With This Taveez (5) ch 38 and NOTE pg 141

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: SnehakGowda
pls send me pm.. And password

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Originally posted by: indiegirl
Hi,
Very nice update and thanks for the song it is one of my favorite songs and my favorite actor. Vinod Khanna...
Finally, Maan and Geet, have come close to each other and confessed their feelings ...now she knows that it is her and only her who he loves and thinks about spending his whole life with ... he respects her innocence, her simplicity and her selflessness...he has seen that she is the epitome of beauty in her heart ... she is so humble and ready to live for others happiness...his grandma, Taradi, etc She does mind going to any length to help her close ones completely...his confession was so cute and straightforward...his naughtiness though is very nice ... but of corse the Parineeta part was so awesome...now she knows she is his Parineeta...his biwi in all sense...hope nothing bad falls in their way...
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Cartoon.Buff

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Posted: 8 years ago

#903

Finally... the confession!

It was beautiful! So true to their characters and realistic. I am glad their feelings are out before each other.

Although there are things about Maan's life that Geet is unaware of, hope their love and trust triumphs over all the evils that are going to come their way.

Thanks for the PM! Continue soon please.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Cartoon.Buff
Finally... the confession!

It was beautiful! So true to their characters and realistic. I am glad their feelings are out before each other.

Although there are things about Maan's life that Geet is unaware of, hope their love and trust triumphs over all the evils that are going to come their way.

Thanks for the PM! Continue soon please.

thank u
it is easy to write scenes but holding onto the character I have created for the story is challenging
so glad that you noticed 😃

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cutical

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Thank God maanet finally confessed befre raski cne n create problem maan also told geet tgat she is the same parineeta who he ltalking in dream geet happy hope maan trach raska a lesson evil woman nice update soon

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hira2010

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Posted: 8 years ago

#906

Part 37

Difference date ever I could say

Here geet is not have any idea about maan feeling she thought he called her for teasing her again lol

Here maan open his heart in front of her

Yeh pareneta ka words dout full q lag raha Hai

Well I love their nok jhok Wala confession

Romance slightly

So in the end she was in his arms save

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Awesome update 👏

Geet surprised n confused to see the arrangements 😃

Geet asking maan 'wo' kyun kiya... Hubby on papers tell her there are more wo before the night gets over 😳

"Kya hua Mr. Khurana? Aaj Chandramukhi aur Paro dono too busy hai for their Devdas? Mera turn aa gaya? I chide him... Love the way geet teased him😎

When he kneels down to confess... The scandal part geet tells was too good 😆

Maan finally confessed his love

Geet so happy but she too not less... Told she cares for her patji👍🏼

Song n dinner moments lovely

I don't think maan will tell her about pari

Waiting for the taveez part... When will she gift him

Eagerly waiting for the next update

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Madhuri

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Part 37 - Maan, Moonlight & Candles. Hummm...me too floating in the air, like geet. Simply beautiful update. Loved reading it. Perfect song for the update.

Finally maan confessed his love. Geet too was on cloud nine knowing his love for her. But she taking time purposefully to tease him.

Glad he said about his past, though it was very little info. But hope soon he tells everything to her.

He told her how she won his heart by her selfless love for everyone and how she changed his perception about love.

She was happy to know that she was his only parineeta and amazed to see him love her for that long time.

Dinner bhi ho gaya. Par wo' nahi hua. Ab kitne wo' honge aur kab geet bhi confess karegi, waiting for that.

Hows your health now.

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Madhuri

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Posted: 8 years ago

#909

Taveez bhi to pehnani baki hai.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: dqno1
pls send me the password

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