Daring Love Story ||Thread 4|| Part 27 Page 1|| 17th Feb 2017

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

Stunner

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Posted: 8 years ago

#51

Part 27 - she was sent into his room. She was waiting for him. She amazed seeing the grandeur of the palace. She slept on swing looking at moon. He carried her inside then only she was awake. He answered her riddle by showing her neelkamal. She was stunned that he answered her riddle and now she has to do as he say. Seems he took her to kali ma's mandir. So he will claim his right. What will she do now.?

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mlaran852

@mlaran852

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#52

just finished reading all previous parts...thanks for the link..!!!!!!

its an awesome story and geetangli with maanveer are perfect...

geetangli is not the type of princess that maanveer is get used to...she compines beauty with mind and she knows how to use it...she may be innocent at some things and act like a kid but she knows what needs to be done and how to support her husband...being married with a man that has many wifes is not a girls dream, it cant be diggested easily and it gives pain...

maanveer is a ruthless king , who hides well his good side...he was mesmerised by geetanglis eyes and could see from her familys ways that she was a proud and smart pricess...he gave up a land for her and he could use other ways to have her too...he saw something in her that none of his other wifes had and the journey itself proved it...geetangli might be a kid and play with her pets but she managed to use her sword to protect him...maanveer is bored of timid little princesses and is about to get a suprise from geetangli...

she managed to save maanveers little sister and got her love, but she knew that all others were unhappy with her arrival...she was there to bring changes and that was unaccepted...

really waiting for next parts...will geetangli give in to him??

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Rashmi234

@Rashmi234

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#53

awesum update
geet was awed seeing maan's room decor
geet was trapped in her own plan...when maan answered her riddle
maan took geet to temple to fulfill his wish
maan teased her when she addressed him as rana ji ...n nt maharaj
waiting fr nxt

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#54

Part 18
Intresting part..
Ya Goons pagal hai kya jo maanveer the lion ko larkar rahe hai funny comment karka.. Maanveer unka samna karta hua geetanjali ko hosh ma lane ki koshish kia and soa hua sherni na toh pura hosh ka saath apne pati ka saath dia un goons ki band baja ne ma.. Dono no bravely unka samna kia ki wo goons bhag gaya apne jaan bacha kar.. Maanveer fully angry hai geetanjali par unki aisa unka baat na maan par.. Dono jungle ma time spend karna ka plan ma hai.. Maanveer shock hai geetanjali itni injured hokar vi bravely sab ka samna kia.. Rani ji ka wounds ka liya raja ji na medicine ready karka unka wounds par lagaya treatment kia..

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#55

Part 19 & 20
Awesome part..
Maanveer angry hota hai geetanjali par kyun ki unho na unha jagya nahi and jaldi jungle sa bahar jane ki rasta search karna hai.. Kuch fruits ka saath dono apne journey start karta hai.. Geetanjali toh apne jungle experience enjoy kar rahe hai and maanveer surprised hai geetanjali ki spirit sa wo pain ma hai phir vi other princess ki tarha comfort ka liya cribe nahi kar rahe hai..
Omg lions aagaya raja ji janha lions ko kill karna ka plan ma hai rani ji na apne mind use karka ek aur way ma lions sa bachna ka plan kar lia and raja ji shock hai rani ki dimag sa.. Rajdhani ma sab maanveer ka liya tense hai and savitri devi maanveer ki decision sa na khush hai aur meeting karka raja rani ko jungle ma sa bahar lane ki plan karta hai.. Jungle ma maanveer geetanjali ko tease karna koi chance nahi chodta and geetanjali vi takar ki hai.. geetanjali maanveer sa unka other queens ka warema qustion karta hai and maanveer ka ans sa shocked hai par maanveer na truth bola hai queens ka nature ka warema..

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#56

Part 21
Intresting part..
Maanveer geetanjali ko uthane ki kya idea use kia lol wo toh shock ho gayi.. Finally maanveer ki army ka ideas sa maanveer untak message signal kar lia and unhona vi help ki sankh,fire and colour use karka rasta show kia.. Maanveer geetanjali ka qustion karna par irritate hota hai and bad type behave karta hai unki family ka safety ka warn karka.. Geetanjali silent ho jati hai bas unka orders ko duty ka type puri karti hai maanveer ki taunt unha sad bana deti hai..
Part 22
Emotinal part..
Finally maanveer and geetanjali army ka saath hai and safe aur secure hai.. Rajdhani ma new rani ki welcome ki preparation chala hua hai.. Maanveer kuch deep thought ma hai and wo geetanjali ko court room ma ministers ka samna bulaya hai punish karna ko.. Geetanjali badly hurt hai raja ji ka aisa behaviour sa lalita vi asu baha rahi hai princess ka saath aisa hota dekha ka.. Geetanjali court ma apne aap ko bachane ko kuch vi nahi bolti and manveer usa prison karta hai 3days ka liya.. Maanveer ko pata hai unka aisa decision na geetanjali ka saath unka relation ko starting point par lea aya hai janha sirf Hate tha unha ma and unha pata hai geetanjali angry hai unpar unka darr nahi hai geetanjali ko.. Geetanjali king ka order man rahi hai bas wo ek cold sell ma chali gayi hai..
Part 23
Geetanjali punishment finish ho gaya hai unhona king ki order mani hai par apne zidd ma hai na ved ji nahi koi unha mila hai wo coldly behave kar rahi hai and maanveer unsa baat karna ata hai apne act ko justify karna par geetanjali ki baat and behaviour unko ego ko hurt karta hai jo king hona ka nata unka birth rights hai wo samjhta hai.. Geetanjali bilkul silent ho gaya hai pehla ki tarha sab sa baat karn bahar ghumna band kar lia hai..
Rajdhani ma geetanjali ki punishment ki baat jan kar samya khush hai par savitri devi isha punishment ka second side dekha rahe hai jo maanveer ki maa hokar unha pata hai..
Rajabhumi jane ma aur time hai toh maanveer and army rest karna ko rehta hai and aditya village ki kisi mela ma jane ki proposal deta hai..

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cutical

@cutical

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#57

geet gaves maan a challenge n maan is going to fulfilling it poor her geet is very stuborn n maan start liking heis princesss nice contine soon dear

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Mona (Rashmi)

@Mona_90

Rocker

Posted: 8 years ago

#58

Part 24
Maanveer apne exercise ma busy ho gaya mela ma nahi gaya hai and koi enemy attack karta hai geetanjali maanveer ki jaan bachta hai and maanveer geetanjali kareeb ata hai aur unka kareeb ana geetanjali ko lagta hai wo unha scared feel karwana chahta hai maanveer ammuse hai princess ki socha sa.. And maanveer unka saath kali maa ki mandir jana chahta hai par geetanjali na chalenge kar liya ya riddles solve karna ko boal ka and maharaja challenge accept vi kia hai..
Part 25
raja,rani tilkagad maanveer ki state ka kareeb aagaya hai wanha par pura state ready hai apne new rani ki welcome karna flowers,rangoli,dance,art ka saath.. Geetanjali khush hai maanveer ko challenge karka unka ego satishfy hai.. Samya and queens geetanjali ki welcome karna ma khush nahi hai par savitri devi ki hukum and tradition ko break nahi karna chahta..
Maanveer apne baato sa,state ki khoobsurti and grand welcome ko lekar geetanjali ko taunt karta hai par geetanjali ki ans unha toung tied, shock and surprised karta hai socha ma daal deta hai ki husband,wife ka relation aisa vi hota hai and geetanjali ko pata hai sare shine karta chiag hera nahi hota hai..
Part 26
Maanveer and geetanjali ki entry ki rituals start ho gay hai and geetanjali ki maanveer ka state ko safe and security ki arrangement sa wo imress hai aur geetanjali ki braveness ko mana padega jo snake ka samna aagayi bhavani ko bachna ka liya jo maanveer ki sis hai jaan vi cute bhavani ki act na sab ko speechless kar dia unki aur geetanjali bahut banegi.. Geetanjali maanveer ki queens ki ankho ka dard samjhti hai jo uska dil ma vi hai.. Samaya geetanjali sa imtroduce hona aur apne rudwa dikhane ayi thi par geetanjali ki ans na unki bolti band kar dia.. Sambhal jao queens ya rani koi brainless nahi hai ishka pass dil and dimag hai jo sab ki chutti karwadegi..
Waiting for next part..
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