OS - ASR - Khushi, I HATE Anjali..!! - Page 4

wah nisha

Nisha I loved it

hey ni, very good !!

finally made Arnav say sorry to khushi the way you wanted ha ? Good job ! Liked it.

😃

Very nice. I do hope you will continue to write more.

awesome

why don't the CVs learn something from our OSs ,its so well written ! Instead of showing so many tracks at one go why can't they keep it as simple as this OS!

@Nisha Can't say its your first.I loved the way you showed Arnav apologizing to Khushi... With all the necessary flashbacks! Keep it up hun!👍🏼

Nisha, this is awesome! This is exactly how Arnav's apology to Khushi should have been on the show. I felt the guilt, the anger, the remorse, and the sincerity in his words...you have written in beautifully. I wish the writers of our show could understand emotions and portray the apology the way you have here. Arnav's apology on the show was not half as heartfelt, deep or meaningful. The thing I most wanted was for him to address every single wrong he had committed against her and take accountability for his actions. That's exactly what you did in your story and that's why it connected with me! I didn't get that connection from the 5 minute apology in the show, and neither did the audience...which is why it left no impact. The only thing that would complete it is if he said that today, Khushi is the most important person in his life.

What a beautiful love story. Great confession from Arnav. (Although would never happen in reel life!) I love how you stayed true to their character with their monologues. You should continue writing, I didn't want to stop until the end, and I had tears in my eyes! tfs.

AWESUM...LUVED THIS