An open letter to the CVs & PH

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anoosree

@anoosree

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Dear CVs

I understand that daily soap is a piece of fiction but I would be grateful if you please remember that the audience of this figment of your imagination are rationale people. The last I saw some sensible plot in this show was last September, to be precise after Tanya track, I am yet to see a plot which doesn't test my sensibilities. The plots have no logics, they start abruptly or end abruptly. Story has no depth, characters have lost the spark, everything seems so superficial. On the whole the show has become so dull and boring that even a vidha scene or hug doesn't seem to generate any interest.

You had a unique concept and a bunch of talented actors and with much regret I tell that you guys failed both badly. The show started last August, and randomness started replacing logics and sensibilities right from October, so my simple question to you is, if you didn't have a decent plot to last even for a period of six months then, why even start a show at the first place??? Trust me the loopholes in the shows are more than the potholes I find in roads.

Badiamma was related to Tanya, why??? I know we won't get answers.

What happened to viplov's brother, he is under the invincible cloak of Harry, may appear or never appear.

What happen to ashram court case, oh Indian judiciary takes a long time to give dates, ok I understand

What happened to dhani's nightmare, you thought we forgot, hey no, I still remember

And did I see someone called dhani's step sister few months back??? Yes I did.

About logics in this show I don't know where to start and end.

Viplov, a lawyer by profession, a gold medalist, has only one CD which is supposed to hold the only evidence against his father's murderer. What happened to the camcorder where he recorded, the laptop in which he would have uploaded and transferred. No he has no back up, and we are supposed to believe. OK. He carrys the CD with him because he thinks Tripu might steal it from his home and at the same time he thinks that the only place it can be safe is ashram with dhani. I mean dhani out of all the people and ashram out all the place. Great...did he give it to her secretly, no the only thing he didn't do was stick a poster in front of AN & ashram, all the AN nivasees and ashram nivasees knew where the CD is, even suvarna knew it. And then he has the audacity to get surprised and shocked that the CD got replaced. This entire case and court room drama was only to showcase viplov's stupidity and what a dumb lawyer he would be. Dhani darling pls hire another lawyer to handle your case, viplov ke barose kuch nahi hoga. So much effort to show your lead' foolish. Great job CVs.

Today's out of the blue vidha marriage scene, I don't have words to explain what I felt. Viplov bluntly said he wants to marry dhani with a flat expression and all that dhani could manage was frown on her face, makes me think are the actors getting tired of the randomness in the show??? I won't blame them, because even I am getting tired with show now.

Last but not the least thanks a lot CVs for the recent episodes full of KT, TT, DT and Suvarna.

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pearl82

@pearl82

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Good post anoorose.it's hard to digest the truth...but the fact cannot be denied for a longer time...I agree with you.👏👏...wake up cvs...😡

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Kiran

@kiranpri

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

You put pen to paper what everybody has been discussing here, Bravo👏

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premparbat

@premparbat

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Most of us are with you . I don't know how daily shows work but there are many missteps I see , first the basic plot of the leads falling in love was very very hurried. Once that got out of the way then it is about getting married and the obstacles . They have reduced the pair to be dumb and getting manipulated by others with illigical happenings.

Shambhu death was a strike of genius and Viplavs agony worth capitalizing on but then they go and make him an idiot with that court case.

Loops are opened and not closed and I think they are not sure how to proceed. Trps is an evidence.

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Dolly-heart

@Dolly-heart

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Great post and effort to alert the now lazy and witless writers .. Anoosree.

You have nailed the reason what most of the audience has felt for some time.

Dumbing down of Viplav with the CD incident and the courtroom drama was the worst.

Viplav giving the CD to his mother and not realizing that it would be safest in his possession was another dumb move by a gold winning Lawyer.

It seems the PH and CV's are loosing the interest in the storyline they started with and

are now doing this lacklustre job that we get to see recently.

What a waste of all the superb actors that have done a great job till now.

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anoosree

@anoosree

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: pearl82
Good post anoorose.it's hard to digest the truth...but the fact cannot be denied for a longer time...I agree with you.👏👏...wake up cvs...😡

I don't generally write negative things, but as you said it's too long now. They are just testing our patience with nonsensical writing and today I lost my patience, with the start of each and every track I hope for a sensible & interesting plot and all I get to see is a damp squib.

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anoosree

@anoosree

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kiranpreethee
You put pen to paper what everybody has been discussing here, Bravo👏

Agree, I see almost everyone is disappointed. I was holding up for so many days because I didn't want to spoil it for others, but after watching recent episodes, I just decided to write it off. All I get to see repeatedly in recent days.

Dhani: vakil babu chitha mat karo, hum tumhare sath hai.

Viplov: dhani hume patha nahi kya ho raha hai. (Viplov dear even the viewers have no idea of what's happening with you)

DT: silent with frozen expression. I simply have no clue what is running in his mind.

Suvarna: dhani humare pathi ne kuch nahi kiya.

Daadhi and shalu are mere furnitures in the show.

Safed gang is almost missing, badi amma in busy paying kekasi(ravan's mother) in siye ke ram. Won't be surprised if she settles there permanently, it's a much more happening show.

Who is left KT & TT, they get more screen space, better lines to mouth and their characters are better nuanced, in fact the story revolves around them.

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anoosree

@anoosree

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: premparbat
Most of us are with you . I don't know how daily shows work but there are many missteps I see , first the basic plot of the leads falling in love was very very hurried. Once that got out of the way then it is about getting married and the obstacles . They have reduced the pair to be dumb and getting manipulated by others with illigical happenings.

Shambhu death was a strike of genius and Viplavs agony worth capitalizing on but then they go and make him an idiot with that court case.

Loops are opened and not closed and I think they are not sure how to proceed. Trps is an evidence.

Agree prem..., I hoped to see a difficult and passionate love story of a guy from an affluent family and a widow and see what they have reduced the show to...their friendship, love realization, acknowledgement, fear, insecurity, confession, happiness...god...so many emotions to explore in so many ways and because they lacked even basic creativity, they just goofed up everything with random plots. I am not even a good writer, but I am sure I could have come up with a better plot than what these writers have dished out.

Like viplov trying to enrol dhani in a school, people objecting, both facing the obstacles, they could have explored their friendship. Young teacher at school falling for dhani, viplov getting jealous and realizing his feeling, DT/KT, trying to hitch dhani with the teacher, I just can go on on but of no use, I am not the writer and I am sure even if we give ideas, they are too egoistic to take it. It's not like people here are not giving ideas but the CVs simply want to continue with their random writings.

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premparbat

@premparbat

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

^^contunuity is a big issue too. Remember Vip made a hand print on the wall saying I will definetly make you confess my love for you and there onward no mention of that dramatic scene.

Saturday we left with an agonized Vip and I was hoping to see a torn guy at least for a few episodes and then we get them getting married . Who is writing all this ...
Even the hugs today were so mechanical the the song goes off in the background . A very nice song that is over played ...

Anyways I wonder what an intelligent actor like Mishal or Kajal or Arun Bakshi think about all this .

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anoosree

@anoosree

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: Dolly-heart
Great post and effort to alert the now lazy and witless writers .. Anoosree.

You have nailed the reason what most of the audience has felt for some time.

Dumbing down of Viplav with the CD incident and the courtroom drama was the worst.

Viplav giving the CD to his mother and not realizing that it would be safest in his possession was another dumb move by a gold winning Lawyer.

It seems the PH and CV's are loosing the interest in the storyline they started with and
are now doing this lacklustre job that we get to see recently.

What a waste of all the superb actors that have done a great job till now.

Agree with you dolly, the CD drama is the worst they have dished out so far. How come they did not realize that this would put viplov's character in a bad light. Either they are dumb or else they think the viewers are dumb. How can you portray your leads in such a pathetic way and expect to generate interest among viewers. I fail to understand the writers motives here. Do these guys even bother to watch their own show...

As far as PH and CVs loosing interest, I am afraid, they never seem to be serious with their work right from the beginning. Like I already mentioned the randomness, lack luster plots and illogical tracks started way back in October itself, which was like one and half months from the start of the show. Why even start a show when you have no serious intention to execute a show with a proper logical storyline. The randomness and loopholes in the show form October makes it obvious that they did not have a sensible plot to last for even few months.

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