ArShi SS ~ Back In Time

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@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Ha ha .. whatte a lovely story. So much fun. Brilliant it was. Lovely. It was such a light read.

Cheers

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yizhihenanjing

@yizhihenanjing

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

I have just read the whole story in one go and I must say that you are a truly awesome writer, Lizzie, I'm glad that I found your work. Apart from the unique concept, you have such a beautiful way of story narration and wonderful illustration of characters' emotions. It is a romantic happy light story but I don't know why I feel so emotional and carried away, the way you describe Arnav's feelings, his every small action, gesture and taking care of Khushi give the chill to my bones, I can feel how immense his love is, especially the part that you compare and contrast his way of thinking of Khushi in the future and Khushi in the presence completely moves my heart. This is definitely one of the best IPKKND track story for me to now and it really means a lot, a beautiful unique journey of repentance for Arnav. Thank you so much again for making this Arshi version, things are taken care of well with logics, and I definitely love the way the story focuses entirely in Arshi rather than other characters. Love this so much.

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Awesome story!!

Loved it.

Enjoyed reading this.

Very beautifully written

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Labitha

@labi

Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

An amazing concept presented beautifully by the very talented Ms.Lizzie.👏Loved it...loved it...loved it.😃

You are a very beautiful writer, dear.Whatever you write has a beautiful flow with a crisp storyline and awesome dialogues.👏

I am glad that you wrote this story for ArShi too.😃Thank You for that member who requested you to do that.🤗

I think the film you got inspiration was Action Replay starring Akshay Kumar and Aishwarya Rai, is it?🤪

Coming to the story, like the title suggests back to time where he could change the past happenings and write according to his wish.

I am glad that Arnav didn't even spare a minute to send out a proposal to Khushi's family so that he could be with his Khushi as soon as possible.

Arnav in this story is so romantic and a dream husband for everyone.He allowed her to continue her studies and always made her comfortable in terms of physical intimacy also.His understanding is on a different level.Glad that Khushi took that bold step on their first year anniversary😉 otherwise this Arnav would ask her to wait for another year.😉😆

Loved this story so much.Loved every scene you portrayed, loved their nok- jhoks, loved everything about this story.Really a beautiful IPK in an alternate universe.Hats off to you.👏