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Part 33

this chapter made Ayush my favorite character..
the playfulness, the teasing, but no harm meant behind it..
the feeling of losing a friend, and the happiness, the relief of founding her back again..
the bond between the two is deep..
loved the update..it was heart touching in many ways...

Part 34

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the whole conversation between Maaneet and thoughts of Geet in parallel..
specially those fantasies about meeting Maan Singh Khurana after a few years...and he still an architect..😆
this was so perfect..I think everyone has such fantasies imagined in some or other situation..

and that leaving this place..the ego of this Maan...he wants to ask her to stay, but could not admit and speak about it directly..
but at least he realized..and asked for apology..
loved the title..one moment it was all about the hope..the higher educations and the next moment, the realization of failure and truth turned into despair..

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 34

🤣
the whole conversation between Maaneet and thoughts of Geet in parallel..
specially those fantasies about meeting Maan Singh Khurana after a few years...and he still an architect..😆
this was so perfect..I think everyone has such fantasies imagined in some or other situation..

and that leaving this place..the ego of this Maan...he wants to ask her to stay, but could not admit and speak about it directly..
but at least he realized..and asked for apology..
loved the title..one moment it was all about the hope..the higher educations and the next moment, the realization of failure and truth turned into despair..

Part 34 - Part II

the whole analogy of wound and band-aid was heart-warming not only to Geet, but to us for it showed a different side of Maan...and also connected Maan and Geet on the lines of their dreams...who would know her state better than Maan, who himself was tied into the marriage unwillingly and has gone/is going through similar ups-n-downs while pursuing his dreams..
no pity, no judgmental opinion...rather there was an encouragement to try out something else
like Maan said, get it out of the system and move on..

the update was emotional..and the poem by JD made it feel deeper..

and on the emotional front a notch deeper was the part with Ayush..
kah na saka tumse kabhi..

that reminded me lines of another song..


the last update and this one, you made him my favorite character in the story..

and it was a beautiful update, Commelina !!

Originally posted by: Commelina

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Flame darling you are back !!!

I was missing you.😳

❤️

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slowly getting back !!!

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

Part 34 - Part II

the whole analogy of wound and band-aid was heart-warming not only to Geet, but to us for it showed a different side of Maan...and also connected Maan and Geet on the lines of their dreams...who would know her state better than Maan, who himself was tied into the marriage unwillingly and has gone/is going through similar ups-n-downs while pursuing his dreams..
no pity, no judgmental opinion...rather there was an encouragement to try out something else
like Maan said, get it out of the system and move on..

the update was emotional..and the poem by JD made it feel deeper..

Originally posted by: Flame_of_Forest

and on the emotional front a notch deeper was the part with Ayush..
kah na saka tumse kabhi..

that reminded me lines of another song..

Palkon pe reh jaayega yaadon ke jahan

Chalna akele hai yahan

Tanha dil, tanha safar

Dhoonde tujhe phir kyoon nazar...

the last update and this one, you made him my favorite character in the story..

and it was a beautiful update, Commelina !!

Part 35

loved the whole argument-al and analytical take on the relationship, marriage and human behavior..
the part about crossing the walls and obstacles will depend on how badly you want and how many times you are willing to try for it again and again..it is so true..

but some things may be somewhat dis-agreeable with Dadima..the same how badly you want may not be true in the case of love and heart..I agree with Geet that she does not have to go out of the way to covet his heart...neither she badly wants it now though JD's presence keeps bothering her nor it is the priority at the moment or may be she is confused about what she wants..
it is something which should take place naturally from both the sides.

but glad that she could talk to Dadima so openly and frankly minus the JD part of course..for JD also, unknowingly Dadima assured that he is not a person to love someone and marry another person, which seems true with the kind of persona he has :)

Part 36

biwi bachao..biwi padhao...😆

I am loving the way their relation is building up...it is growing with all the different shades..to an extent connected emotionally..to some extent started getting supportive..
to the most extent underlining their husband-wife relation when they argue...when they pass some sarcastic remarks at each other..
and amidst all they have also started noticing each other more..😆

coming to the update, Maan seems to be more serious and practical about her education thing compared to Geet herself..may be she needs a push towards getting serious about her career and Maan is exactly doing the same..
Hope she gets something inline with the medical stream as per her wish from the beginning.