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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Wow what an update
She took the initiative
She talked to him and apologized
Then to manao him she made him his favorite food
He melted at her gestures and accepted her apology
Finally they both accepted each other and are united
What a story
Loved it

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-
wow that was such a beautiful story.
Loved it so much.
Beautiful ending to a wonderful story.

Thanks sona!! Much love 😳

Edited by Barunkidiwani - 8 years ago

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Fa13
Beautiful chap...👏
Lovely ending..😳
Loved it!
Thanks for the pm.

Ma'shaa Allah amazing writer you are!👏👍🏼
Do write more story on AdNi will love to read ur work!😃

I am glad you liked the story. Thanks for the compliment. will definitely pm you whenever i come up with new stories on Advini. 😊

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
well written..

Thank you 😊

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Wow what an update
She took the initiative
She talked to him and apologized
Then to manao him she made him his favorite food
He melted at her gestures and accepted her apology
Finally they both accepted each other and are united
What a story
Loved it

Thank you 2filmy. I actually thought to give it a twist and made Chandini approach Advay. Hamaara Advay kitna manaayega. It was high time that she accepted her love for him 😆. I am happy that you liked the story...

Jeez but you lost your position today of commenting first 😆

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hailly

@hailly

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Awesome update.
Loved it. Thanks for the pm.

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AshtaVasus

@AshtaVasus

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

Nazia 🤗

It will be a long time for us to see the childhood friends union as lovers in the Show.

But you gave us the treat here without making us wait.

Lovely. Do write more.

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Loveena

@lovesick23

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

This was absolute bliss. I loved how you added parts of spoilers :)

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: hailly
Awesome update.
Loved it. Thanks for the pm.

Thanks dear 😊

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Nazia

@Barunkidiwani

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+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

Nazia 🤗
It will be a long time for us to see the childhood friends union as lovers in the Show.
But you gave us the treat here without making us wait.
Lovely. Do write more.

Thanks for your beautiful response. Will pm whenever I come up with new works 😊

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