Arshi OS: The Thief of Hearts Part 2, 11/3/16

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KtotheM

@KtotheM

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Interesting start
Mmm agent Raizada, nice twist, different from his usual persona of a fashion icon in most stories
Poor khushi feel bad for her, she is now paying for being an honest employee
Thanks for the pm

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shipra.aqua

@shipra.aqua

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Oh that's an awesome is series...

I certainly want to beat the shit out of u raizada but bcoz u felt bad chalo maff kiya... 😉

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hararnav

@hararnav

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Loved the start...

Poor khushi... Am sure she is nit gonna spare raizada so easily

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Nilpori

@Nilpori

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Wow!!! The concept is very fresh...let's see how ASR will woe Khushi...

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sunitikapoor

@sunitikapoor

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

WOW...a new concept by you. So, Arnav is playing CID and he kissed Khushi on their first meet. Love this Agent Arnav. Awesome start. Waiting for the next part.

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Shilpi

@shils28

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Yayeee... Fantastic update! Super hot! 👏

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Ok, that is quite an interesting story.

Arnav is a cop, but he joined lavanya in the guise as her partner and lavanya actually is a thief!

But why Arnav kissed Khushi? Just to shut her mouth? But he seemed got attracted to her.

Lavanya fired Khushi. Now what gonna happen? Will Arnav contract Khushi? But she hates him after his false allegation.

The next chapter gonna be an interesting read.

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shalbi

@shalbi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#58

that was something...

but feeling bad for Khushi, she just shared her first kiss with him and he turned it down like droping a bucket of cold ice on her..

Continue soon

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Horizon

@Horizon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#59

That is one exciting read wiwy. Your breezy narrative style grabs around as always... very interesting foothold of the characters and storyline.. look forward to the next.. and time to catch up with your other story soon..

Edited by Horizon - 9 years ago