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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#911

Originally posted by: vinitaj27

Oh god! U really r too young. But amazing writer for such a young age. U know my daughter is same age as you.

heya!😳 I know am young😉 Your daughter's around my age, aww🤗

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Anushka

@...Anushka...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#912

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

yep shep😆

unbelievable😲

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anshita priyadarshni

@marshi

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#913

OAweme blossom uppdate
Let me take the main points of this update and my pov fast
The jo ja journey end they back to agra a very good scene and words anu u are developing day by day and have become a great versatile writer

Nxt ruku jallu bonding ofcourse we hate ruku
But ur motive was good to show bcoz it is univeral truth only two relatoin are upto eternity true love true frndship right and here ruku had blurted her heart out jallu was sad actually he should be rather after all she was his bff
So i loved it though
Nxt comes how jalal trys to find solace in jo company it shows their soul bonding
I loved it totally
Last and my fav mischefious and bold jo
Tiday shes the star of the update though a little lesd part of her still she had stolen the show today
And know anu u are a grt writer dear am glad i know u are my bff
U had so grown up in writting ur every update makes u even better though i am not a good writer in real i have my own crap though leave it i can only say love u anu am speechlesd
Regards
Ur buddhu bekar bff cum wrter
Anshita
I am speechless u are chota packet bada dhamaka u know .

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Nandhakishore

@shiningstar77

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#914

Awesome update,Anu...

loved it..

thanks for the pm😊

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@HappySmiles

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#915

Tu Cuento es muy bien!!😃 Mi encanta!! (your story is very good, I love it!!!) Trying to write some Spanish here, hope I didn't mess up!🤪😆

Anyways, don't mind my silliness and let's go on to what I liked.😛

Our bold Jodha..😳
Ruks!! You know, for the first time I have seen Rukaiya as not being that bad, all due to your wonderful writing talents and the way you wrote it. I could understand how Rukaiya was feeling when Jalal was ignoring her. After all, they are best friends.😆
Lastly, loved Jodha and Jalal's kiss.. It was very cutteee!!!!😳😳

Great Job Anu!! Keep up your hard work!! 👏 You are too cool!😎

Love,

Pookhi😳

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#916

awesome update.last part was excellent... continue soon nd do pm

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Divya Louis

@Divya879

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#917

Sorry sorry bebo I know I'm really late ,😭 I'm really sorry for that , and well on to the update amazing updates bebo! Just wow!😲👏The journey was memorable for them it was the words that u used in ur writing was just awesome blossom u write so well 👏🤢like I've said to aisha as well you guys definetly have a smooth story line where else my story round in circles😆😆. And I'm soo excited that jo will become MUZ Haiyeee 😳, I really liked ruks's part how she blurted out all she wanted to say which was true and sad.😳😭 After all they are best friends and jo and ja bonding soulfully in these updates just wow!😳

Update soon bebo!😃

Loved it 👏

Love u 😳

Edited by Divya879 - 11 years ago

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abhi

@abhi786

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#918

Anusha wonderful chapter, so both JJ feelings changed, now they came to agra after a memorable and wonderful moments they spend with each other..Ruqu declare her love & I can understand while Jalaal couldn't able to pacify her, as he already loves JO and he came to Jo hojra to spend there some time... Jalaal so lovingly kissed JO on her cheek saying he loves her, while Jo also gave her answer...It's not going to be easy for Jalaal to control & away from this bold Jodha who took the lead to kiss him first and later Jalaal guiding her...

Waiting for next update, did SR in next chapter ? I would like to see JJR equation now, please don't make JO scarifying her love ? for sake of Ruqu ?