MG FF: In the dark between stars||Note page 38|| - Page 13

This is a very different concept! There are very few stories where Maan is shown helpless and Geet is the stronger one helping him out. It is so painful to see Maan abused by his own father whom he loves and cares for enough to not turn him over to the police. What has happened for his father to become like this? Was it the loss of Maan's mother that led him to become this monster? I hope he is punished and regrets every bit of his remaining life to have scarred his young son so. Geet is such a sensible teen. Usually at her age they would not grasp the situation with such maturity, especially when she has grown up in a loving home. Not only has she dealt with it so sensibly, but also how she does not want Maan to suffer alone and share his troubles with her, although he was also the one to make fun of her, calling her names. Such a strong character! I am loving Prem, he is a very well-balanced guy. It was so heart-warming to see her get him food, knowing he would be hungry, it was heart-breaking to see Maan like that. I hope his sufferings end soon.

Waiting for the next update. Please update soon.

Hi, emotional part ,maan is facing tough time but for outside world he smiled .Geet try to help him

Hope maan come out from this

Thanks for update

Waiting for next part

Amazing update.

Geet is really kind.

She gave food n swal to maan to keep him warm from getting cold .

Y maan father is like this n he is not opps in to his father.

1st his father beat him n made him to sleep in backyard n outside of home.

Doesn't give him food also to eat.

Y he is doing this

Ma'am n his father only leave in their house?

Love it emotional update

Can't see maan like tht what's problm of maan dad why the hell he behave like tht

Poor maan itna torture hone k baad bhi he always smile

Geet gave her food to maan and shawl taki maan ko thnd na lge

Prem very good nd nice guy.

it was heart-breaking to see Maan like that.

Wating for nxt

Chapter 4

Geet's questions are understandable. at least she realised that Maan needs someone in his corner.

Ha ha Nyra and Pinky have a crush on Prem.

wow Prem has a gf. eager to know more about Kiara.

great that he agreed for Geet's sake to bring Kiara home.

oh now Jay is interested in Geet? I am sure Prem will have a lot to say about that.

Maan is correct that Geet is too good for Jay.

liked that Maan feels relieved speaking to Geet.

surprised seeing Kabir protective of Geet.

nice that Maan told Jay that he will Prem about him.

feeling for Maan... each evening he goes home not knowing what to expect.

Loved how Prem dealt with an overconfident Kabir.

can understand Geet's concern for Maan.

glad that took food for him and gave him the shawl.

agonising seeing his condition. hate his dad.

Maan is living in hell and the pain is unbearable.

wonderful that he has Geet by his side.

well the promise not letting her do more for Maan.

the tears and the pain are his constant companion.

Chapter 3

It made my heart beat high...I can anxiety reading the pain maan is going through...How can someone do this...I believe writing these sort of fanfiction is tough...As writer image things in purest form...

I can totally relate with geet...She grow up in happy environment and this situation must have been an eye opener...

I want to do something...It can destroy his life...

Geet and maan both are keeping their promises. I don't like maan's father how can he be so cruel. I liked the bonding between singhania siblings. Geet is worried about maan well being. I liked her taking dinner for maan, he is really going through a lot. I think maan and geet should talk to prem maybe he can give a solution or maan just should leave his father...

Nice part

Why is he being treated like this he is in so much Pain he doesn't have proper meals and sleep

Geet showing care and he is feeling emotional she took food for him and gave him shawl she is truly the light in his darkness

Are you planning to make me cry...I believe you do...Such a heart wrecking update... Can't handle the pain...Ma'am is living in hell...How could his friends ignore him...He is staying very close...Did not kabir ever visit him...

Jay is going to get a beating from Maan before Prem gets to him lol Glad he knows who isnt worth Geets time. Kabir is like why my sister lol. I really hoped he had come for the lasagna and not gotten beat, but glad he has someone looking out for him finally. The secret staircase will lead the way to healing. <3