Shivika 4S:Do You Also Get The Same Feeling? Epilogue:Page 17 /18-4-17

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Loved it.. sure in show this won't happen but you wrote beautifully that I was able to imagine while reading this..

Wonderful work, if u can write more on this shot do continue or write more good stories

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Sanavi

@Sanavi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Great OS dear.
U had me bound till the very end.

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meetaa_13

@meetaa_13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Loved it !! It was beautiful

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farinaks

@farinaks

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Something really hot is going to happen ...awsum plot 👏

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jeenal

@jeenal20

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Wohooo... That was just super mushy...

Loved it

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Kshithi

@Muggle_Diaries

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Wonderful Anika...

You do have a way with your words...

I loved every second of this OS. This is everything I wish would happen on the show. It is not easy to write a sensual scene as I have recently found out. You have made it seem effortless. Do keep writing.

Love

Kshithi

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Anika Patel

@AnikaPatel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: falala333
This was awesome!!

The passion and possessiveness and intimacy were all just on another level 😳

I need more writing from you know... Because this was amazing!

Thank You For The Wonderful Comment 😳 I Might Be Continuing This OS. Hopefully You'll Enjoy That Update Too.

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Shivy

@Gotohelldil

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Posted: 8 years ago

#28

This one was totally awesome , sensual , comforting and what not!!
You surely have a way with words 👏
So much passion
I would love to see it in the show but it's not gonna happen
It's just mind blowing
Aww possessive Shivaay baby

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Anika Patel

@AnikaPatel

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Posted: 8 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: shinelove
Awesome 👏...loved it.. rudy part was really funny.😆 .even i hope he comes in tom s episode and also the one who rescues sumu even if with anikha . .
shivika part well written yar there passionate yearning emotions for eachother ☺️. . Best was how u showed a bold side of anikha in romance ..I'll like her to be this bold and suprise shivay in the show just like this os.. ❤️

I Love Rudra's Teasings. He's The Best, Even I'm Hoping That He's The One Who Interrupts Them And Hopefully Not Mahi 😆 Nakuul And Surbhi Slayed Last Night's Scene And They Also Inspired The Emotions In This OS 😳 Tadibaaz Anika Would Definitely Shock Shivaay. 😆 Thank You For The Amazing Comment