OS||The Pain of a mother's heart||Link Part2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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For all my reader- this one is a sad OS and surprisingly my first attempt of writing an OS!
Forgive my follies! 😃

Here it goes...

30th November 2012,
For others it was a beautiful rainy day...but for Khushi the day was full of dreadful storms entering her life!
The day she lost her child.

She, had been the happiest to know that a small little life was inside her belly...She was the mother of Arnav's child and the baby was their mark of love

*flashback*

Khushi : Arnavji I want to tell you something important...Umm??

Arnav : Yeah Khushi go on...*he was still busy typing on his laptop*

Khushi : Arnavji actually I've got something to confess.

Arnav : What Khushi..? Now you are scaring me...Go on...

Khushi : Uh huh Ummm...

Arnav : Say it Dammit!

Khushi : Uh Umm I know a person in between our...love...I...Arnavji...I know a person whom I maybe love more than you...Sorry Arnavji...forgive me..

Arnav : WHAT?? *shocked* But Khushi I love you and you loved me too...and ...
*Khushi cuts him in between*

Khushi : Let me complete Arnavji...First tell me ...Chotta Laad Governor or Chotti Sanka Devi?

Arnav : Uh? Khushi stop all this and tell me...

Khushi : You still can't guess...Uffo stupid Laad Governor...I am pregnant Arnavji!

Arnav : Hey I am not stup...WHAT???? KHUSHI THIS IS NOT A FUNNY OKAY? Oh my god!
sweetheart I can't believe this ...
*He lifts her up in joy* ❤️
He was the happiest...He embraced her as if his whole life was stuck to Khushi...and Indeed it was!

*flashback ends*

She was crying bitterly...she felt as if her whole life was shattered....It was hard for her to breathe...everything became hazy...
and there she was lying, unconscious....breathing heavily...but the only difference was that Arnav was there with her...holding her tight...trying to take away all the Pain of a mother's heart...







END
Sorry readers if it was depressing...but it was just an attempt to write something serious and touching!

Your likes and comments means everything to a writer + I am new into writing stuff so please encourage me!
😊


Love all ❤️
Bani 😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
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No..

THIS CANT END HERE.

Lol

But it was beautifully written babes..

<3

tc
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shimmer_Vani

No..


THIS CANT END HERE.

Lol

But it was beautifully written babes..

<3

tc


AWH! even I don;t like sad endings but maybe i can write another chapter for this one 😃
Glad u liked it 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww such a sad yet an great OS!!! Please dont end it here!!! I need an happy ending!!! Picture abhi baki hai dost!!! 😆

Please write more
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A sad but short OS very nice.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awww Bani... U see I am a vry emotional person... :"(
Luvd ur OS... :)
U shud write more... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely os...
emotional one...
u should write more often...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely OS!
But such an abrupt ending!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Bani I did not know that u write so well ... U proved to be my frnd n btw I am going to start writing os tonight !!!!! ;D 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aarika

Bani I did not know that u write so well ... U proved to be my frnd n btw I am going to start writing os tonight !!!!! ;D 😊


Oh Aaaru So honoured to be your friend 😆
Finally Ek OS likh hi legi tu 😃


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