MG FF: In the dark between stars||Note page 38|| - Page 14

Hi,

The pain that binds them... the secret that has brought them to become good friends... and sadly his condition is the reason that Geet is restless.... yet, her this restlessness and anxiety... her concern for him is giving him peace to face this situation... unknowingly she is taking care of him and his hunger... eventually hopefully she will make him stronger emotionally too... and figure out a way to either fight back or face it ....

thnx

Nice update, feeling bad for maan, he is suffering with out his fault, hope one day prem will see this and teach his father agood lesson

Geet is a kind soul and Maan needs her in his life. She is the only one who knows about his situation and provides solace.

I really don’t want to maan to suffer like this 😫. He doesn’t deserve it and no one in the world deserves the torture he is facing at the moment. Can’t you do something about like killing maans father because of liver problems as he drinks too much

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Congratulations

New storyline

Perfect start for love birds.

Great family bonding and support

Best of luck

It's indeed very painful to see children who undergo domestic violence.

My heart went out to Maan who again has to sleep outside hungry😔

Atleast he shared his sorrow with Geet.

Love Geet she is so compassionate and caring.

Tonight he doesn't sleep hungry and cold thanks to Geet

I am full of love and admiration for Geet here!

She’s quite privileged but she doesn’t take it for granted!

She’s concerned about Maan and looking out for him all the time ❤️

My heart breaks for Maan and I desperately wanna know as to when will he come out of his misery?

What I really like about your writing style is that everything moves with a pace and gradually fall in places there are no rushing...neither in character development nor story progress

Both Maan and Geet lives side by side but their life at home is so different from the other. One gets all the love and gets pampered by her family while Maan he is suffering all alone with no support....until now

Loved that even though geet is pampered she understand everything maturely and acts that way too and Maan is also grown a lot according to his age because of his situation, as Geet said no one should go through what he is going through, and even though he hides his pain from the world but in alone he craves for love and affection which was shown to him by Geet and he couldn't control his emotion anymore.....it's not easy to share pain because we don't find the words to express them but I think Geet feels it

Will be waiting for next chapter

Part 4

Heart-constricting update 🥺

It is so sad that a child would have to endure such brutality at a young age. When maan should have Been loved & nurtured he was being abused . 😭

Admire geet’s loyalty & her compassion for maan.

Maan is overwhelmed with geet’s care that he releases his emotions through his tears.

Beautifully written 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Thank you

why maan is suffering sooooooooooo much..........feeling bad fr maan..........

emotional update............