MG FF :Saath Nibhana Sathiya pt 12 n note pg 107 11/may/17 - Page 26

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Posted: 10 years ago
i remember reading this
and finally completed the given parts
awesome portrayal dear
loved it so much

sorry i dont remember where i res my post so commenting now
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 11

Around 5'o clock
Receptionist calls maan on his cabin landlines to tell him about some courier on his name and he orders her to sent the courier in his cabin...after some time sound of knocking wakes geet up from her little nap...and she sits properly on.couch
Maan collects the parcel

Geet: ye kya hai
Maan : well this is for u...
Geet : mere liye dijiye na
Maan : nhi geet abhi nhi,baad mai
Geet : par.mujhe dekhna hai...she said like a baby
Maan : baad mai...he said with final tone...and geet sits back on the couch with pout...
Maan : ab jyada muh mat banao...aur utho refrigerator se apne liye juice nikalo n peeyo
(Oh I forget to.mention he had small refrigerator in his cabin)
Geet : mujhe nhi peena
Maan : geet he said sternly
With sad face she goes to take juice for her
Geet : mere liye gift laye aur mujhe hi nhi dekhne dete...aisa bhi Koi karta hai.bhagwanji... Mai Dekh leti abhi toh kya jaata...she murmers unaware of that maan is hearing all this and maan smiled on.his wife antics... Than geet start drinking juice n.maan again got busy in files...
After sometime he finished his work look towards geet n found her again sleeping maan goes towards her and tried wake her up
Maan : get up sleeping beauty...
Geet : sone dijiye na...she murmers
Maan : geet utho jaan...humne jana bhi hai n.Waise bhi late ho gya hai...
Geet open her eyes slowly and asked
Geet : kaha jana hai...
Maan : baad mai.bataunga abhi tum utho fresh hoke aao n.isse pehan k aao...he gives her the same package...after seeing that package her sleep flew away

Geet : yeh mera gift...Par aap toh keh rhe the abhi nhi denge...
Maan : ha tab nhi dena tha socha tha ghar jake dunga but ab ghar jake change karne ka tym nhi hai
Geet : par hum ja kaha rhe hai...aur aapke kapde wo toh ghar mai hai na
Maan : nhi kuch kapde mere pass yaha bhi rakhe hue hai...ab tum jao change karke aao
Geet : ok...

Then she goes to washroom attached in.his cabin
Geet came out from.washroom wearing thisand maan got lost in her beauty... He came on earth with geet voice
Geet : kaha kho gye bataiye na.kaisi lag rhi...
Maan : bohot sundar
Geet : wo toh lagni hi.thi aapki pasand ki.jo.saree pehni hai...kitni sundar saree
Maan : na saree sundar nhi.hai...sundar toh tum ho aur ye saree bhi achi lag rhi hai.kyoki tumne ise pehna hai...geet blushed on.his cmnt...
Geet : aap bhi tyar ho.jayiye she said in low town and looking down blushingly

Maan kiss her on.her cheeks and.goes to take out his clothes from the cupboard in.his cabin and goes to.change in washroom
Maan came from washroom after few minutes takes his.mobile n some.keys and geet set palla on.her head and both leaves the cabin...no one is available in the office as the office timing is over...reaching outside the building they found peon n watchman sitting together n listening some songs on.FM...after looking at maan they salutes him and he orders the peon to.lock all the cabins n off the main switch
Maaneet reached near his car n.maan tells the driver to.leave n he himself takes the driver sit...N geet on.passenger seat...and then he start driving
Geet : ab toh bataiye na kaha ja.rhe hai
Maan : nhi
Geet : plzzz she make puppy face
Maan : acha ok.batata hu...hum humare farmhouse ja.rhe hai jo city se Thodi dur hai... Ab aur koi question nhi coz.mai answer nhi karunga n.agar Zidd ki toh dant dunga...
Geet make face and start looking outside the window... After sometime she switch on the radio and there playing some romantic numbers... And she start humming

At night around 8 pm they reached the farm house and already there are some cars parked...they goes inside and geet shocked to see her whole family means(handa's n her new family khuranas) is present there and doing chatting laughing eating
In the garden which is decorated with lights and view is so.beautiful and her family's happy faces making it more beautiful...
After seeing maaneet all stand from their seats and handa's steps forward to meet their daughter and son-in-law...
After all the hugging setion n greetings... All went inside than mohinder handa asked Ranjeet
Mohinder : bhai sahab ye Aj ka sara programme rakha Kis khushi...
Ranjeet : bhaisahab ye sab humne apni bahu k liye rakha hai...
Ananya : humari bahu ne itni badi khushi di hai hume toh socha aap logo k saath baate Akhir beti hai aapki...
Mohinder : par bataiye toh kya khushi hai
Harleen(geet dadi) tu abhi tak nhi samjha...she said while getting up...mohinder teri beti maa banne wali hai aur tu nana... Than she take a piece of sweet from plate and feed maaneet...and blessed them and their unborn baby...
All family got happy after listening harleen words...ananya also nodes in confirmation... Rano started showering love on.her daughter and Anjali with her 3 n half months old belly also came forward to hugged her little. Mohinder also blessed MG and.Brij congratulates them...and Maanvi hugged her tightly and congratulates maan
Than anjali asked Geet in her ears
Anjali : konsa week hai...
Geet : 6th
Anjali : itni jaldi pata Chal gya...mai toh itni busy thi Maine changes carving pe dhyan hi nhi gya...tere shaddi k Agle din hi exertion ki wajha se faint hui jab pta chala
Geet : di mere sath bhi aisa hi hua...ghar mai inme itni busy ho.jati hu ki apne pe dhyan hi nhi jata...
Btw all are busy in them selves...like all man are busy in discussing business...old ladies are busy in making plans for geetnsh baby...Annie in her cellphone n three sisters in talking with each other.
Ok back to anjali geet talk
Anjali : tu khush hai na... She asked while cupping her face in.one hand
Geet held her hand and answered bohot

Maanvi : kya aap dono apne mai lage hue ho...mujhse bhi baat karo...Waise kya baat kar rhe the...
Anjali : teri shadi ho.jayegi jab tujhse bhi ye baat karenge..Abhi nhi...
Maanvi give whatever look and than she sits beside geet and asked
Maanvi : acha di apne baby k liye koi naam socha
Geet : naam abhi se pagal hai kya...baby ko ane mai Abhi kitna tym hai...Abhi se naam kon socha hai...
Maanvi : sochte hai na humari anjali di ne socha hai...kya tha ladki hui toh vrinda n ladka hua toh anuj
Anji: ye tujhe Kaise pta ye toh mujhe aur...Than Maanvi smirks
Anjali : Hawww tu meri aur inki baate sun rhi thi...tu na bohot badmash ho rhi hai...teri bhi jaldi shaddi Karwani Padegi
Maanvi : I don't mind...and than.she winks and trio laughs heartily
Than dadi (maan dadi)called them
Dadi : bachiyo jao dekho khana laga hai ya nhi
AGM:ji dadi then goes towards dining area...N Annie also leaves from there and dadi smiles to see this that granddaughter is herself taking interest in household work...but she don't knows that she goes from there for another reason

Plz do like and comment

-kriti



Edited by CuteStrawberry - 8 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice... Liked it ...
Thanks for pm ...
Thanks for update...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetsangel

nice... Liked it ...

Thanks for pm ...
Thanks for update...
Continue soon...


thank u dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi
I really loved all the parts
You have beautifully described the love between maan and geet
In last part the emotional feeling of geet for maan was to good
Now I have commented pls give link for next update

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear all blessed Mann and geet for unborn baby
All are happy for them
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aakshitha

Hi

I really loved all the parts
You have beautifully described the love between maan and geet
In last part the emotional feeling of geet for maan was to good
Now I have commented pls give link for next update


thank u dear
and chk ur pm

p.s dont expect pw without cmnt 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update.loved it.all family members r happy about geet pregnancy.anyways i want geet to complete her ambition after delivery.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update dear all are happy for unborn baby bless geet and Mann
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb n sweet update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update n fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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