OS: Consequences (16+) PART 3 UPATED PG 14 (NOTE ADDED) - Page 3

I have read this OS 3 times in 2 hours!!! Now this is called creative writing! Simply awesome! NeemSundari, big Hug! Superb write up! lapped up every single paragraph and over and over and still feels wonderfully fresh!

Dil kush hogaya! Thank you. I had no idea you write for a living, but this is wonderful stuff. Waiting anxiously for whatever else you fancy to write on these two characters.

Good Luck and all the best.

Hey!!!🤗
I must say that was amazing!!!😉
Loved every line!!❤️ How you described it was just fab!!😉
Good job!👏
Hot and something worth reading!😉☺️
Your really talented!👏
Please do write more OS' or FF's if you can!😳

Absolutely, Vandy. We all need to focus.😳

Originally posted by: -vandy-

☺️ ooo la la...my ears r still burning ☺️☺️☺️

u stopped at a cliff hanger...and this weekend is longgg

continue this one plzzz ☺️

lol let's see where Gul takes the story, and I'll weave a parallel, more..ahem..intimate tale.

Originally posted by: tweetie19

Oh my goodness...☺️ ☺️

this was hotness personified...plz continue with this... ☺️

😆 Thanks, I was trying to get into the mind of the character.

Originally posted by: shahmin

That was awesome ☺️

Thanks, Shamin. Glad you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: Moon_light

I have read this OS 3 times in 2 hours!!! Now this is called creative writing! Simply awesome! NeemSundari, big Hug! Superb write up! lapped up every single paragraph and over and over and still feels wonderfully fresh!

Dil kush hogaya! Thank you. I had no idea you write for a living, but this is wonderful stuff. Waiting anxiously for whatever else you fancy to write on these two characters.

Good Luck and all the best.

Thank you, that's so incredibly nice. Writers love compliments 😃

I'm so glad I managed to entertain you-- the cyberverse is a lovely place, I can write and bring joy and pleasure for someone I don't know.

I don't know what else would strike me, but sure, I definitely would try to write more!

Originally posted by: THEfanOFheartz

Hey!!!🤗
I must say that was amazing!!!😉
Loved every line!!❤️ How you described it was just fab!!😉
Good job!👏
Hot and something worth reading!😉☺️
Your really talented!👏
Please do write more OS' or FF's if you can!😳

Thank you-- the characters belong to Gul, and once you know the characters and setting (and of course, Harshad's fab expressions) , it is easy to write up a scene. Glad you liked it.

I'll try and write more, for sure.

Originally posted by: Neemsundari

lol let's see where Gul takes the story, and I'll weave a parallel, more..ahem..intimate tale.

That was HOT...sizzling...ooh...I loved the way you wrote about his thoughts!