Manan SS : Love Diary part 14 & 15 on pg 77 (16 May) (Completed) - Page 16

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Posted: 10 years ago
The stoey is different n the suspense is liking please update fast.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Pls update yar.. This wait is killin me.. Plz
Pretty plz😳😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
I will try to update tomorrow :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved d story.Eagerly waiting for d next part..continue soon dear..
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Part 5-


Few days passed and I stopped thinking about him, agrrr who am I kidding?? I still miss him so much, it'd been full 4 days 6 hours and 40 minutes since I saw him last, Mukti and Abhi was going to mall for movie and lunch, no matter how much I protested, I ended up going with her, Mukti said I look upset these days and I really needed to go out.

Me and Mukti arrived to the mall but Abhi still wasn't there...I was giving angry glairs to her in every minute, I don't know what I m gonna do in between these two love birds but Mukti is Mukti...she doesn't take NO for an answer...

After some time a black car arrived, I muttered...Finally your late boyfriend is here Mukti, she hit my shoulder playfully and went ahead to him, they hugged each other as if meeting after years, just then the door of the passenger seat opened revealing a most unexpected person.

He has same attitude like he owns the place, he was wearing dark faded jeans with black t-shirt, he side hugged Mukti and then turned his head towards me, I lowered my head, pretended to be busy with my phone and haven't noticed him, then Mukti called me and gestured to go, I moved ahead completely ignoring Manik, we entered inside, me and Mukti admiring the accessories displayed there while both the boys were busy in talking with each other but I noticed Manik stealing glances of me time to time, I ignored like I don't care.

We bought our tickets, coke and pop corn and headed to the movie theatre, Mukti sat beside Abhi while I ended up sitting between Mukti and Manik...only sitting next to him making me nervous and my heart beats run faster, I was trying to pretend myself careless but only my heart knows how much I was affected. He kept his hand on the side of the chair and I did the same, our hands touched giving me goose bumps, our eyes met and I couldn't look away, his eyes were so intense, thank god Mukti and Abhi were busy with each other and not paying attention to the tension between us.

Somehow I managed to break our eye contact and looked away.

Nandini...

He called my name but I ignored him, popping corns in my mouth...

He touched my hand this time, I tried to pull it away but he held it tightly, I sighed tiredly and looked at him, done ignoring me Manik Malhotra? I asked.

I was busy, he replied...

Yeah right, u had time to talk with others but get busy when it comes to me, good job, jab man kare baat karo otherwise ignore karo, right? I accused angrily...

He lowered his gaze and whispered...I m sorry Nandini.

My expressions soften on his apology, goshhh I can't stay angry on him for long, Its ok but better tell me the reason, I said try to make my face threatening...

I wish I could tell Nandini...

What? I can't understand this guy... Now what suppose to mean this? I asked.

Nothing...then he turned his attention to the movie, still holding my hand, I didn't try to pull it away bcoz deep inside I liked it.

He offered me his handkerchief when I started crying on an emotional scene...Heroine wanted to tell him how much she loves him but he left her already...I sniffled and took his hankie, after movie Mukti dragged us all to the store for shopping...she bought some dresses while I was just giving her comments about her purchased dresses. When she went to try an outfit I walked to the nearby imitation jewelry store, I liked a white stone bracelet but it was costly. I m on shortage of money since that incident I m not talking to Dad and there is no way I would ask for money, I m fine without him...

A soft tapping on my shoulder snapped me out in reality, I turned back to see Manik...

What are u doing here? Mukti is calling you, he said.

Oh umm nothing, I was just wandering around, I replied and went to Mukti...

Hey how's this dress? she asked me, showing it with different angles...

Its beautiful...

Great then, I m buying it for u.

No...I don't need it.

Shushhh U r taking it, that's it... discussion over.

I know there is no point in arguing with her, I sighed and nodded...ok

She smiled widely and then we went to have our lunch.

Manik was back in his old self, arrogant and mean... teasing me in every sentence. Even if he make fun of me I really liked to be around him, we all had a good time, maybe Mukti was right, I needed to go out. My mood is now back to normal.

Next day we had same boring lecture, Mukti was falling asleep and I shook her every minute to keep her awake, I was listening what the professor saying but nothing registering in my mind as my brain was somewhere else, by every passing moment my craving to know him increases more.

When lecture finished we took a sigh of relief this one class is actually a pain...Mukti nodded...

Nandini I want to ask you something?

What?

Actually abhi asked me to spend this weekend with him, I told him I can't but he keeps insisting...so...

So what's the problem, go with him.

But Nandu, how can I leave you alone...

Come on, I m not a kid, I'll be fine...

Are u sure?

Yes I m dam sure...

Thanks Nandu...she came forward and hugged me.

So she packed her stuff for the weekend and they left, Abhi is really a nice person so I can trust him over Mukti.

I slapped my forehead, oh god Nandu how could you forget u need to buy those books professor suggested today...I quickly grabbed my purse and headed out after locking the house.

I bought all the necessary things I wanted, I was walking towards my house but suddenly rain started heavily, I stopped at the shed waiting for this to stop, but I had no such luck, I m not having car today and it already getting dark outside...I started freaking out, I placed my books in the plastic bag and clutched to the chest, I decided to go because this is not the area a single girl should stay at night time...I was drenched badly but kept on walking, as expected I felt some cheap kind boys following me, they were passing dirty comments too...they are coming closer, I increased my pace and they increased theirs.

My heart was pounding inside my chest and sweat all over my body, suddenly one guy gripped my wrist and they all surrounded me, let me go...I screamed but they just laughed...I was struggling to go but they were stronger, my condition was very bad, every second I was cursing my idea of coming here alone, without car, my clothes were stickled to my body because of being wet and their hungry eyes were roaming to my body, I was screaming and trying to punch them by my other hand but they caught it too, they started dragging me somewhere and my panic reached to the high level, I was so afraid...

Leave her...I heard an angry familiar voice yelling at them...I snapped my head towards the person and my lips twitched in relieved smile...Manik...two boys went to him while one still holding me tightly...

I said leave her...he said again...making fist, his voice held so much rage.

One boy launched a punch directly aiming to his face...My eyes turned wide in horror but Manik held it in place and punched back with full force, the guy stumble backward, his nose was bleeding, the other guy who was holding me released my hand and went ahead to help the bleeding guy... without wasting a second I ran towards Manik and hugged him...I have never felt this much happy to see anyone in my entire life...I can't imagine what can be happening to me if Manik haven't arrived.

Other two boys again came forward angrily, Manik shoved me aside, he kicked the one and punched the other...they were not ready to back away easily...I was afraid I said to Manik...Plz leave...I started dragging him away...Manik plz lets go, but he was so mad, how dare them...I will kill them all...I was so terrified by his anger...they all stood up again but thankfully instead of fighting more they ran away.

He turned to me and held my shoulders tightly... are u mad or what? What are u doing here alone at this time? He shouted.

I winced by the pain I was feeling because of his firm grip on my shoulder...Manik u r hurting me...

He seems to get back in senses, his expression soften and he released me, I m sorry.

Its ok, I was just buying some books and then rain started...thank you so much for coming otherwise...I don't know...anything could be happen.

Are u okay?

Yes I m fine...

Come Ill drop you...

I was little hesitated because I was drenched from head to toe, doesn't wanted to ruin his car seat.

What are u waiting for Nandini, get inside.

I got in and he stopped at front of my house...I walked to the door while he was still waiting for me to go inside safely...I was touched, he is so caring. I tried to search for the keys but my keys were nowhere to be found, I hit my forehead in frustration... oh god Nandu u idiot... where have you lost it. Stupid stupid stupid I was so angry at myself, now how would I manage to get inside. Even Mukti is out.

Maybe Manik noticed my agony, what happened? He asked coming closer to me.

I lost my keys and now I have no place to go at this late night. I replied sadly.

He seems to think then he replied, well u can come with me...I looked at him surprisingly.

I was just suggesting only if u r okay with it. He replied

No Manik, I will think of something, I can't trouble u anymore.

Oh come on, stop being formal, there is no trouble... now come with me...

Many thoughts running in my mind, staying at Manik's house for the night? Just me and him as Abhi is out with Mukti, but I know I have no other option...I looked up...Aaiyappa why are u making already tough situations tougher for me.



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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update dear...loved it...this ff is getting better and better...cant wait...
thank u...update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
😉Omg... Just loved it.. Write so damn well..
I luv u man..😃😳
Manan under same roof at night.. Hahahahah god knws Wht ll happen..
Cont really soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
wonderful update
loved it
movie part was awesome
wow nandini staying at manilks place inersting
plz update soon plz

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Posted: 10 years ago
part 5 was awsome yaar...loved it...u penned it beautifully...👏
manan awww...so cute...
so manan under same roof at night...😉😳
pls continue soon...
thanks a lot for the pm...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey thanks fr d pm... Loved ur update..

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