Hain" Navya answered awkwardly already guessing Cabir told Mehak about it. "Lekin who shayed nahi karte."

Navya's cheeks turned a bit pink and Mehak noticed Cabir was not liking the conversation at all, though he was he one who asked her to help. She tried her best to hide her smile.

"It's okay I understand. Boys are really stupid, they get so confused with feelings even though things are so clear." Mehak said "Hain na Cabir?" She smirked as she asked him in a fake sugary tone.

"Are you indicating something?" Cabir frowned not getting her drift.

"Oh nothing sweetie." She tried hard to control her laugh.

Navya one the other hand was irritated at the word 'sweetie'. 'Itni drama karne ki kaya zarurath hain?' She thought to herself.

But was surprised when she heard "Mein tuhari madath karungi."

"Kiyun?"

"Kiyun ki... tum Cabir ki dost ho aur acchi bhi ho."

"Hain aur aab iss acchi lardki ko jana parega kiyun ki thorihi der mein usski hostel bandho jayega, verna isse raaste par rehna paredga." Cabir said checking the time.

"Atleast usske saath tum to hoge." Mehak was enjoying the uncomfortable and surprised looks of the pair.

"Hain humhe jana chahiye." Navya agreed at the lack of anything else to say.

As they were leaving Cabir gave Mehak a hug and she returned it enthusiastically and this time she checked Navya's reaction and laughed to herself. Though if I was her I wounldn't cause Navya looked... pissed.

Even Navya didn't know why she was reacting like this, to the girl who was so nice to her and even agreed to help her, all she knew was that she wanted to- beat this girl. On the head. With a frying pan.

Mehak let go of Cabir and turned towards Navya "Hain aur ek baath. Cabir to kaha k mein isski girlfriend hu, who joke tha. Asli baath to yeh hain ki mein isske bhai ka fiance hu aur isske hone wali bhabi."

"Humhesha mera dill tord deti hai." Cabir said wiping his invisible tears.

Mehak was laughing at both of them, especially Navya's reaction. At first she looked shocked and as the new information settled she looked kind of relieved and also happy. Suddenly she started liking this girl a lot more. And the liking continued till now, the next day, as Mehak was helping her get ready.

Author's Note ~

I got bored of studying so another short update πŸ˜ƒ (though I have an exam today πŸ˜› but I have no hope and future πŸ˜†)

Do tell me how did you like this part and the new entry πŸ˜‰

Edited by ZerinAdhora_Adi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
oh wow next update
i tried not to post earlier that i am waiting because i thought it might affect ur exams but wow i got an update
the most lovely morning ever for to get up and having an update e from my favourite ff πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
and now on the update
this update is awesome as always
first i thought then how can mehak is tying navya hair and navya sitting calmly πŸ˜•
but then i started reading and got to know from the last line
u created that suspense magically i loved that πŸ˜³πŸ‘
aww mehak is so sweet and u know what u have made me love myself even more now thanks and hugs for that😳😳
navya jealousy was on the rocks this is the effect of blooming love wowπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
i still cant believe that cabir is trying to help navya to get harshad so sincerly he is as usual great 😳
and cabir one line haha is ladki ko jane do varna isse raaste me rukna padega hahaπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
and the the last words through mehak which made navya relieved
that she is cabir bhabhi haha i was just laughing a lot on this πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
although i missed the chance of being cabir gf but still no worries i love the ff its brillliant
thanks and hugs to u for such a brilliant composition in such a hectic schedule πŸ‘



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