MG FF: In the dark between stars||Note page 38|| - Page 15

Chapter 1

Nice start. Loving Prem bhai actually. Interesting let's see how this story unfolds.

Very nice update dear

Feeling vary baad for maan, geet concern toward maan is too good

Watting for update

Chapter2

Kara's boyfriend  🤣🤣🤣that was a good one. Hifi to Geet.

Loved the moment where Prem enters the room and Geet just relaxes and goes into his arms.

Normally Maan is the one who is all protective about Geet and standing up for her. In this though Maan is the one who is suffering let's see how this will bring them together.

Chapter 3

Such an emotional update. Eagerly waiting to see how Geet will be a pillar to Maan during this tough time.

She is sooo caring.

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Why is Maan's dad beating him? What is the rough time that he is going through and for how long is this going on?

Geet is soo caring and is her crush developing into something more.

Will Geet's promise to Maan create differences within her family?

So that's how their friendship gonna start

Geet literally blackmailed maan for that promise

But that's so cruel!

How could maans father do that!!

Y would he drink like this 1st of all 😡

That part was so disheartening when geet pointed maan visiting their house with excuses for food 😭

Update 2, 3 n 4

Feeling very bad for maan and it’s kind a disturbing the way his father treating him ... he’s grown up kid and I think he should take action against his father than going through hell every day without any food and proper shelter ... Geet is really sweet and maintaining her promise to not to reveal about his secret to anyone ... even she’s feeling bad for him and helping him as much as possible from her side ... hope his suffering will come to an end soon ....Geet is too matured for her age and how thoughtful to make maan to speak to her with his problem by taking promise from him .... this will really help maan to unburden his sorrow if he talked to someone and he’s lucky that someone is Geet and she’s really sweet in her own way ....

I really loved geets and prem bonding and how protective he is towards Geet and nobody dare to bully her anymore because of prem ... oh prem like kiara and he’s not ready to get her home for introduction cool ...

wonderful update... geet asked prem to meet his gf kiara to parents which he had to accept her wish... awe prem has to follow her instruction to accompany nyra & pinky in a car to college … loved the way geet hug prem then both wanted to hug him as both had crush on him... now a days jay was admired geet's beauty but Kabir frightened him about prem's anger which maan told he was ready to tell prem... maan was remembering geet & his discussion about his miserable life but he was sure she was now matured to know the deepness of maan's life to hide it from world...“Nothing hurts more than realizing his dad might be everything to him and he meant nothing to his dad.” maan was deep thought about his father behavior when Kabir asked him to accompany to eat his mom's special dish... very well describe about maan & his dad & his mansion... geet also waiting for him to eat with them but she upset to not seeing him... Omg geet saw the same horrible situation about outside sleeping maan… wow without disturbing others she way out of her house with the lasagna & shawl towards maan and offered him it which he had to accept it... he felt nice to eat to meet his hunger and slept with her shawl but geet was in pain to see him in bad condition... Problem is just the distance between reality & expectations .. he was in hurt but he had to put on smile and move on as it hurt to survive.... geet the pampered girl while maan was living opposite her life .. hope to see maan's happy life as both were in hurtful life.. excited for next...!!

Beautiful update

Loved it ..

Feeling sad for maan because his dad beat him he s forming a shell around himself... geet s very kind towards maan and wanna maan to share his problem with her ... maan s trusting geet ..

Geet s teasing her bro prem ...

Geet s taking dinner for maan and she gave a shawl also ..

Geet s watching maan from her window with thief eye ...

Waiting for more maaneet moment

Continue soon

Yayee another FF. Congratulations

I am so excited to read a new FF by you. This one starts from their teens.

I feel bad for Geet. She is so young to get teased for her looks. And it leaves a negative impact on the kid. Kabir is a classic middle child, always troubling the youngest one.

But our Geet has all her family members wrapped around her. Everyone adores her specially Prem. I just love how he pampers her with so much love 😍.

Kabir worrying about his image and Prem just know what to do with it. Haha