MG FF - || Phir le aaya Dil Majboor || Ch4 on Pg2 - Page 2

congrats for new story

very interesting

does maan knows that something will happened with him so he prepare geet before hand

geet dealing with confidence on each front

geet believes that maan is going come back soon

Chapter 2

so Maan was presumed dead

of cos dadima was shattered

as expected Geet refused to believe that Maan is dead

Geet had a point

admire her believe in Maan and their love

glad that went to the office

loved her she handled the directors

Geet was indeed overwhelmed

so she recalls the past and Maan's advice

Maan clearly trusts Geet

not surprised that Geet is handling the business

at least dadima is helping her

Geet really misses Maan

her question was justified

hope Maan returns soon

Chapter 3

of cos Adi is loyal to Maan

sad that the investors are losing trust in KC

liked that Geet was calm and composed

she will show them results

pleased with Geet's response

dadima was really proud of Geet

great that Geet reminds her about Maan

admire how Geet handled Arohi

past well incorporated

Maan's question was reasonable

Geet was naturally angry

pleased that Maan assured Geet

glad that Maan trained Geet to handled the business

not surprised that the directors were impressed with Geet's presentation

after all she learnt from the best

well seeing Maan's note, Geet broke down

as expected she will wait for Maan to return

I am sure Maan is alive....

update soon

Regarding your note, may I suggest that you post one chapter per day as its easier to comment

thank you

Dev and Pammi are so evil. They did wrong but they blamed Geet for it.

Maan is missing and presumed dead. Geet is not having any of that.

Geet will not give up. She will fight for everything using what he taught her.

Hello everyone,

Thank you for loving my story.

Please read the note on red in first page.

Also, can someone please help me with a siggy??

Originally posted by: TangledThoughts

Hello everyone,

Thank you for loving my story.

Please read the note on red in first page.

Also, can someone please help me with a siggy??

thanks for the note

looking forward to the updates

CHAPTER 4– "Aapke Naam, Meri Saans"

SCENE 1 – STONE BY STONE

Khurana Constructions.

Rain lashes the glasswindows. Geet sits alone in the conference room. Her eyes scan the balancesheets, blurry from exhaustion.

She hasn’t slept in two nights. Dadima insisted she rest.Adi offered to take over. But she didn’t listen.

Voice-over (Geet’s thoughts):

"Aapke sapne ko zinda rakhna... aap se judne ka meratareeka hai, Maan sir."

She closes the file. Her hands tremble. She presses herforehead to the table.

SCENE 2 – THE FIRST HUMILIATION

An investor meet. Big names. Suits. Cameras. Geet enterswith Adi and Dadima behind her, nervous.

Investor 1 (to another):

"Yeh wahi ladki hai na? 20 saal ki? Maan Singh Khuranaki widow?"

Investor 2 (low voice):

"Widow aur CEO? Sapna dekh rahi hai."

Geet hears. She doesn’t flinch. Instead, she walks straightto the podium.

Geet (firmly):

"Main Maan Singh Khurana ki patni hoon. Aur aaj jo mainkehne ja rahi hoon... woh unka sapna, unki soch hai. Sirf mera nahi."

SCENE 3 – FLASHBACK: FIRELIGHT AND FIGHT

A warm night. Maan and Geet sit by a bonfire at theirfarmhouse. Maan stares at the flames, quiet.

Maan (reflective):

"Tum kabhi sochti ho, Geet? Hum kitni alag duniya kehain."

Geet (glaring):

"Aur aapko lagta hai main kabhi darr jaungi is baatse?"

Maan smiles faintly. But his voice carries an ache.

Maan:

"Mujhe darr lagta hai... ki ek din main chala gayatoh tum toot jaogi."

Geet (furious, rising):

"Aap baar baar yeh kyun kehte hain? Main koi kamzornahi hoon. Aur agar main hoon bhi... toh aap mujhe mazboot banaiye. Daraiyemat."

Maan stands, walks to her. Holds her face.

Maan (softly):

"Main har din tumhe woh Geet banana chahta hoon...jo mere hone ya na hone se nahi hilti. Jo khud apni taqat ban jaye."

They kiss — tenderly, fiercely — a promise sealed withheat and pain.

SCENE 4 – THE BREAKDOWN

Khurana site office. A major project deal fails due to asupplier backing out. The board blames her. Her own team falters.

Geet locks herself in the site container. Rain crashesoutside. Her blouse sleeve is torn from rushing.

She crouches in a corner, soaked and shaking.

Geet (choking, whispering):

"Aapne toh kaha tha... main sambhal sakti hoon. Aapnekaha tha na, Maan..."

She cries, pulling out her phone — plays an old voicemessage. Maan’s voice, calm and warm:

Maan (recorded):

"Geet, main tumhara saath hoon. Har waqt. Agar kabhikamzor pad jao... bas meri awaaz yaad rakhna."

She presses the phone to her heart. Slowly... the tearsstop.

SCENE 5 – SMALL VICTORY, FIRST STRENGTH

Geet walks into the office next morning, hair tied, whiteshirt, minimal makeup. Adi rushes behind.

Adi:

"Ma’am! Yeh client... jisne kal contract reject kiyatha—unhone wapas call kiya hai. They saw your proposal!"

Geet (shocked):

"Wapas...?"

Adi (smiling):

"Unhone kaha, 'She reminded us of Maan SinghKhurana.'"

Geet stands silently. Her hands slowly clench. She looks upat Maan’s portrait on the wall.

Geet (to herself):

"Main aap se pyaar karti hoon, Maan. Itna... ke aap bangayi hoon main."

SCENE 6 – FLASHBACK: INTIMACY IN SHADOWS

A soft night in their room. Lights low. Maan is tracingthe curve of her cheek with his fingers. She lies on his chest, listening tohis heartbeat.

Geet (sleepy):

"Aapke bina jee nahi sakti mai!"

Maan (whispering):

"Mujhmein jeeti ho tum. Main chala bhi gaya toh...tum mujhe jeeti rahogi."

Geet:

"Main aapki zindagi hoon..."

Maan:

"Aur meri maut ke baad bhi... meri saans."