Manchala ,madness of heart part 12 and last on page 19 - 10 feb - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks 4 da pm! read and commented already! update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Now Maan realizes the prank he pulled with Geet was infact costing him his own life partner
he was hurt when Geet told everyone she will marry but to Vicky not Maan
back home Maan's Dadu felt Maan's anger has cost him a diamond and Maan realizes that he has hurt his family deeply
Vicky ask Maan if he will not congratulate him and Maan feels like his heart has just gotten stabbed
Maan did not want to marry Geet then why is he feeling like he has lost everything
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Posted: 8 years ago
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part 4


Maan feel like someone stab his heart and he even not voice out his pain ...Vicky found painful emotions for moment than again it get hide under his mask , mask of MSK the angry man.

Maan ..smile softly which is looking sad smile ...he hug Vicky and cong him...

Vicky - thnks maan hope so u don't mind ...maan nodded in no and Vicky ask so bahbhi ko cong nahi karoge ..

Maan give him confused look...

Vicky - oh oh maan u sometime behave like Dum person...yaar bhabhi means geet wo meri would be hui means your bhabhi na ..Vicky ask him...

Maan feel like someone put him on fire ...Bhabhi Vicky ki wife ...he somehow control his emotions and say u say on my behalf ...vicky maan say ..

Vicky no maan its look rude ok I will massage u number bas call kar do ya massage dal do she is also tense that how u going to handle this marriage vikcy say softly .

Yes its true he is saying right ..maan nodded n Vicky hug him and say thanks maan thanks now go and sleep bahot raat ho gai hai ...

Vikcy went after massage him geet number ...

Now maan in dilima usko call kare ya massage dale de ..kya karna chiye at last he make mind and massage

Sorry for my behavior and

Cong for marriage

Welcome in khurana family

MSK...

He went to his room and lie on bed he closed his eyes but got only glisump of that face beautiful yet painful angry eyes ...he want to touch to her eyes clean that tear he raise his hand but that image blur in moment .

Maan feel so frustrated with himself how could he think like this ..in anger what he done which he going to regret for lifelong ...

Other side in Handa villa thou Vicky and all khurana family assured them but still they feel worry for geet ..they want geet think again for this decision .but geet assured them she went to her room...

Her life most IMP day turn as biggest disaster. He already have impression of rude arrogant on her and he today again proved that His anger his ego big than anything ...He forget that in own anger ego he hurting her and both the family...But what was in his eyes when he went out from house. she is deep thought when her mobile get beep with massage tone she with irritating tone took the phone that who is gadha (Donkey ) massaging so late night ...she open the massage and get shock its none other than THE MSK.

She took deep breath and mummer it's not that easy Mr. msk ..U prank on me main bhool bhi jati but u hurt my family and family is most Imp for me.

She ans him with one word ok...and drift in sleep she don't want to think more on it ...

Next day hurdle burdle in Km which wake up maan today he skip his early morning wake up and exerciser..he come out from room he ...ask nakul what happen nakul reply hurriedly ji roke ki preparation hai maan beta .maan feel like land escape from his feet ...his heart start to fell unknown and unbearable pain he chock with emotions ..family don't informed him ..and he is responsible for this situation that they not informed him about this Function.

With shuttered heart he went to his room and closed that someone saw this changing emotions face of maan...and went from there .

In every function from two days before full family should be maan behind him, bugging him to attend the function but today ..may be wo abhi bata denge he console himself ..but why Vicky don't told me why...just than he heard knock on door with hope he went to open door there his cusion dev and prem standing their ...they all ready for function . Wo maan bhiya dadu send massage to u that u get ready dev pause for while and say for office there are some imp meeting in office Vicky bhiya cannot attend this because unka yaha hona jarrori hai so ...maan feel so hurt with this massage his family have scare for his anger may be he will not behave with her and her family ...he nodded and went to bathroom to took shower he don't want to say anything .under the shower a hot tear fall from his eyes .

Each time he feel irritated with family bugging and when today they give him excused to not attend the function why he is not feeling good. Why he feel o hurt roka Vicky and uska roka its stab his heart like anything. he spend full hour in bathroom he somehow get grip on his heart and brain he get ready and without eating anything he skip from back side of Km ...so no one look him. He directly went to adi house its only 7.30 now adi his friend his collage friend working in other business so many time maan ask him to joined KC but he never say yes ..

Maan ring the adi door and hear sleepy irritated voice of adi ...adi open the door and before adi say anything maan entered in room ..

Maan muje abhot bhook lagi hai and I need my strong coffee ..please

Adi sleep shu away speedily he know his friend very well and upon that why the hell he is hear when roka function in his house ab kya naya kaand kiya msk ne adi gulped hard pray to god and went t kitchen side he hurriedly make sandwich and coffee strong coffee and entered with food in living area where msk seat with closed eyes ...

Adi - maan Bf finish kar lo ..without any word maan took bite of sandwich he finish it in two min a di guess its means he not eat in night But how when Vicky is around him its quite impossible. Adi wait till maan finish coffee and all ...

Till than adi finish his tea ..and wait to speak msk.when maan taking alst sip of coffe a drop of tear fall from maan eyes ...

Adi eyes winded in shock ...he almost run to maan side and side hug him...what happen scared adi ask him...

Adi know how strong maan is he never ever show his emotions or reacted like this in verse situation than what happen today ...

Maan who somehow hold himself from last day at last he broke down in Adi hug ...with chocked voice maan mummer I lost my family faith on me ...i feel so hurt with this roka and all I am not happy with this arrival ye rista muje chub raha hai adi adi turn more confused with maan word he cannot calculated one on one ...

Adi caressed maan back he not stop him ...he wait to become normal of his emotions outburst.

Adi - thik se bolo kya hua maan ...adi ask softly and maan narrow all things from family bugging to geet meet to today function.

Adi took deep breath he is sad with maan situation but he know maan himself is responsible for such situation His so called anger put him in such situation .and may be He fall in love with Miss GEET in first meet itself , which his extra clever brain not accepting it .

Precap

Roka aur kya now ye roka to Vicky and geet ka hai

All galiya is welcome ji ,...love u Mahi...

other updates link included Marriage mismatch


mg ff wo jo adhoori si baat baki ...PART 6 on page 18 - 14 nov












Edited by Mahimaan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#54
Ohh !! Is story ka bhi Naamkaaran hogaya.
Nice title di !!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update di
Liked it!!
Vicky's words about his alliance with Geet made Maan feel hurt and restless. Maan thyself is responsible for his situation and was frustrated. Geet was thinking to analyze Maan's glance towards her at the time of his departure alas shrugged her thoughts off owing to Maan's demeanor towards her. Hearing about Geet and Vicky's roka ceremony Maan was shattered and his family's conduct towards him hurt him a lot. Guess Maan tasted his own medicine concerning his previous behavior towards his family. He opened up about his inner turmoil to Adi as he considered adi to be his confidant .
Is roka really between Geet and Vicky !?
Thanks for the pm !
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks 4 da great update, well written! Feeling 4 Maan! but he is at fault! Maan shattered! he feels guilty! Maan messages Geet! he congratulates her! Geet angry at Maan as her family was hurt by his actions! Maan feels lonely! Maan opens up 2 Adi! Adi consoles him! update soon! interesting precap
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Posted: 8 years ago
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great update
maan is feeling hurt as his family ignoring him n lost their faith in him
but this all due to his fault n how he behave with geet
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Maahi Di...
Aap ki sab story me Maan dumb into matters of Heart ...
Why !!!
I am so irritated ...
Vicky Geet ka roka ...
how ...
upar se Maan ko functions me involve bhi nahi kar rahe ...
Maan itna ignored.. ki koi pucha tak nahi ..
Adi understand About Maan's feelings ..
first ...
tch
I opened all 9 pages ..
in search of Part 3 woh to mila hi nahi kahi ...!!
😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update dear, poor maan
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice update..
Maan his feel hurt for losing faith by his family..
Waiting for next update..

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