The dispiriting of a good man.. - Page 3

Originally posted by: premparbat

Yet another brilliant and smart title - The De(spirit)ing of a Good Man .. hi there rocker...😊.

Loved your starting lines - "Foolish is the devil for he knows not that the works of the righteous speak for themselves . While the devil is no one's friend not even his own ,he is his own worst enemy, god help the devil"

thanks... can come out with some good bits

The Good man in recent times finds himself to the the pariah of the family . The family that he loves does not trust him and all his efforts are in vain. All he wants is to protect them from the evil designs of the Avasthi family and is willing to do whatever it takes.

must be hard but he never lost faith in him or his family..

The Tripathi reach the mandir in a procession with the king leading his grandson to the coronation ceremony. The reluctant grandson turns to his wife telling her of how he is a misfit for the throne but since he is the sole heir to the family the burden falls on him irrespective . He does not see himself in this role but agrees for now. Viplav knows the job of a priest is not his calling but ready to play along as long as it keeps Raja away.

sweet whisperings during the worship was a tender moment

Raja and family keeping up appearances join the Tripathi family waiting for an opportune time to create havoc to interrupt the ceremony. Raja is successful in contaminating the water to be offered to the gods and is stopped by the pandits . History repeats itself and Phool Chand the old foe of the family jumps at the chance to show Dashrath Tripathi down . Like the earlier instance he instigates the crowd to malign Viplav and to meet the same punishment as once for Dhani . The mob charge at him to be stopped by his family.

phool chand.such a familiar character.. an instigator in every troubled spot..

And of course the best scene of the day . The mob knows no right or wrong . It simply responds to a frenzy . Dhani the most frail of the crowd watching this attack charges at them to stand between her love and the attackers who question his moral values. A dispirited Viplav quietly watches his wife stand up for him against the keepers of morality . "you question this man morals ...the one single person who stood up for the vidhwa's ...who finds happiness in giving happiness to others .." Love shorn in her eyes for the man she worships and the strength and conviction she receives from him . Viplav softly asks her to stop but there is no stopping her challenging them as if the lioness in her is awakened. Loved this scene watching the deep bond between the two and how thy fight for each other.

well put prem.. loved your expression.. the look on his face was that of an artist who painted the new intrepid dhani

Raja not to be discouraged convinces the pandits in attendance to pass the baton to him as the uttraadhikari gloating at his victory ..but there is many a slp between the cup and lip. A voice from the past calls out to Raja ...STOP !!! For Viplav it is music to his ears ...

👏 you summed it well premratan... such a cliff hanger...

An episode that is making way to oust Raja. What happens to Shallu ? The precap looks scary . Where does the story go from here ? Lets be patient.

well mate we know how it will pan out... funny I Couldn't see the bit when viplav is pierced...in the side... in my sat take made it up...erhh as best as I could.. thank you ratna rocker for giving a lovely comment much love ,your hammie

Originally posted by: Dolly-heart

hello dolly ..pardons for late respond..
Hammie, your title is superb, and the Devil Raja the Creepo will get whats coming to him soon ,that will ring in his ears for a long time...

yes.. looks like the man's a goner

The green monster is stirring within the Creepo and he can't wait to see the accolades that Viplav is getting come his way soon...

all good things come to who wait like viplav..

Creepo does what he does best and spikes the Ganga Jal with booze... I cannot believe

that nobody smelled the booze while he is emptying it but as soon as the lid is off the Kalash then all of their noses start tweaking...😕

and who should whip up PC

I can't believe how fast these pundits can be riled at the slightest push by PC, where does all their Godliness fly to when their first instincts is to kill the person they are led to believe has done something wrong... Are these the kind of people that should be the one to show others to a better path...😲

hypocrites... misleading the poor faithfuls

The mob is ready to attack Viplav and this time it is Dhaani that stands solid to protect him and tells them off and points to their own atrocities that they have committed, and the snake Creepo slides in to take what he thinks he deserves by winning the title of high Priest..

but alas..his character lets him down

The Creepo's father arrives in time to make my day by smacking the smirk off his face in front of everyone...Sakku's face one to see, she did not expect her better half to show up here to wipe the smugness off their faces ...

what a slap! resounding in whole of Banaras

Eisha was terrific in defending her love from these rabid gang that wanted to hurt the one she loves ...she roared and they all backed off...the cowards ..😡

it was the roar of righteousness.. that frightened the lot!

Thank you Hammie, for another great take that gives me a real pleasure to read...

thank you dolly for giving a great comment..look forward to it.. much love hammie

Take care, and have a fun filled week-end...

Originally posted by: pearl100

HI swathi ,good to see you ..
Dear Hammie 😃...sorry for the delay ...i totally enjoyed the episode...firstly that's very true devil is his biggest enemy. Yes Durga Maa can see people through their pretense for nothing is hidden from her at all.

faith scenes are always very moving

Viplav should understand the responsibility which comes with 👏 such a key point you identifypower...haven't we heard with great power comes great responsibility...dhani reminds him of his position as of now...good wifey 😃Now raja goes ahead with his plans and drops a hanky to avoid attention and slyly contaminates the gangal jal with the alcohol...dekha hammie desi daru ka hi hai 😆😆 local mall raste ka mall sasta mai jo uski budhi ko bhi labhu hota hai 😆😆

such a lame scene.. but kanak was spot on...

Now i fail to understand how come no body over there including the person beside raja couldnot smell the alcohol ???😆 Sabko sardi hui hai kya short term wala 😆😆 the moment viplav opens the lid everybody starting with our mahan PC could smell it 😆 just great !!! nose jo block hua tha open hogaya apne aap.

🤣 haaa hooo... mind you vipu could smell it too he could smell something fishy

Now comes the PC's drama he instigates the foolish senseless crowd huh...their left their pea nut brains at home i guess 😆 Whatever pc says they simple agree to it...ever ready to fight i tel you...pure chamche hai pc ke.

its pea brains...that prompt faith explotation

Now comes dhani who shuts everyone up...questioning them who are they to talk about paap and punya...when this pc himself was ready to burn her alive where was all this talk, when they could attack the ashram where was the paap and punya??

every word she spoke challenged manmade religious hypocrisy

Before they judge others it is better to look at their own flaws and imperfections...when they point out a finger at viplav there are 3 fingers which are pointed towards them...when none were there to support vidhwas only viplav was there who stood by them throu thick and thin...she was very right they should be pure before they point out at sin of others.

such eviidence and many of them were witnesses too of the witch hunt burning scene

This is one common flaw among us humans we look at others defects rather than rectifying ours. Dhani has indeed come a long way and they way she stood up for viplav is commendable...the pride and respect viplav had for his wife was reflecting on his face.In the time of need she stood by him against the mad crowd the way he did it for her once.

yes I read your post .. wonderfully shared thoughts..certainly a time for us to mull things over.. have to check your recent thoughts... a readers delight

As usual very very well written...you do have magic in your words 😃 enjoyed reading your take thoroughly...waiting for your next part...til then take care.

thanks swathi .. was a pleasure to read your comment.. was late in posting Sat's.. was busy at home... cheers ,much love hammie

Originally posted by: Hamlet53