Originally posted by: cosmosandme
i thought previous chapter was horrifying, but this one beat it. professor swallowed keys, what's he ? an anaconda ! he must be taken into the sequel of saw for his creepiest performance.
But Jigu its that act that showed how his deviance was worse than anything a 'normal' person is capable of na.. cos hurting someone else, knifing etc is something comparatively level-headed people can be driven to too.. but this swallowing of key shows the extreme lengths he could go to.. and in a way, that is what pushed Jalal to such lengths too!
And swallowing a key is no big deal dear...its not even sharp really wouldn't injure your food pipe..
google up xrays of stuff people swallow - you'll be in for a SHOCK!
On a lighter note, children are always swallowing stuff.. my friend's kid swallowed a huge coin a couple of years ago... she rushed to the ER... the doc said don't worry.. he'll crap it out in a few days and that's exactly what happened...😆
above all blood coming out from door was terrible, renu is too brave. she can give jo a tough competition in that regard.
Sweetheart that one second was a 'look away' moment - even for me as I wrote it.. I debated whether I should put it in.. but then, it's those aspects that actually make the situation FEEL real.. and make us FEEL for the characters... We feel like 'Oh God.. this is terrible' cos that makes Jalal and Renu and Abdul more human! Both of them are lying near the door and Jalal's artery had been severed ... it's bound to happen sooner or later... btw, its that second that made Renu realize how bad the two of them have it inside...
unlike a bollywood movie where hero breaks down door with knife wound and carries heroine down three floors, etc etc... this is how it'd happen in reality na... gritty... and unfortunate...but... then, after such agni pareeksha we feel like cheering for these two even more..
honestly all characters in your story from psycho to dog are just perfect. specially the positive characters awe you like anything. i wish i could have them all once you complete the story.
And what would you do with them Jigu?😆
jalal is beyond words, he is the boy any girl would crave. he let himself writhe in pain but made abdul promise to rescue jodha first. gave his lucky taviz to jo to have all luck. who does that but a guy hopelessly and selflessly in love. jodha being in coma will shatter him to the core.
Jalal
by the bye i loved jalal's dream, very significant. describes his life altogether. i must say he sees very pertinent dreams.
I know you know what it was.. but just adding anyway... it wasn't a dream.. he was having a near-death experience... the white-light he was seeing is something people commonly speak of when they're nearly on the verge of death and then come back to life... an out of body experience...😳 scientists explain it as something to do with the 'electrical impulses' in our brain working away to give our bodies the jolt to get back to life..
i can't generally watch or read something teary, but the emotional ride you take us on is something i love.it's ironic that i enjoy it so much. it makes me emotional for sure, but i like it this way. it's just like serial, jalal crying for jodha is treat to watch and in NJAPA to read. i really really wanna read the next chapter ASAP.please update soon.
loads of love 🤗
Awww thanks so so so much sweetie... loved reading your words 🤗
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