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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: jiya.k


Khan Sahib to Shehzaade

AADMI AADMI KO KYA DEGAA(Edited according HBAS)
POET: SUDARSHAN FAAKIR
Aadami aadami ko kya dega
What can one man gives to another?
Jo bhi dega wahi Khuda dega
Whatever is given, it is given by God
Mera qaatil hi mera munsib hai
My judge is my murderer too
Kya mere haq me faisala dega
How can he give judgement in my favour
👏 Hard hitting!

Hukumrano ko qariib se dekho
If you look at rulers closely
Unnka asli chehara tumhe darra dega
The real face of the ruler will make you afraid

That is exactly what we were discussing a couple of days ago!
Humse na puchho wafadari ka sila
Dont ask what I get for my loyalty
Dushmanon ka bhi dil hila dega
As the enemies heart will be melted


Ishq ka aab-e-hayaat pi liya "ye AKBAR"
I can drink the NECTAR of love "AKBAR"
Ab zalim shehzada bhi kya saza dega
What punishment can a cruel prince now give?

Ufff I enjoyed the read even in english... had I a better grasp of the language Urdu, I would have had a shudder, I guess!👏
Missing you loads Jiya 🤗


Originally posted by: jiya.k


All Baisas and Sahibas to Shehzaade and everyone who are trying to destroy Khan Sahib..

You tried to cage and contain him,
drain him of his worth.

Beat him down to nothing,
with relentless fists of words.

Control and de-soul him,
but he is too resilient.

Bamboo to your storm,
bending but not breaking.
WOW!👏 Where did you spot this poem?

Now taking back his true form.
Courage building like a tsunami,
ready to lay waste to your city of
empty promises.
Whistle podu!

He will rise above your shallow ruins
like the moon in all his fullness;
free and beautiful, luminous.

Your hungry night tried to devour him
but he made his own light
that darkness could not swallow.
This is excellent!

You are hollow and aimless.
He has carried life, hidden within;
a seedling, growing skyward
toward the sun of better things.

Your heart is salty earth;
you body is a walking mausoleum.
😲👏
You fear freedom and love control,
mistaking intimidation for true power
and captivity for devotion.

Devoid of emotion, your dead inside.
Wanted to bury him with you,
in a graveyard of lies.

But he will rise.
He will shine.
He will.
He is so much more powerful than you
UNSTOPPABLE.

How apt is this poem! WOOOW! Especially the last 3 paragraphs...
Was wide-eyed by the end of it!
🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago
Omg our Manu... SHE was the first one...
Please don't wake me up for a while...

ETA: Manu Selvi ... I tried to avoid 'major' conversations... and deleted all the 'names'
so... wow 👏
I don't know if I'd have been able to remember it all without cheating (peeping back to check) 😆
Edited by lashy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hi Jiya...Long time...😊
Your poems are Beautiful...Superrr!..👏👏⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

A chotu game...

Can you remember -
WHO said this to WHOM? And WHEN?
1) 'What's worse, she supposedly did this while staying at YOUR place... when she was a subject of YOUR investigation... so... why was it that I heard nothing about it?'
WHO: Shezaade
TO WHOM: AMK
WHEN: When Shezaade came to investigate AMK after his 20 days of solitary confinement

2) 'I cannot speak for the rest of my men... but, I will be there... attending the feast in remembrance of your sister... her soul will be appeased that a great cook like myself ate a feast in her honour!'
WHO: Chacha Jaan
TO WHOM: Heera
WHEN: When Chacha Jaan came to meet Heera and confused about feast Heera explained about the ritual and personally invite them for Durga's 13th day feast. and just before Chacha Jaan's plan of getting medical help from Heera for Bahadur.

3) 'The charcoal burners have been lit... the rest of the lamps doused... and I was going to replace this one in the waiting area...'
WHO: Heera
TO WHOM: AMK
WHEN: Just before their consummation when AMK inquired about what she's doing with the lamp.. ☺️
4) 'I saw you with Khan Sahib, in the meadows... you were spending time in his company... sharing a conversation... you both seemed close... trust me, I've said this to no one... you're fond of him, aren't you baisa?'
WHO: Dhani
TO WHOM: Heera
WHEN: After Khan Sahib saved her from Khalil, the next morning when she takes the bath at river side
5) 'Nothing really... but... but... the Sahib did cut himself while riding... so... he might want you to take a look at it'
WHO: Azeez
TO WHOM: Heera
WHEN: After badly injured Khan Sahib and Azeez returned from the chota Faizan mission and Azeez asked for Heera's medical help thinking Khan Sahib's state of mind.

6) 'It comes from my stables... my man sold it at a horse fair 2 weeks ago... and then, reported back... informing me, how the buyers had insulted his 'Sahib' after the auction!'
WHO: AMK
TO WHOM: Ratan Kaka
WHEN: When AMK declared that that's the third someone called him mean in that group. When Ratan Kaka claimed we only met twice then he explained

7) 'Please... understand where I come from... no one knows and understands that family like you do... you are the only one who can save her...'
WHO: Maharaj Chitranjan
TO WHOM: Mahender
WHEN: When he came to ask Mahender to marry Heera, when Mahender didn't accept his proposal (That Oscar acting...😡)

8) 'Concerned? My sole concern was for the Farmaan... and I've got the information I needed...'
WHO: AMK
TO WHOM: Chacha Jaan
WHEN: After he spurn Heera..😭

9) 'We have one last task for him... if he passes this task, we will let them go... leave them both in peace for an entire day, if that is what they wish...'
WHO: Bhabhijaan
TO WHOM: AMK
WHEN: After their wedding and just before sending them to their private room, Bhabhijaan gave a task for AMK to tell a poem about his bride

10) 'Riding alongside each other for an hour is no crime... besides, for the past three months, all I've had to go by were three messages and a portrait of yours!'
WHO: Mahender
TO WHOM: Durga
WHEN: When they ride together after the horse auction

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya.k


All Baisas and Sahibas to Shehzaade and everyone who are trying to destroy Khan Sahib..

You tried to cage and contain him,
drain him of his worth.

Beat him down to nothing,
with relentless fists of words.

Control and de-soul him,
but he is too resilient.

Bamboo to your storm,
bending but not breaking.

Now taking back his true form.
Courage building like a tsunami,
ready to lay waste to your city of
empty promises.

He will rise above your shallow ruins
like the moon in all his fullness;
free and beautiful, luminous.

Your hungry night tried to devour him
but he made his own light
that darkness could not swallow.

You are hollow and aimless.
He has carried life, hidden within;
a seedling, growing skyward
toward the sun of better things.

Your heart is salty earth;
you body is a walking mausoleum.

You fear freedom and love control,
mistaking intimidation for true power
and captivity for devotion.

Devoid of emotion, your dead inside.
Wanted to bury him with you,
in a graveyard of lies.

But he will rise.
He will shine.
He will.
He is so much more powerful than you
UNSTOPPABLE.

By John Mark Green
(Edited)

Wow what a superb poem, Jiya.. So apt and much needed one.. Thank you for sharing it here... 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago

Good evening/afternoon/morning lovely Sahibas.🤗

Periyamma, Lashy Sahiba, Chellam, Bindup, Shruthi, Manu, Selvi, Lana, Vathsy,Lavanya, Mitu, Sandy Begum, Bindu,Muskaan,Anindita, Aparna, Pallavi, Amita, Jiya, Harshu, Shagun, Jyothi, Adwi, Shivangi, Vrinda, Avika,Divi, Divya, Kanishka, Payal , Rekha, Rashmi, Namsika, Aishu , Kruthik and 6Bs.🤗

Page 156 ( 10 pages)<<<😃


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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: jiya.k


Khan Sahib to Shehzaade

AADMI AADMI KO KYA DEGAA(Edited according HBAS)
POET: SUDARSHAN FAAKIR
Aadami aadami ko kya dega
What can one man gives to another?
Jo bhi dega wahi Khuda dega
Whatever is given, it is given by God
Mera qaatil hi mera munsib hai
My judge is my murderer too
Kya mere haq me faisala dega
How can he give judgement in my favour
Hukumrano ko qariib se dekho
If you look at rulers closely
Unnka asli chehara tumhe darra dega
The real face of the ruler will make you afraid
Humse na puchho wafadari ka sila
Dont ask what I get for my loyalty
Dushmanon ka bhi dil hila dega
As the enemies heart will be melted
Ishq ka aab-e-hayaat pi liya "ye AKBAR"
I can drink the NECTAR of love "AKBAR"
Ab zalim shehzada bhi kya saza dega
What punishment can a cruel prince now give?



>>> Wow
Powerful lines...so true ! 👏 👏 👏



Originally posted by: jiya.k


All Baisas and Sahibas to Shehzaade and everyone who are trying to destroy Khan Sahib..

You tried to cage and contain him,
drain him of his worth.

Beat him down to nothing,
with relentless fists of words.

Control and de-soul him,
but he is too resilient.

Bamboo to your storm,
bending but not breaking.

Now taking back his true form.
Courage building like a tsunami,
ready to lay waste to your city of
empty promises.

He will rise above your shallow ruins
like the moon in all his fullness;
free and beautiful, luminous.

Your hungry night tried to devour him
but he made his own light
that darkness could not swallow.

You are hollow and aimless.
He has carried life, hidden within;
a seedling, growing skyward
toward the sun of better things.

Your heart is salty earth;
you body is a walking mausoleum.

You fear freedom and love control,
mistaking intimidation for true power
and captivity for devotion.

Devoid of emotion, your dead inside.
Wanted to bury him with you,
in a graveyard of lies.

But he will rise.
He will shine.
He will.
He is so much more powerful than you
UNSTOPPABLE.

By John Mark Green
(Edited)


Superb 👏 👏 👏

Jiya di 🤗
Encouraging posts ! 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Ahem! After last game's results... someone is neatening and polishing their entries to perfection, aren't they? 😉

Bindup Chellam Ufff... 👏
Edited by lashy - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

Please don't wake me up for a while...

ETA: Manu Selvi ... I tried to avoid 'major' conversations... and deleted all the 'names'
so... wow 👏
I don't know if I'd have been able to remember it all without cheating (peeping back to check) 😆

Lashy Sahiba, you call it peeping, I call it doing the research.😃

We are 52 chapters along, quite impossible to remember the dialogues especially if they are not the major ones. After my disastrous attempt once before where I failed miserably, I vowed to do my HW before answering such a quiz.😊

And it is not easy to trace events of the given lines, we must have a little recollection of the scene before zeroing in on it.😳

Manu, Selvi, Chellam, Bindup - that was fast, Sahibas. 👏 Haven't peeked at your answers, though.😳

But Manu really relishes quizzes like this. 👏

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

A chotu game...

Can you remember -
WHO said this to WHOM? And WHEN?
1) 'What's worse, she supposedly did this while staying at YOUR place... when she was a subject of YOUR investigation... so... why was it that I heard nothing about it?'

2) 'I cannot speak for the rest of my men... but, I will be there... attending the feast in remembrance of your sister... her soul will be appeased that a great cook like myself ate a feast in her honour!'

3) 'The charcoal burners have been lit... the rest of the lamps doused... and I was going to replace this one in the waiting area...'

4) 'I saw you with Khan Sahib, in the meadows... you were spending time in his company... sharing a conversation... you both seemed close... trust me, I've said this to no one... you're fond of him, aren't you baisa?'

5) 'Nothing really... but... but... the Sahib did cut himself while riding... so... he might want you to take a look at it'

6) 'It comes from my stables... my man sold it at a horse fair 2 weeks ago... and then, reported back... informing me, how the buyers had insulted his 'Sahib' after the auction!'

7) 'Please... understand where I come from... no one knows and understands that family like you do... you are the only one who can save her...'

8) 'Concerned? My sole concern was for the Farmaan... and I've got the information I needed...'

9) 'We have one last task for him... if he passes this task, we will let them go... leave them both in peace for an entire day, if that is what they wish...'

10) 'Riding alongside each other for an hour is no crime... besides, for the past three months, all I've had to go by were three messages and a portrait of yours!'


Annotations... 😲

(1)Shehzade to AMK. Chapter 50. Part 1. After Solitary confinenent.
(2) Chachajaan to Heera. Chapter 13. Accepting invitation to feast.
(3)Heera to Khan Sahib. Chapter 44. Just before bed-side lamp discussion. ☺️
(4)Dhani to Heera. Forgot chapter number.
(5) Azeez to Heera. Chapter 38. Calling her to treat Khan Sahib.
(6)Khan Sahib to Ratan Kaka & Co. Chapter5. Explaining being called mean thrice. 🤓
(7)Chitranjan to the swine. Chapter 9. When he takes Heera's wedding proposal to him thinking that he is a shining-armour knight. Little did he know that he was a pesty plight.🤢
(8) AMK to Chachajaan just after she gifts him laddoos and he turns her away.😭
(9) Rosejaan during Nikaah to the wedding party asking Khan Sahib for apoem. Chapter 33.😳
(10)The swine to Durga.😡 Chapter 3.
Edited by Sandhya.A - 7 years ago

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