OS: Consequences (16+) PART 3 UPATED PG 14 (NOTE ADDED) - Page 4

Originally posted by: -vandy-

i'm waiting...but gul will take the story forward only on monday at 8:30 pm...and its still 34 hrs away!🤔

y don't u weave another tale in the meantime 😉😆

Counting the hours, eh? Let's see what I can do 😆

Originally posted by: prettypri

That was HOT...sizzling...ooh...I loved the way you wrote about his thoughts!

What a way to stop...teetering at the edge...do continue...👍🏼

Thank you. And yes, we always stop at the edge of the cliff. There could be a fall, or not.😉

Amazingly written...the emotions were described aptly!

Originally posted by: Kaya13

Amazingly written...the emotions were described aptly!

Thanks, glad you liked it.

Amazingly written!!!😃

Omg...that was tooo hot...

Originally posted by: .HarshRutu.

OMG...☺️<--- I'm like this right now😆

That was HOT... Just HOTTT☺️

And you described the thoughts and emotions so beautifully!

Amazingly written!!!😃

Do continue it further😆

And I'm still like this ----->☺️☺️☺️

Aww... you're sweet. Thanks for your kindness, and maybe I'll continue it, tomorrow, once am back on my laptop.

Originally posted by: deepavasudev

Omg...that was tooo hot...
I hvnt seen the serial...but just came across this os and my mouth went awe after reading...
Boy oh boy...too hot...
Now tell me...did the gal. Bear the consequences...
U r fab...

Hi Deepa, I don't know, yet. I'll have to write it to figure it out.😆

wht wa tht..tht ws...HOT HOT HOT..☺️☺️.very well written☺️

Originally posted by: nehaarshi09

wht wa tht..tht ws...HOT HOT HOT..☺️☺️.very well written☺️

Thank you. I was just trying to keep it 'in character."😳