DARK TEMPTATION 2 Updated NEW THREAD & PT 22 on 30-8-2015/ PG 139

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happydays30

@happydays30

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Posted: 10 years ago

#931

Awdsome part
Maan is changed n took work serious n being success too
geet n maan encounter suprise package...
now how their relation changes waiting to know...

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love2_soma

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Posted: 10 years ago

#932

hate u geet...maan is trying sooo hard n she...

awesome updates...

loved dem very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updates...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Taahir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#933

Double Updates Were Just Superb

I'm actually liking the responsible Maan the one that is working even though its tough yet he is proving he is the man getting his salary check and yeah its a lot less that what he spends in minutes but this check is his true earnings and not his father's money that he gets for free .
Geet seeing the check and insults him but she failed to realized that one day when his father is not around he would be able to run the business empire and just just liquidate it so yeah there Geet has no sense of any knowledge as these stuff does not bother her
Maan makes a proposal and everyone includes his dad is impressed with him .
now I'm 100% convinced its his own father not step dad
Maan goes to club and sees Vikram and Geet but this enrages Maan and he and his friends has a fight while he too slaps Geet and both again have a fight
It will be difficult for Maan to make Geet trust him or to make her to come into the right path she has her mind set on that and now that he is changing he finds that she is wrong

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ns.1

@ns.1

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Posted: 10 years ago

#934

thanks for the double treat dear 😊wonderful updates. Part 20 was simply awesome 😊after trying hard and finally settling down at work maan completes a month and gets his first salary,which makes him very happy and satisfied of his achievement but yet again geet mocks him for his salary and again hurts himhe goes to his old house once again where he used to stay with him mom once and again finds his dad there, who not only appreciates his efforts but feels proud of him asks for his first cheque and even kisses it which touches maan so much as he never cared for his father's sentiments and always hurt him but now the gap between father and son is decreasing and I am loving their new found bond😊maan gives a suggestion at his office meeting and is selected for the project as project head making his father more proud and him more responsible at his work but when will geet learn her lessons,its time that she also sees the mirror and more than maan geet needs to change and only maan can change this spoiled cat. Maan goes out to enjoy with his friends and seeing geet there with his own friend makes him very angry and again geet insults maan in front front all😡shocking maan's friends also that she is maan's wife 😲😡 eagerly waiting for more and specially now geet getting a reality check😡

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annirogc

@annirogc

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Posted: 10 years ago

#935

awesome updates... maan was changing gradually,he was now working and also got first earning.. geet was enjoying her life.. maan was going to pub for enjoying.. but seeing geet as vickram date he was enraged.. now what will happen

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harshu...

@harshu...

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#936

Amazing update .
maan got his first salary bt geet mocked his emotions .
nd tht time it ws only samarth who ws happy for him .
lovely covnvo btwn him nd samarath.
hmm maan is scared of his sherni .
omg !! He ws too angry seeing geet in somelse"s arm tht he slapped her .
his friend were shocked to see geet's bomb avatar .
now waiting to see whts gonna happen next.

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Jhoncena6199

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Posted: 10 years ago

#937

Hi m new here loved ur story plz plz add me too

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#938

hi thanks 4 da intense superb updates! well written! Maan happy with his first salary! Geet taunts Maan! Maan upset! he goes 2 his mom's place! Samarth is there! he is proud of Maan! they celebrate! Samarth n Maan get closer! Samarth advises Maan hw 2 handle Geet! Maan;s proposal is approved! Vikram with Geet! Maan livid! Maan slaps Geet n she slaps him! she leaves n calls the deal off! Maan angry! Maan is slowly changing bt Geet?? update soon

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drashti88

@drashti88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#939

what an update!! now both devils have become mate. it was intense n thanks for it. with this step they r making themselves close to each other but they r still now unknown of this fact. waiting for the next dear. now it will b geet's turn i hope so 😉

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drashti88

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Posted: 10 years ago

#940

maan is tempting her but not giving in. he is so smart lol. geet is finding herself under his control whenever he is coming close to her. geet is not getting her grip on maan n becoming frustrated . waiting for more to read. waiting