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hey guys this is my fan fic

sorry i m a not good writer but just like to ewrite so plzz dont make fun es fan fic pe ok

sorry aghar aap bor ho to just let me know i will stop to write this ok😊

Characters

kripa: from middle class

angad: from rich family

karthik: angads older bro

anitah: karthiks wife

naina: angads mother

Harshini: kripas sister

hasmukh: kripas father

laxmi: kripas mother

aliyah: kripas friend

Mishti: angads gf

angad ke ghar angad ke shagai ke taiyariya chal rahi hoti hain sab log bahot hi khush hain mishti is really happy and Angad too😊

Naina: chalo sab log ab anguthi pahe na ka waqt ho gaya hain 👏

Naina: angad ye lo anguthi (ring) or mishti ko pahenao

angad ring leke mishti ko pahenata hain or jab mishti angad ko anguthi pahenane ke liye jati hain to ek dum piche se aawaz aati hain ki rook jao 😕 jab sablog piche mood ke dekh te hain to wahaper ek ladki hain jo red sadi pahene hua khadi hain or jo bahot hi khoobsurat lagti hain 😊

Naina: tum kon ho or yaha pe kyun aaye hui ho😡

phir sab log uski tarf dekh te hain or phir wo ladki kaheti hain ki mera naam kripa hain😊

Naina: kripa? lakin humne to tumhe yahan pahe le kabhi nahi dekha

Kripa: main jaanti hun ki tumne use pahele kabhi nahi deha lakin tumhare bete na muje kai baar dekha hain( angrelly)😡

ye sun kar sablog shock ho jate hain

Naina: ye tum kya bakwass kar rahi ho😡

kripa: bakwass? aghar main bakwas kar rahi hun to pooche apne bete se ki main bakwass kar rahi hun?

Naina: angad? kya tum is ladki ko jante ho?

Angad: nahi mamma, maine to ise kabhi bhi nahi dekha😕

Kripa: joothe 😡 kya tum ne muje kabhi bhi nahi dekha?

Angad: are tum ye kya bakwass kar rahi ho😡

Kripa? ohh to ab tumhe bhi bakwass lagne laga😡 jo tum ne mujse shadi ke waade kiye the wo bhi bakwass tha, mere saath itne din bitaaye wo bhi bakwass tha 😡

ye sun kar sab log shok ho jate hain even angad bhi😲

Mishti: Angad😕 kya ye ladki sach kahe rahi hain?

Angad: nahi ye jooth hain

Naina: ye ladki tum yahan aake sabit kya karna chahti ho?

Kripa: main sirf yahi kahe na chahti hun ki angad sirf mujse pyaar karta hain or usne mujse shadi karne ka faisla kiya tha lakin jab muje malum hua ki angad ne mere saath dhoka kiya hain or wo kisi or ke saath shadi kar raha hain to muje yaha ana pada ye shagai rok ne ke liye😭

guys i will continue 2morrow if u like it plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz let me know bcz this story is not end yet if its boring then let me know i will stop this story ok just waiting for ur ans sorry if its boring u bcz i m not a good in this was just trying

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Posted: 20 years ago
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kewl, new story. I loved it. Can't wait for u to continue. 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Lolz too good honey keep going
really gr8.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Love it so far. Plz cont.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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😲thank u guys

here......

Naina: main tumhari jaise ladkiyon ko bahot achhi tarah se jaanti hun jo achha parivaar dekha nahi or natak suru.

Karthik: tum ne kya soch liya ki tum ye sab kahogi or hum man jayenge abhi hi nikal jao barna dhakke marke nikalna padega😡

Angad: wait a minute😕 to tum muje bata sakti hon ki maine tumse kab shadi ka vaada kiya tha😡

Kripa: han mere pass wo proove hain or wo proove dekh kar tum mujse hi shadi karo ge or kisi se bhi nahi😊

Angad: ohhh ok to konsa prove😊

phir kripa uski saheli aliyah ko phone karke wahan boolati hain or ke papa ko bhi wahan boolati hain jo lawyer hain

aliyah: hey kripa 😊

aliyah waha per big smile deti pahonch jaati hain

Kripa: hi aliyah hi uncle

Kripa: uncle unhe wo prove dekhao jisme likha hain ki Angad ne mujse shadi karne ka faisla kiya tha or usme usne sign bhi ki thi

ye sab sunkar sab log 😲 angad to bahot hi shock ho jata hain

Angad: muje wo papers dekhao to sahi

Kripa:sure

Angad:😲 are ye to meri hi signature hain lakin ye maine nahi ki

Lawyer: jooth mat bolo angad ye tumhari hi signature hain or aghar tumne kripa se shadi nahi ki to tumhe ek ladki ki jindgi barbad karne ke liye jail bhi ho sakti hain😡

naina: lakin hum yakin kaise karle ki ye hamare Angad ki signature hain

Lawyer: ismain yakeen karneki baay hi nahi kyunki yahi sach hain or yahin angad ki siganature hain

Mishti: angad muje malum nahi tha ki tum mere saath itna bada dhoka karoge😭

Angad: lakin mishti mera yakeen karo ye sab jhooth hain

Lawyer: angad yahin sach hain or tumhe kripa se hi shadi karni padegi

phir sab log Kripa or lawyer per gussa ho jate hain

Naina: lakin mere angad ki shadi is ladki de nahi hogi

Lawyer: to to phir aapke bete ko jail main jana hoga or ye court ka bhi hukum hain

phir angad bahot gussa ho jata hain otr gusse main aakar kripa ke saath hadi karne ke liye tayar ho jata hain

Angad: himself , kripa tum sirf ek baar mere jindgi main aajao phir dekho ki main tumhare kaise jindgi tabah kar deta hun

Naina: angad ye tum kya kahe rahe ho😡

phir Mishti gussa hoke or rote rote waha se chali jaati hain or sablog chale jaate hain

Lawyer: ab angad ki sagai sirf kripa ke saath hogi or wo bhi kal

Angad: manjoor hain😡

phir sab log chale jaatein hain

Kripa: aliyah ab meri kkasam tab poori hongi jab main angad ke khandan ko tabah kar doongi😭 thank u very much uncle aghar aap nahi hote to main yahan tak nahi pahonch sakti thi

Lawyer: dont worry bete main jaanta hun ki tumahara parivaar kaise barbaad ho gaya or kaise tumne apne maa baap ko kho diya or han apni bahein harshiniko😔😭

ye sunke kripa bahot roti hain or aaliyah use saant karti hain

kripa: main jaanti hun ki main angad ke pass khush bilkul nahi rahungi wo muje sirf nafarat karega lakin muje uski koi parwah nahi main meri kkasam poori karne ke liye kuch bhi karane ke liye ytayaar hun

Aliyah: kripa main bhi tumhare saath hun or papa bhi tumhare saath hain

kripa: thank u aliyah

kripa: aliyah to main abhi ghar chalti hun kyunki abhi kal ki to tayari yan karni hain😊

phir kripa ghar chali jaati hain

ab kripa ne jo kkasam khaye hain use poori karne ka waqt aagaya hain

now i will continue my story 2 morrow if u like it

just let me know guys kyunki abhi to tumhe main kahani to ab suru hogi if u like it just let me knoe

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Posted: 20 years ago
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i think it is awesome plz continue
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Posted: 20 years ago
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your fan-fic is really nice gujjump, please continue soon and keep up the good work !!!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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wow!! awsum!!plz continue........... 😆 😆 😆

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