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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: neiralove
Oh Shabz! This was so poignant--I loved how Nishi refused to speak with Nachiket until the very last second...that's such a little kid thing to do 😳 😆 And I liked how Nachiket says "7 days or I am back"--that's just what Ragini needed to hear. Perfect! 😊

Thank you for liking and yes she is her papa's princesss and yes ragini needed that

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roneeta

@ronitfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

That's for you, Shabz!

This was beautiful - so much heartbreak and sadness about him leaving but so adorable, the way NR always find moments for just the two of them and they're all so special <3

Write more please please!

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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: ronitfan
That's for you, Shabz!

This was beautiful - so much heartbreak and sadness about him leaving but so adorable, the way NR always find moments for just the two of them and they're all so special <3

Write more please please!

:)

Thank you so much sukhi i have the last 2 parts nearly ready will be posting in the next few minutes

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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Part 8

One Week later
Nachiket had been ringing every day but there was still no sign on the twins visas coming thru. He rung ragini picked up "hi sweeheart" "hi" "whats wrong ragini" "nothing nachiket" "i can tell from your voice" "nishi is not well" "whats wrong with her" ragini could hear the panic in his voice "she has a temperature and she is not eating properly the doctors gave some medicine she is better" "thats it ragini i am coming back" "nachiket no you were right this is important" "nothing is more important then my family" he put the phone down.

Same day evening
Ragini had just given nishi her medicine when the phone rang "hi jaan how is nishi" "she is better i will give her the phone" "nishi you ok beta" "papa yes when you coming back" "soon beta very soon" nishi smiled at this. Ragini took the phone "ragini i have booked flights for u and kids tomorrow evening" "the visas came

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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Part 8 contiuned

thru will nishi be ok to fly" "she will be fine especially if she knows she is going to see her papa" "ragini just pack the necessary things i will get everything else i love you see you soon" "i love you too" she put the phone down she was so happy they would finally be together.

Tomorrow evening
Ragini had packed just their clothes nachiket had rung to say not to bring anything else he would have everything ready. The kids were excited about seeing their papa again karan and dimpy were taking them to the airport. They said bye to everyone and off they went.

Airport
Ragini had checked in and they were waiting at the gate to board her phone rang "hi sweethart" "hi nachiket" "everything ok have you boarded" "no we are just waiting" "how is nishi" "she is fine now as soon as i told her we were going to see you she felt better" she heard him laugh on the phone. "I will see you soon" "nachiket" "i will be waiting at the airport don't worry ok love you" "love you too"

USA
Ragini and the kids landed it had been a long flight thankfully cause it was a night flight the kids had slept most of the flight. They got through passport control then they had to wait for their luggage. The twins were in a buggy ragini told ranbir to keep hold of nishis hand and not let go of the buggy. She sat them down on the chairs while she went to get the lugagge. Nachiket was waiting outside. Finally ragini got the luggage. She got the kids ranbir pushed the buggy and nishi was holding the side and ragini was pushing the luggage trolley. Nachiket spotted them he got to the front when ranbir spotted him "papa" nishi ran into his arms he hugged her "hello princess u ok" he kissed her he then hugged ranbir "you ok beta" ranbir nodded he kissed the twins who were asleep. He looked up and saw ragini he hugged her "hello beautiful" "nachiket" he took the trolley from ragini and they walked out. Ragini you sit here with the kids and i will get the car. Nachiket put the luggage in the car and drove it to where they were sitting. They got in the car they were finally on their way home.

Home USA
He parked up and picked nishi up and ranbir got out while ragini got out of the car and picked the twins up. They went inside ragini walked in it was a beautiful house he put nishi down "papa can we choose our rooms" ranbir asked "of course you can" nishi and ranbir ran off to choose their rooms. He walked upto to ragini shall i show u the house he showed her all of the house "its beautiful nachiket everything" "if you want to change anything" "no everything is perfect"

Evening
The kids were playing ragini had not seen them so happy for months. Nachiket was playing with the twins when the door bell rang. Ragini opened it a beautiful girl was standing in front of her "hi mrs khanna right" "yes" "i am sonu dr khannas PA" "come in" she walked in ragini followed. "Hi sonu you ok" "fine i have some cases for you to look at" "ok you met ragini meet my kids" he introucded her to the kids. Ragini came and sat next to the twins shall we go into the study. He came out 20 mins later with sonu ragini look at these resumes and see which you like we can hire them. "Hire them" "yes someone to help u with the kids and the housework". He turned to the kids right what do you want for dinner ragini what do u want "anything nachiket" i will be back in a bit i will go get dinner.

Living room USA
Ragini was sat with Sonu looking at the resumes. Ragini chose three. "I will arrange interviews for u" "thank you" "can i say something mrs khanna" "yes" "i am just his PA i saw the way you looked at me" "i am sorry i" "your husband is handsome but no one has a chance and you realise that 5 mins after meeting him he only talks about you and the kids he loves you so much his eyes light up when he talks about you" "i am sorry" "its ok mrs khanna you are one lucky woman to have a husband who loves her so much" nachiket was back sonu u still here stay for dinner now "no dr khanna i have plans see you tomz" "see you" "kids come on dinner ragini come on"

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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Last Part

Evening
Nachiket was sat with ragini in his arms watching the kids playing. Ragini got up "nishi ranbir come on bedtime" "we want to play some more maa please" "its already late" nishi went and sat in her papas lap so did ranbir. Ragini looked at them "i guess papa is putting you two to bed" he picked them both up "yes papa will".

Bedroom
Nachiket came in ragini was putting clothes away he grabbed her "what are you doing" "i am just tidying up a bit" "leave this and go to sleep you have had a long day just rest" she got into bed and nachiket went into the bathroom and changed and got into bed. He took ragini in his arms "nachiket" "hmm" "why do u want to hire someone" "because you need to look after yourself more" "i am fine" "you run around the kids all day and in these last months i was not there to look after you that is going to change you have lost weight" "no i have not" "this is me ragini i know" she cuddled upto him she knew what he was saying was true. He kissed her on top of her head "and no need to get up tonight for the twins i will manage" she looked at him "but nachiket" "just sleep ok" he held her close she went to sleep in his arms.

Morning 10am
Ragini woke up and saw the time omg it was 10 nachiket was up she quickly got up and went up.

Kitchen
She walked in and the kids were sat having breakfast the twins were in their highchairs and nachiket was feeding nishi. He saw her "morning sweetheart" "morning why did you not wake me" he walked upto her and kissed her "because you needed the sleep thats why now do you want breakfast" "you made all this" he laughed "i am good but not that good i ordered in" "you not working today" "no i have taken a couple of days off so i can show you and the kids the city and there are some playgroups you can take the kids to aswell i want to show you".

2 weeks later
Ragini and the kids had settled into their life in the USA nachiket had made it easier for them. They had someone to help around the house. Nachiket had been back at work for a week or so.

Evening
Ragini had made dinner his favourite she was just waiting for him to come home the kids were all in bed. He came home. Ragini was in the kitchen she felt his arms around her waist he kissed her on her neck "hello beautiful" "hello" "the kids asleep" "yes" "are the twins feeling better" "yes they are the doctor said they were improving" he kissed her again "do you not want dinner" "dinner can wait" she turned to face him he started kissing her and they heard aagham crying. He stopped and looked at her "do your sons have a alarm that when ever dad is romancing they cry" "so they just my sons" "well" "when they distrub your romance they just my sons other times they our sons" "yes" she smiled "let me go and see my sons then" he smiled and let her go. She came back about 20 mins later he was sat on the sofa she sat next to him "my sons are asleep" "good did you tell them not to disturb us" she hit him in the chest "nachiket" "i am sorry" he pulled her into his arms "i love you ragini" "i love you too nachiket" they just sat there in each others arms where they belonged.

The End

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loveleen3

@loveleen3

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Oh dear Shabz!

How do you do this every time? I had a smile plastered on my face the whole time while I read this. Thank you so much for writing this and updating so fast. I enjoyed reading it so much. You are so good with handling so many characters and so many situations. I loved loved it! :D

Waiting for your next story now! :D

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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: loveleen3
Oh dear Shabz!
How do you do this every time? I had a smile plastered on my face the whole time while I read this. Thank you so much for writing this and updating so fast. I enjoyed reading it so much. You are so good with handling so many characters and so many situations. I loved loved it! :D

Waiting for your next story now! :D

Thank you so much for reading and liking and your lovely comments. Any prompts welcome

Edited by shabz50 - 10 years ago

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neiralove

@neiralove

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

I just love your stories because they bring the characters to life perfectly, capturing their every emotion! Whether the updates are sexy or emotional, you do justice to all types of writing. Thanks for writing this gorgeous piece and please write more soon! 😃

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shabana

@shabz50

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: neiralove
I just love your stories because they bring the characters to life perfectly, capturing their every emotion! Whether the updates are sexy or emotional, you do justice to all types of writing. Thanks for writing this gorgeous piece and please write more soon! 😃

Thank you for reading and you are too kind with your comments. Any prompts welcome

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