Kismat Connection - Updated EPILOGUE on 4-3-2015 / Pg 66 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 2
Oh god kya update tha babu...poor maan kaha phas gaya 🤣
yaar geet ki tho poori family hi unique h...bina kuch jaane maan ko blame kr rh h...hmmm tho ghar me sab geet se bohot pyaar krte h n koi usse kuch nai khta h aur darji b geet pe fake anger dikha rh h...abi b geet k bhagne ka reason nai pata chala...
akhir kis baat k liye geet ghar se bhagi thi????
eagerly waiting for nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
THANKS FOR THE PM
CONGRATS FOR THE NEW STORY
INTERESTING START
POOR MAAN - KAHA PHAS GAYA PAAGLO KE BEECH
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Posted: 10 years ago
congrats for the new story 😊superb hilarious funny start😆😃👏 and I am loving it already 😃the second part was so funny and hilarious that I am still laughing 😆😆 kahan phas gaya maan bechara 😆 😆😛 eagerly waiting for more...continue soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful updates...enjoying geet..but poor maan...
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Posted: 10 years ago

A story with a difference. Loving the updates thus far and looking forward to what is in store next.

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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting concept.. nice start..both updates are super..looking forward to read more..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely updates...
Different one..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
such a hilarious one Richa 😊
poor maan kahan phas gaya...
waiting for more😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
really interesting story...different!
bechara maan kahan phaas gaya! LOL!😆
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Posted: 10 years ago


PART - 3


Daarji instructs Brij before leaving. Geet was taken away by her mother and here Maan was alone enclosed by her brothers. Arjun left with Daarji but 3 remaind in Haveli and glaring Maan furiously. Brij and Teji moved towards him, clutch his shoulders and pressed hard.

"Brij ab iska kya kiya jaye?" He asked staring Maan.

Brij came forward and gave him glate shots. Maan gulp hard. He was alone in between their army. All men of them are standing enclosing him with weapons.

"Suniye Daarji ne mana kiya hai. Or abhi to hume kuchh pata b nahi hai. Geet keh to rahi hai wo isko nahi janti." One sweet voice coming behind Brij's back, giving hope to Maan. Atleast some one is there who think wisely.

"Parjai ji tussi nahi jande, e dono jhooth bol rae hai. Maine khud dekha dono ko. Geet iske up..." Lucky intrupts and telling his sister in law what he exactly saw in the train. He actually mistook the view he saw on train and was telling but stopped explaining everything in detail.

"Nimmi tu ander ja.", Brij instructs his wife.

"Par suniye to." She approch him again, to stop taking any action in his rage. All know how possessive all 4 for their only baby sister.

"Tussi fikar na karo parjaiji. Hum Daarji ka hukum nahi talenge. Hath pair nahi todenge iske." Teji assured her. She left and Teji command his men to keep their eye on Maan till Daarji came back.

All left him in between their men. Maan sat on couch and thinking how will eacape from there. He was only looking for a chance to made an escape. So he wait till their men get tired and went to sleep. In mid night when all are in deep sleep Maan wore his bag on his shoulders and start moving towarda the main exist silently, unaware of the fact that some one from the house is also coming with him. Both silently reached to the door and bumped on each other. He about to shout loud but a soft hand covered his mouth and stop him from screaming. His eyes popped out. He removed the hand and burst on her.

"You again? Why the hell you are behind my life. I was cursing the moment I gave you my hand for help. For which your whole crazy family want to chop me." The anger he wont able to show to her brothers was come out in front of her.

But Geet wasn't affected by his anger. If anything she is care was his voice which is loud enough to awake all. Geet pushed him and tagged against the wall near gate. She covered his mouth again. He glared her but she make aure that his voice wont come out. "Shhh. Chup ho jao warna apne sath mujhe b pakadwaoge. See tume bhagna hai na yaja se? I too want to ran from there. So please don't make a noise and alert all." She put sense in him and awared about the danger he is calling by screaming on her.

Maan realize that she was right. If all awake then he will be dead for sure. He calmed and both seeking for a way to ran from.

"Come with me." She took him to one corner where they can climb over the wall to move out. Maan took his foot on correct places and reached on the top and jumped out. Next was Geet following him. She jumped and fall on him again. Both stood up to ran away but wasn't fortunate. Their thought that no one is aware was wrong. Brij was standing in front of them with Teji and lucky surrounded by their men. No path to escape from. Moreover both are running together holding each other's hand confirmed their doubts that they some connection. Brij signaled Lucky and he clutch her forearm. "Bachhi ko ander leke ja. Tab tak hum iski khatirdari karte hai." His rude command clearly a signal what he was thinking of doing with Maan.


"Veerji uski koi galti nahi hai. Wo sirf yaha se jana chahta hai bas." Geet defends him.


"Chup kar. Tujhe kuchh kehte hai nahi to tu kuchh b karegi. Ab nahi chhodenge isko." Teji roared on her.


Lucky dragged him inside and locked her in her room. She was yelling but no one listening to her. Their men also dragged him inside.

"Ab kya kare iska? Daarji ne kaash humare hath bandhe nahi hote." Brij want to teach him a lesson but don't disobey his grandfather. All stared him like butucher scann the goat before chhoping.


"Koi nahi hath pau nahi todenge par saza to milegi. Isko bhainso k sath bandh tabele me bandh dete hai. Sara dinn bhuka pyasa waha rahega na to akkal tikhane aa jayegi." Teji suggested to tied him in stable in between cows and buffalos, and kept him hungry for whole day. No one is allowed to give water even.


All agree and tied him there. The smell of their dung cake and their bellows sound killing him. It was his first experience when he these animals as closely. All are staring thrm he felt. "Shut up. Shut up all of you and do your work rather then staring me " Maan yelled on cows and buffalos. Pouring out his frustration on poor animals.

Listening his scolds all bellows more loudly like they to annoyed with his manners. "Waise tum me or us ghar k logo me na sirf ek hi farak hai wo do pau pe chalte hai or tum sab char. All of you are bull shit." As they made noise Maan to snap back and scold them more. "Gosh in paglo k beech aake main b pagal ho raha hu, jo in janwaro se bate kar raha hu. Waise to yaha ye hi pata nahi chal raha ki janwar kon hai or insaan kon." Maan was now totally pissed off. He was only throwing out his frustration rather scolding the animals under the shed or wriggling to freed hinaeld which was not possible as the rope was tied very hard.


Sun dawn. Servants came and serve the food and water to their animals but no mercy for Maan. He was tied and in very bad condition. No one even bother him.

Only Geet was the one who was taking his tension. She know how heartless her brothers become to others when it comes to her. When lachhi, her house made came to call her for breakfat, she yelled on her and pushed out of her room. She even denied taking her meal.


"Pammi Geet kaha hai?" Teji asked from his wife.

"Ji wo nahi aayegi. Usne saaf mana kar diya hai kuchh b khane peene se."

"Ye ladki b na pata nahi kya chahti hai." Rano disappointed with her stubborn behaviour.

"Tu kyu apna khoon jala rahi hai. Dekhna abhi aa jana hai usne thodi der me." Rano's jethani consoled her.


"Main lata hu use." Brij leave hia chair and went to her room. He entered inside. Geet was sitting on her bed,encircling her legs. "Bachhe chal sab tera wait kar rae hai." He asked politely.


Instead of giving ans she stirred to other side. Brij got that she is angry with him, so he to moved towards her to face her. He hold his ears and apologized. But still no ans. Teji and Lucky to came there and all asked for sorry but she showing her flushed face, changing to red due to her anger. "Dekh tu nahi khayegi to koi b nahi khayega." He tried to melt her.


She stared all. " if you want me to eat then feed him first." She told her decision.

"Kisko?" All three asked.

"Aap sab achhe se jante ho main Maan ki baat kar rahi hu. Bina baat aap us bechare ko saza de rae ho. Jabki uska koi lena dena b nahi hai humse. Puri raat aap sabne usko shed me rakha or khana b band kar diya. To ab jab tak wo nahi khayega, na main khaungi na pani peeungi." She told her decision very strongly and moved out, don't want any arguement over this.

All came back empty hand. And as expected, all left the dinning table without eating anything. How can they when their princess was starved. Like them she was too stubborn. It was mid noon and she wont even touch water. All are worried for her only.

"Veerji kuchh karo. Geet to jaise karwachuth ka vart rakh k baith gai hai us munde k liye." Lucky paniced.

Hearing his worda his both elders gave him glaring shots. "Bhale hi aap dono ko Lucky veerji ki baat galat lagi ho par wo keh to sach hi rae hai na. Geet ne subah se pani tak nahi piya. Aap b jante ho wo apni jidd nahi chhoregi to kam se kam aap log hi chhod do." Nimmi pleads for her sake.

They think wisely and decided to change their decision. Brij set plate for her and went to her room. "Chal ab khama kha le."


Geet twitched her lips. "No, pehle usko khana do." She demands.

"Meri maa Lucky gaya hai khana leke." He told her.

"Aap jhoot bol rae ho na mujhe khana khilane k liye?" She was suspicious.

"Kabhi jhooth bola hai maine tujhse? Wo kha raha hai ab tu b kha le."

"Nahi pehle mujhe dekhna hai." She wants to confirm that they wont lied to make her eat. Reluctantly Brij allowed her and she straight ran towarda the room where he was kept.

Lucky was standing there and Maan sat on a bed with his hands tied. "O ab kha le khata kyu nahi?"

"Veerji wo koi janwar hai kya? Usko hath khologe tabi to khayega na", Geet saw the condition and scold Lucky.

"Oye hath nahi kholne iske. Khana khane ki permission mili hai hath kholne ki nahi." Lucky strictly prohibited her from uniting his hands.


"Fine aap mat kholo." She sat near him. "Don't worry I will feed you." She filled the spoon and raised towarda his mouth. Though he wont like the food but right now he was hungry so he silently take what they gave to him.


As he took the first bite he start couching badly. Geet worries for him and rubbed his back to calm him. Lucky quickly filled the water glass and gave to Geet. She made him drink the water from one hand and stroking his back with other one.

"Are you okay? What happened? " she asked worriedly.


Maan affected by her care and concern. She was seemed crazy arrogant and rude to him in their first meet but today he saw her other side to. Maan staring her constantly. When he won't give a reply, she asked again. "Bahut spicy hai." He told to her.


"Oh so you won't able to digest spicy food. Lachhi idhar aa." She called her servant. She came inside. "Lachhi,parjai ji ne jo khana Samar or Paransh k liye banaya hai usme se khana le k aa." She instruct her and he left quickly. "Wo actually we don't aware about your food habbits so we served what we liked." Geet explain.


Maan was so confused so he want to confirm first who is Samar and Pransh. Will they are too their animals or pet dogs. "Ye jo khana tumne abhi mangwaya wo dono k khane me se, kon hai wo?" He wants to clear his doubts first.


"They are my nephews. Wo dono abhi chhote hai na to unke liye bina mirchi wala khana alag se banta hai." She explained and he sighed.


Lachhi brought the food, she ordered. Geet feed him till he full. "Veerji ye yahi rahega kamre me. Ab aap isko bhainso k bech nahi bandhoge." She commands bossily.


"Achha nahi bandhunga. Ab to isne bhi kha liya hai. Ab tu b kuchh kha le, subah se bhook hartal pe baithi hai." Lucky asked her to take her meal infront of Maan. Now he got why his punishment get over before time. And the fact that she stayed statved because of him attracts him more. Gradually he was pulling towards her unknowingly.

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