OS: Consequences (16+) PART 3 UPATED PG 14 (NOTE ADDED)

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Neemsundari

@Neemsundari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Peaceout09
OMG ! youre such a talented writer please keep givivng us these amazing stories of SaAz ... 👏

Thanks. Will possibly do more one-shots as a parallel to the story on screen. This was fun to write.

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Loveena

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

That was just awesome 👍🏼

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Neemsundari

@Neemsundari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ilovei
That was just awesome 👍🏼

Thanks, glad you liked it.

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Roxie

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Oh Lord...this made me melt..☺️

Incredible work! 👏
Write more please, looking forward to hearing more from you 😃

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Neemsundari

@Neemsundari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: roserox99
Oh Lord...this made me melt..☺️

Incredible work! 👏
Write more please, looking forward to hearing more from you 😃

Thankyou for the vote of confidence 😃

I write for a living, so this was a very fun..err..fulfilling exercise😉. Depending on how the show shapes up, I do intend to write more, inshallah 😳

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tibs09

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Do write more...other than the hotness quotient you have a flow that is incredible ..weaving just the right web emotions thoughts and feelings..

If this was your writers block day I look forward to reading when you are in your elements

Amazing ...though you left us hanging at the cliff...

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Neemsundari

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: tibs09
Do write more...other than the hotness quotient you have a flow that is incredible ..weaving just the right web emotions thoughts and feelings..
If this was your writers block day I look forward to reading when you are in your elements
Amazing ...though you left us hanging at the cliff...

That's very sweet of you to say. I'm blocked on my novel, not in my writing😛. Cliffhangers make the best ending imo, unless one plans to continue. 😆