MG SS:Our Journey From Marriage To Divorce- Updated Part11..Pg 21 - Page 21

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Part 10

so Geet came around and agreed to make breakfast and lunch

but Maan would make dinner

Maan was indeed impressed

his reaction seeing the breakfast she made was reasonable

of cos he taunted Geet

well Maan's parents called

as expected his mom wanted to speak to Geet

Geet clearly did not want to speak

however Maan was adamant

Geet was a bit rude

not surprised with Savitri's concern for Geet

now Maan assured his parents that everything is fine

oh Geet was upset with Maan's comments

yet again they argue


update soon

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Posted: 1 months ago

Omg

Seriously geet !!!

Bread jam for breakfast wow Nothing wrong though

But loved maans sarcasm and his yelling about dev yes he was upset about the way she talked to his mom

Will she ever realise how good a person he is

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Posted: 22 days ago

Hi there

please continue soon

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Part 11:


"HAaa, Baapre Bread Jam aaaaa Noooooo " since they were standing beside the pool, Maan out of shock, lifted both off his hands in air along with one of his leg pushing against the ground, he dramatically fell into the pool.

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Geet who was just a few feet ahead of Maan rolled her eyes at Maan's whining. But she rushed back to the spot as soon as she heard the loud splash of water.

"Maaaannn." she looked over into the pool and screamed in concern.

The pool was not for swimming but for people to relax and spend time sitting on the benches along it's side, which also had a wooden bridge across it for people to walk.

Maan could just pop his head out as the water was neck deep making it impossible for him to stand and looked at Geet who was bending over to see if he was alright.

The weather was cold and instantly Maan regretted his stupid stunt..for he knew once he was out of the water he would definitely turn into a popsicle..his teeth had already started chattering, followed by his body which started shivering.

Geet put her hand out

"Maan hold my hand, I will pull you out."

"Paaaaa.....gaaa....lllll....hhhhoooo....kkkkkyyyyy....aaaa?" (Pagal ho kya?)

Maan barked with his chattering teeth, which made no sense to Geet.

"Kya? Did you just call me mad?"

"Suuunnnnaaaa thhhoooo puuuccchhh kyyyuuu raaahhhiii hhhoo"

"Mai nahi aap pagal hai. Pagalo ki tara pani mai aap kudh giri ho, maine todi dakka di?"

"Waahhii kaaammiii reeehhhgaaii tii."

"Maan, stop talking nonsense, hold onto my hand and come out."

"Isssllliiiyyyeee pppaaagggaaall kkkaahhha."

"Ha mai pagal hu jo aapko help karne aagi, aab kush? Now shut your mouth and give me your hand."

"Tuuummmhhhaaarrreee aaauuurrr mmmeeerrreee sssiiizzzee deeekkkhhhii hoo?"

"Now what does that have to do with me pulling you up?.... Maan bekar ki lecture dena band karo, kyu ki mujhe aap jo kehna chate hai samaj nahi aarahi."

"You want to join me in here? Mera weight tum balance nahi kar paoge."

"To aap bahar kaise aavoge? Chad ne keliye sediya waha par hai (she pointed towards the other end of the pool) are you planning to swim till their?"

"Iii wwiill cclliimmbb oonn mmyy oowwnn, mmmoovvee aassiiddee."

Geet moved aside to let him to what he wanted.

The pools walls were a bit more than his height that made it difficult to pull himself out, he definitely didn't like the idea of swimming to the other end, in this chilling water.

Maan put both his hands on the ground and pulled half of his body up, he was about to put his legs up on the ground when his hands started shivering as cold wind blew over and he couldn't sustain his own weight and fell right back in.

Geet couldn't help but laugh while Maan stared at her.

"Gur na bandh kar... At least now listen to me, otherwise you will be doing the same thing for the whole night or probably for the rest of your life."

She put her hand out to him, while Maan unwillingly held her hand.

"Place your other hand, and push yourself up"

Maan followed her and Geet pulled him out using all of her force.

"Pheww, damn man you are so heavy."

Geet huffed

"Mmmaaiinnee tttuuummhhee ffrreenncchh mmaaii bboollaattaa kkyyaa? Ii hhaadd ttoolldd tthhee ssaammee tthhiinng"

Before she could retort, she saw Maan taking a deep breath with closed eyes, the very next second she saw him dash off into the apartment hugging his body tightly.

"Is he mad? " she hit her forehead laughing at his behavior and left behind him.

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Maan came out of the bathroom wiping his hair dry, after bathing for the third time the same day. He was putting on his track pant and vest on, when out of nowhere someone started an appliance which made a lot of noise and he had no idea what that was.

"Grrr.. Now what is this? I don't seem to have peace anywhere on Earth."

Gritting his teeth he cursed the person thinking it to be from one of his neighbour's.

"Aur koi time nahi milta kya logoko, aadi rath ko pata nahi itna shor machane wali machine chalu kardi."

As soon as he opened the door and stepped out the sound amplified, which made him realize that the sound was coming from his home.

"I was cursing myself!! WOW "

Next he found the object of his headache being the reason, which made him want to pull out his hair but instead he sat on one of the dining chair with a thud.

"Oh, aap aagai?"

Maan gave a plastic smile and was actually amused that she could hear him despite of so much noise.

Geet switched off the vacuum cleaner, and passed him the plate of Bread Jam, that was all she knew to prepare.

After serving him she resumed cleaning with the vacuum cleaner. Maan was kind off surprised to find that machine, which he didn't knew existed along with him.

Maan used to broom and sweep when he was staying alone.

"Geetji" he called out to her for he felt like a lawnmower was moving on his head

"Ha?"

"ISS rath ko ye karna zaroori hai kya?" Maan asked with a plastic smile

"Timetable ke mutabik aaj cleaning ka kaam mera hai, so how much ever time it takes I will complete.."

Hearing her made him want to pull out his hair instead he started rubbing his hair vigorously with the towel hanging on his neck.

"Saale Dev.... Where the hell are you?"

He said gritting his teeth

"Kya kaha aapne?" came Geet's voice, though she couldn't hear what exactly he said for Maan was not that loud enough for her to make out.

By looking at Geet's he knew that she couldn't make out what he said, he mentally left a sigh of relief that she didn't hear and answered with a fake smile again

"Kuch bi to nahi"

"Dekhiye...Jo bi bolna hai joor se boliye."

"Nahi meri ma, mai kuch kahu...usskeliye mai sorry bolne tak tum upvas-satyagrah per betna... vo bi ghar ki bhar.... Meri zindagi me ye sab chaye kya??

He picked up two pieces of bread jam with both of his hands from the plate and held then infront of his face eyeing each of them making a weird funny expression

Itna tasty khana serve kiya ho, jo aapne zindagi me kabhi khaya bi nahi tha....Chup Chap khalunga, you please continue with your work."

Saying that he bit the pieces into his mouth. Maan had neutral feelings for bread jam back in the past, now he knew that maybe a day would come when he would hate it from the bottom of his heart, all thanks to his 'wife'.

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Next day Maan and Geet were in the terrace putting the washed clothes on the strings for drying.

Geet had a bucket of her clothes and Maan his.

Both were busy minding their own business, while the other women who were also there for the same work started to talk amongst themselves

Ld-1 "Waha dekho dono pati patni kaise ek dusre ki madath kar rahi hai."

Ld-2 "Aur hamare bi hai, useless.."

Maan was in all praises by almost everyone their for supporting and caring for his wife, while the reality was not as they were thinking.

Maan who was about to put one of his T-shirt on the string heard a

"Chiii" out of nowhere, he also repeated the same making a confused face like what happened that some had to make that noice out of nowhere, and turned his face to the source.

Geet randomly took the next cloth to hang without seeing what that was, she held the cloth to hang it but seeing what that was only one word left her mouth

"Chiiii"

She was holding Maan's white boxer, the next movement the cloth fell back into the bucket.

On the other side Maan was shocked and embarrassed to an extent that he shut his eyes, cringing his face away from the site.

"Ahhh...Shit.. Wo ek waha kise paouch gai!! Damn"

After a second or two he opened his eyes and looked towards Geet to take back his boxer but was left with a hanging mouth seeing the scene unfolding before him.

Geet was too embarrassed to call Maan to take his boxer back. So she looked around and found a small stick, with the help of that she again picked up Maan's boxer and slowly proceeded to hang it, with a cringed face.

"Usski attitude to dekho, she could have at least called me..

*He cupped his hips*

Just by seeing this atyachar on my poor boxer is giving me a feel as if I'm being pricked

*he said slightly rubbing the place*

Aabhi isko sabak sikati hu."

Saying so he slowly went up to the end of the string that was just next his.

Maan looked here and there confirming that the string contained only Geet's clothes he untied it and cooly started walking like he didn't know what was happening.

Geet who had succeeded in hanging Maan's boxer was about to pull out the stick that she had used, when the string along with her clothes were on ground in a blink.

She fumed as she saw Maan passing cooly right infront of her after pulling out the string...

"Oyee" with gritting teeth she called out

"Haan? " Maan stopped and turned to her

"You are going as though nothing has happened?"

"Actually according to timetable, aaj laundry ka khaam tumhara hai. So please, kapdoko phir ek bhar dholo

*Maan gestured to wash the clothes again*

Hmm!"


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That's for today...

Thanks for liking and commenting on the previous update.


Precap:

"Hassi aarahihe? Well that's what everyone has done. Meri dard sabko tamasha bangai hai. I don't need your help. Mai kudh Dev ko doond lungi."


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Edited by ShashtiJMG - 15 days ago
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Wow new update after long. Thanks for the tag.

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Hi thanks for the update


Part 11

Gosh Maan fell into the pool

at least Geet wanted to help Maan

of cos Maan feels cold

finally he managed to get out of the pool

great that Geet helped with the household chores

poor Maan had to eat bread and jam

the incident with Geet hanging Maan's boxer was amusing


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