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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

@Maha_bharat That means a LOT dear...thanks much ❤️

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mayaya.

@mayaya.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Oh my god. This is so good. I love the description and whole concept. I loved this!

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sourmisery

@sourmisery

Stunner

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

oh god..I love it. I bloody love it! i usually don't read FFs or OS and if I do, I rarely comment but this compelled me to give feedback and I have nothing but appreciation for this! the way you penned down Manik's feelings, bringing in the human from beneath the layers of Monster that he goes around acting like was just WOW! the pull that he feels towards Nandini and the frustration that comes along with it...brilliant. you had such an amazing grip on Manik that I'm in awe..

keep writing more! would love to read more of your works! just, and I say this with complete goodwill because I wish nothing but best of you, have a look over the grammar and formatting. it will only lagao chaar chaand to your work! would surely read it again with all the small grammatical errors rectified! :*

kudos and keep it up! :D

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Niya

@N_Niya

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Padh to lia tha kal hi but network chala gaya...isliye late comment! 😆

Seriously OS bohot accha tha! I must say u r very good at writing! 👏

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: lostmymusic.
oh god..I love it. I bloody love it! i usually don't read FFs or OS and if I do, I rarely comment but this compelled me to give feedback and I have nothing but appreciation for this! the way you penned down Manik's feelings, bringing in the human from beneath the layers of Monster that he goes around acting like was just WOW! the pull that he feels towards Nandini and the frustration that comes along with it...brilliant. you had such an amazing grip on Manik that I'm in awe..

keep writing more! would love to read more of your works! just, and I say this with complete goodwill because I wish nothing but best of you, have a look over the grammar and formatting. it will only lagao chaar chaand to your work! would surely read it again with all the small grammatical errors rectified! :*

kudos and keep it up! :D

Shizzz...I don't remember the last time I've blushed so hard! Your comment MADE MY DAY!! 🤗

@Bold thanks for pointing it out. I have this bad habit of NOT editing my posts/chapter once I'm done writing them. Will bear this in mind from now on 😃

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sadhanager

@sadhanager

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Great post as usual.

When will you overcome from edward (bella, you are
like my personal brand of heroin) or cristian grey (fifty
shades of grey)?

Just teasing 😛 😆 , those badboys and this manik

never leave us in peace, make us to wonder about them always.

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

@Sadhanager Ohh you have no idea!!

I've never been attracted to all those M&B books or the seedha-saada love stories. I've ALWAYS been in awe with the 'twisted' ones 😆

Be it vampires, werewolves or dominating tyrants! 🤣

Personally, I don't like Christian Grey much, therefore I kept that book's interference to a minimal (I just used the name). This was 'Twilight' through and through 😈

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

OMGG u r an amazing writer👏

jus lovedd how u penned down manik's feelings😃

jus lovedd readingg this a loottt❤️

keep writing moreee😊

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shreya

@.Lilith.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: aishu3003
OMGG u r an amazing writer👏
jus lovedd how u penned down manik's feelings😃
jus lovedd readingg this a loottt❤️
keep writing moreee😊

Thank u sooo much!! 😃

Planning to do the same 😉