A scene I would love to see!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik came to know that Nandini rejected Dhruv propsal.. Now that the line is clear he desparately wanted to talk to her ...messaged her to come and meet at their place but she didnt turn up.. he goes in search and sees her talking to Navya near audi...
Manik: I told u come and meet me why didnt u come

Nandini: Get lost Manik.. I will never come to meet you..

Manik: Really, so you wont come.. ok then... dont blame me for doing this (picks her up.. puts her on his shoulder and walk into the audi and locks the door behind him) (navya didnt know what just happened)...

Nandini: Manik put me down and let me go.. U cannot do this... (he puts her down.. she turns to leave but he stops her and takes her into a bear hug... Nandini struggles but he was too strong for her)..

Manik: Please Nandini, I am soo sorry... Mujhe maaf kardo... I didn't want to do all this... ye sab meine jaan buj ke kiya.. so that you will hate me.. so that you can go to Dhruv (nandini stop struggling) ... tume pate hai.. after u left, dhruv aya tha udar.. usne kaha ki vo tumse pyaar kartha hai and he wanted to propose to you... usine vo sab arrangements kiya tha... tumare liye... But when he first said that.. I dint know what to do... U know how dhruv is... he was changing... he was coming out of his shell and u were a big part of it.. aur tume ye bhi pata hai na ..that I was taking care of him for soo long... so I thought by sacrificing my love for you, hurting you, you will go to him... Par mein galat tha... I cannot see you with him... I dont like it when he makes you smile... I hate it when I see him touching you.. and another big thing is that I failed to understand you.. I was so wrong in thinking that by me moving away.. you will go to him... that you cannot make a person love someone else... love just happens... it cannot be forced... I know that I have hurt you a lot...I broke you trust but I am sorry Nandini... Please forgive me... I'll do anything ,... but please mujhe maaf kardo.. You are my star.. without you there is complete darkness around me and you know na ki mujhe andere se kitna daar lag tha hai.. please shine for me again...

He loosens his hug ...looks into her eyes and waits for an answer but Nandini looked unmoved by his speech, she turns around and walks away...

criticisms are welcome... 😊

Edited by Zaya.priyanka - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I would love to see this scene!!!!!!!!!
Well written!!!!!!!!
I loved the lines Manik is supposed to say to Nandu!!!!!!!!!
I loved the whole convoo!!!!!!!!!!
Keep Imagining😆😆 and Writing!
With Love Rekha!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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10 hugs & 20 kisses to u dear! I wud really go & hug the cv's if they give such a scene. Aage kya hoga pls tell yaar, suspense mein chod diya...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg.. this is perfect.. I loved the lines manik said.. and i thought bas ab toh nandu maan jayegi but the end? the way she just walks away...👏
I so want to see niti and parth act something like this out... they will do such an amazing job
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved the ending heh 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hugs n Hershey's kisses for r u :*
Yes... I want to see this desperately
Edited by addictedlove - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was so good, would love to see this happening
you wrote it so well😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful 😳 How can she trust him again.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey... so many people liked it... I am happy... Thanks guys for liking it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: TasmiaFaye

10 hugs & 20 kisses to u dear! I wud really go & hug the cv's if they give such a scene. Aage kya hoga pls tell yaar, suspense mein chod diya...



aage aage dekho hota hai kya... just kidding... I didnt imagine much further... soch na padega ab nandini kya karegi ya kahegi😊
Edited by Zaya.priyanka - 10 years ago

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