~ MERI DULHAN~ |Updated part 7 on page 61 / 15/12/17 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SHRADDHA2102


Good start...
Expecting sum thing diff
Don't wann Geet to b sati Savitri type... She shud b free bird
N hope maan is nt angry young man.
Luking at prologue n 1st part doesn't seems to be... All d best


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Originally posted by: chahat_mannat

Hey sporti maan ke iss behavior ke piche ek puri explanation hai jo next update mein milegei.
Wait for next update u will get ur answers there.
Will update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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FIRST OF ALL, THANK U EVERYONE FOR TAKING AN INTEREST IN THIS STORY AND READING IT TILL NOW... I AM OVERWHELMED WITH ALL THE COMMENTS. HERE IS THE NEXT PART.

Part 2

After party now its time for bidaai. Geet is crying keeping her head on her father sholder. The scene is very emotional for everyone. Geet mother is also crying and dadi is consoling her.

Dadi - bus rano ab rona mat. Tum kyun paresaan ho rahi ho hum hai na geet ke sath aur woh kahi dur bhi toh nai ja rahi.

Rano - main janti hu maaji par kya karu maa ka dil hai manta hi nai. Bachpan se maasi ke sath thi socha tha ab yaha aakar humare sath rahegi aur yahi padegi. Par aaj toh humari dono betiya parayi ho gayi.

Mohinder - maaji main janta hu ki muje ye kehna ki jarurat nai par agar geet se koi galti ho jaye toh use maaf kar dena.

Dadi - nai usse toh hum apni beti bana kar le ja rahe aur hume pata hai ki geet se kabhi koi galti nai hogi.

Geet - maa maasi nai abhi tak?

Rano - geet unki flight cancel ho gayi hai weather ki wajah se who kal subah aayegi beta.

Annie(to dadi) - dadi bidaai ka muhrat ho gaya hai.

Dadi - ab hume chalna chahiye bidaai ka muhrat nikal na jaye.

Mohinder( to maan ) - maan humari beti ka khayal rakna. Woh bhut bholi hai usse naye logo se milne mein waqt lagta hai.

Maan - main samjta hu uncle main apni taraf se puri kosish karuga ki geet ko koi taklif nai ho.

Rano and mohinder lead to the car which is decorated for new wedded couple. Both maan and geet sat in car and dadi, Vicky and annie sat in other car. Car start and start moving, geet raised her hand in a way to reach them like she cud touch them and wipe the tears of their face. She kept looking back even after the images faded away in the horizon.

Maan want to console her becoz somewhere he responsible for this. After sometime the car pass through a huge iron gate. The car stopped in the portico which had a big grand door for the entrance. Maan came out and annie help geet to get out of car. Dadi start the rituals and geet enter in the house after knocking the kalash. Post marital rituals were completed very quickly as everyone was tired from yesterday. Geet is taken to maan room by annie.

In maan room

Geet is standing near glass door still in her wedding attire. She is very tired after yesterday. Her life completely changed now is married. She turn toward the room and saw a king size bed which is decorated with canopy of white jasmine theards. The room has modern furniture. She cud fell him in everything inthat room.

Geet was just gazing at each and everything and absorbing them as this wud be also her form now for sometime. The room door clicked and maan entered. Maan saw geet standing near window and thinking something. He cleared his throat to gain her attention. Geet turn toward him and maan said

Maan - geet tum iss bed par so jao main couch par so jauga.

Geet - nai main couch use kar lugi aapko mere liye kuch karne ki jarurat nai hai.

Maan - main kuch nai kar raha bus tume bed par sone ke liye kah raha hu aur ye kuch bhi nai usske badle jo tumne dadi ke liye kiya hai. Waise bhi muje study mein kuch kaam hai.

Saying dat he went toward the door which is near her where she is standing. Maan came and set on his chair keeping his palm on his face. He was making a brave face for his family but now he is feeling very lonely just like when he lost his parents. He was angry on his parents to leave him like this. Dadi was mostly busy in office and Vicky - annie were small to understand all this. He became rude to all his frds. Then one day reet take admission in his class. She was very humble and innocent girl to everyone. She came near maan desk said

Reet - excuse me kya main yaha baith sakti hu. You see koi aur seat vacant nai hai.

Maan - sure but mujse baat karne ki kosish mat karna.

Reet - ok and thank u.

After sometime reet is geting bore sitting quietly and turn to maan

Reet - waise maine apna naam toh tume bataya hi nai. Main reet handa hu.

Maan - maine tumse tumara maan puacha nai na toh fir.

Reet - main itna quietly nai rah sakti.

Maan - toh kahi aur jakar baate karo.

Reet - kyun baate nai karni aati.

Maan(irritatedly) - nai aati bus.

Reet (cutely)- hwww toh itni deer se kya kar rahe the?

Maan - mera dimag mat khao aur jao.

Reet (innocently)- main kisi ka dimag nai khati, main pure vegetarian hu.

Maan smiled listening to her. He was smiling first time after his parents death. After dat day both become best frd. One day reet ask him why he was like this. Maan told her his parent sudden death and how he become lonely. Reet explain him its god wish and they can't do anything but accept it. She also told to think positive in it and help dadi to overcome the lose of their family. Maan was surprised to listening these things from her. He asked her how she think positive in everything?

Reet - maan maine bhi apne dadu - dadi ko khoya hai, woh mere bhut karib the. Maine bhi kafi din tak khana nai khaya fir papa ne samjaya ki woh hamesha sath nai rah sakte toh iska matlab ye nai ki hum jina chod de.

Maan- thank u reet muje ye sab batane ke liye aur big wala thank u meri life mein aane ke liye.

Maan and reet always support eachother in their decision. With time both fell in love with eachother and in their last year they confess, their family were happy for them.Reet want to become actress and maan help her to get permission from her family. Rest all know what happen. Then how can he not support her when she always stood by his side. His thought get disturb by his phone ring. He saw an unknown number flashing on the screen. He attended the call.

Maan - hello

other side - maan

Maan - reet tum tekh toh ho?

Reet(crying) - maan itna kuch hone ke baad bhi tume meri parwa ho rahi hai. Main bhut bhuri hu jo tume aise itni muskil situation mein chod kar aa gayi.

Maan - reet stop crying.

Reet - nai maan maine tumare sath sath geet ki life bhi spoil kardi. Agar main nai jati toh ye sab nai hota.

Maan - reet tum itna mat socho hum iss baare mein baad mein baat karege. Tum apni film par dyaan do.

Reet - maan muje ab jana hoga. Tum meri geet ka khayal rakna woh kuch nai kahegi. Tume khud hi samajna hoga. Maan main jaldi hi wapis aaugi. Bye maan take care of geet

Maan - bye reet

HOPE U ALL WILL LIKE IT AND GIVE UR PRECIOUS COMMENT.

Chahat

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok... so,reet supported maan emotionally and he fell in love...


yeh reet mujhe abhi bhi kuch theek Nahi lag rahi hain...



kuch toh hai daya... Jo chut raha hai😆



do continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chahat yaar hum friends h na...
bata na ye reet ka kya chakar h😳

Plzzz😊😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely emotional update! Geet leaves her home! She is in KM! She assures Maan! Maan remembers Reet n hw they met! Reet was der 4 him n her fell in love wid her! bt Reet nw left him b4 their wedding! she is so selfish! does she even love Maan?? she calls! She apolgises! Bt Maan says he shld complete her film! is he ok?? despite wt she did he still supports her! she tells him to take care of Geet! Wt is she up 2? update soon! Well written
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