AKSHAN FF the unique bondd last part 31 jan updated - Page 5

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Posted: 7 years ago
#41
Fantastic update
Love it
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#42
Awesome update dear
Loved it very much
So laxmi kiski bag Seh woollen clothes nikala
So AJ took his wife along to mussori
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43
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Posted: 08 November 2018 at 4:33am | IP Logged
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Wonderful update kaya4ever Di😃
And sorry to irritate u again but pls update the next part of Akshan ts-the unforgettable night 😭










Raglak_akshan thnx for the response the ts unforgettable night is of three parts only will update another related to it in so e days
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Posted: 7 years ago
#44

Chapter -9


When they reached the hotel the receptionist responded them in a surprising manner. As the hotel was booked by maa's choice so AJ was suspicious n his thought became real when they both entered the room n saw that the room was decorated in a first night manner according to the newly wedded honeymoon couple. When the vetar left the room saying sir do not disturb Ka tag laga dun ??? AJ replied aap takleef mat kijiye ham Dekh lenge.


He noticed that guddan was feeling awkward a little bit. Then he tried to make the atmosphere normal. Ye travel agent BHI na Apne man se Sare arrangements Kar Raha hai is ko thik Karna Padega. Saying this AJ himself started cleaning all the stufff. N all of a sudden picked up a nighty which was red in colour n a pack of ahmmm****** as guddan was watching him doing all this. When he picked the dress she just closed her eyes in shyness n turned around when she turned AJ also had a big smile on his lips. May be he had imagined guddan in that nighty. When all the stuff was cleared AJ went to washroom to take bath. Guddan unpacked her bag n was hell shocked to see that her woolens were missing.hey lord Krishna hamare sweater Kahan gaye.


Just then AJ called her guddan Meri shirt rah gyi h Zara dena to. She replied ha layi ek second she picked the shirt n give it to him accidentally she slipped n next moment was she was in the strong arms of our handsome n dashing AJ while he was all wet his hairs were dropping water on her body. They share an intense eyelock. All of a sudden Akshat slips guddan closed her eyes n to get a hold for something he hold the tap of shower n next moment they were taking shower together Akshat was just in a towel n guddan's clothes was making it all revealing. there emotions was break due to the room service bell. Akshat left her in the washroom n checkout the vetar. It was there breakfast both of them were smiling at their places due to the proximity which was increasing day by day. Guddan took shower came out n was about to cry mode. AJ saw that n ask kya hua ro kyon rhi ho?? She replied hamne hamare sweater bag me hi rakhe the pata Nahi kaise she started sobbing. Koi baat Nahi abhi tum yeh jerkin pahno. Main tumhare liye Kuch sweater purchase Kar k le aata hun. They both had their breakfast AJ left for the nearby market to get some sweater for her. Guddan was tired so she fall asleep. After two n half hour passed she woke up n saw that AJ was still not arrived yet. She tried to call him but his phone was not reachable. She opened the TV n saw that a news of landslide in the nearby market where Akshat was gone it was showing that more than 100 people were dead. Her heart stopped beating she can't even thought what should she do. The door bell was rang she rush to the door open it n saw that it was Akshat she just hugged him so tightly in the corridor that the people passing from the corridor was staring them Akshat could not realize that what is happening. He asked her guddan kya hua??? She replied back sobbingly MERI to Jaan hi Nikal gayi thi agar apko Kuch ho Jata to... They came inside the room. Akshat saw the news on TV n replied ha mujhe bhi abhi neeche pata Chala wo kya hua na main hotel to ek change pahle hi AA Gaya tha lekin neeche ek business party mil gyi or Unse BAAT Karne me time lag Gaya. Guddan was in mood of fight itne Der koi Bina contact liye bahar rahta hai bhala Aapne ek Baar BHI Nahi socha ki ye news Dekh Kar mere dimag me kaise kaise khayal Aaye honge agar aapko Kuch ho Jata to...


Akshat apologize holding his ears sorry Galti ho gyi dobara Nahi karunga promise guddan just hugged him n he hugged her back.



So tell me guys how was it next update will be done after Thursday till then pls comment n like the FF

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Posted: 7 years ago
#45
Kaya Di it's AWESOMEEE
Loved GUDDAN'S restlessness 😛
Do continue soon


And by the way U didn't fulfil my wish of updating next part of "THE UNFORGETTABLE NIGHT"😭

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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Raglak_akshan the unforgettable night is only of three parts but I will write another os oontinued from it soon pls give me some time
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
Wow this is awesome, guddan's concern towards AJ was so beautiful
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: kayafever

Raglak_akshan the unforgettable night is only of three parts but I will write another os oontinued from it soon pls give me some time


I know that day won't ever come😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
#49
Ohh come on dear u have requested n I will definitely write it as I was a little bit busy in Diwali so didn't get some time pls trust me will write soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50
Do dil mil rahe hainn...magar chupke chupke😉
Continue soon

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