Humsafars! FF part 9 updated pg 31 7 feb 2015 - Page 12

Originally posted by: TeriGalliyan.

Yay! You are back in action:)

Superb part. I loved how Anam was thrown out and now Kurthi Appa. Sahir showed Kurthi Appa her place. It was hilarious how they took away Kurthi Appa. Who is the guy who called Sahir and told him that the "merchandise is on the way"? Hmm.

Loved the last part where Sahir is thinking about Arzoo. You described Arzoo very well. Well, Sahir is slowly falling love, lets see what happens with Arzoo.

Thank you for a beautiful chapter.

Can you make an index on the first page? Like

Ch1 - PG 1

Ch2 ..

Ch3...

Ch4 - PG 16

So it would be easier for new readers to find?

Thanks Sagi. :)

Nisha

Hi Misha Di
Sorry for typos, my tab corrects a bit enthusiastically.

Sahir had first hand proof about what Kurti aapa had done. So he didn't hesitate in throwing her out.

Sahir called someone and told him about the merchandize.
Sahir has already fallen in love with Aarzoo, but she may not agree so easily.

Yes, I need to put an index.
Let me open the lappy.
Sagi

Originally posted by: Jyo_Veebafan

Lovely update
Very happy that atleast in your story we got rid of nonsenses like KA and Anam.
Continue soon 😊

Yes, ka and an am are out of the scene.
But then there are bigger devils to fight about.

Originally posted by: veeleo

Very nice. :) Looking forward to reading more.

Thank you. More is on the way.

Awesome sagi ! Keep writing re !!
Ps pm me if u can... 😃

Originally posted by: -zainab

Awesome sagi ! Keep writing re !!
Ps pm me if u can... 😃

Of course I will pm you for the next chapter.
Anyway thank you for the response.

I like your sahir who caught onto kurti apas lies . Please update soon

Originally posted by: MOnamy11

I like your sahir who caught onto kurti apas lies . Please update soon

Di,

The sahir of my story is significantly different from the serial's Sahir.
The Sahir of my story is just a ruthless tycoon who doesn't have a past (wife in coma etc etc)
Secondly he has enough proof of Kurti Aapa's involvement in flicking of Aarzoo's designs.

He doesn't have any emotional attachment with Kurti Aapa and even with his own mother (that part will be seen later) A die-hard sceptic, he doesn't believe anyone. He also doesn't believe in forgive and forget, he also doesn't believe in giving a second chance to anyone.

But he is open to the concept of love and will not engage in denials.
Sagi

What a lovely story. I just read all the four chapters and was blown away.

Originally posted by: Sagi.

Di,

The sahir of my story is significantly different from the serial's Sahir.
The Sahir of my story is just a ruthless tycoon who doesn't have a past (wife in coma etc etc)
Secondly he has enough proof of Kurti Aapa's involvement in flicking of Aarzoo's designs.

He doesn't have any emotional attachment with Kurti Aapa and even with his own mother (that part will be seen later) A die-hard sceptic, he doesn't believe anyone. He also doesn't believe in forgive and forget, he also doesn't believe in giving a second chance to anyone.

But he is open to the concept of love and will not engage in denials.
Sagi

Originally posted by: -Amri-

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">What a lovely story. I just read all the four chapters and was blown away.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">What struck me was that the characters seemed so true to themselves. Fan fiction writers often make their version of the characters do some uncanny and unrelatable things which makes them look like hollow shadows of their fictional selves😊. It's good in moderation, but beyond a point,I do not enjoy it as much😳 But yours were perfectly in character, which I particularly liked.</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">And the marvellous detailing is another merit of your story. Add to it the intrigue that you have established regarding Anam's plan, and we have a winner! Well done, and hope to read more:)</font>

<font face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Just a request- please make an index on the first page so that it's easier for readers to navigate and read all the chapters. Thanks in advance!</font>

Di,
Made an index right now. And will keep updating as I add on new chapters.
Yes, I agree to your point: while writing fanfictions, an author has all the liberty to be creative (and the temptation to get carried away) there is this added benefit of the serial portraying those very characters so half of the creativity is already done. The reader can instantly relate to those characters.

The Sahir of this FF is slightly different from the serial and so is Aarzoo. She is far more professional. She realizes that her hard work is the only thing that is going to help her in the long run, and she is not going to be the bumbling intern anymore. She has enough of self-respect and will not take any non-sense.

Hope this helps.
Sagi