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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: krndr

OmG Richa Maan as a gaon ka chora
Awesome
never read about such a thing before
but I think Maan's trying to disguise himself purposely and he has come to protect Parth
waiting to read more of it

thanx dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd

part 1
awesome dear...
hahaha that was so funny...
Maan is like that?
cont soon dear...

PS - can u post the link when u update int his thread?
FF Daily Updates 11

thanx dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: DantaDeepa

<font color="#336666">superb</font>

<font color="#336666">awesume</font>
<font color="#336666">fabulous</font>
<font color="#336666">keep it up</font>
<font color="#336666">continue soon</font>
<font color="#336666">upd soon👏</font>

thanx dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will give soon

Originally posted by: _CookieMonster_

<font color="#cc0066">waitingg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!</font>

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: fabiyamg

<font size="5">wow interesting story
<div></div>maaneet opposite pole in everthing </font>

thank u baby
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra

Hmmm...


I love the whole mrng scene

Parth's life in danger. .n dev want to protect him..

Geet is his care taker .n also concern abt him

Maan...mm..is a villager...

I like him in dis role..yeah rite I hv read loads of stories were he is business tycoon..

Kk hz nt business tycoon. .bt I knw u very well...hez not a villager either. .

He must b police officer. .or parth's bodyguard.or sum detective. ...dev hire him to protect parth n find the attacker. ..n his motives behind attack...

M so clear abt his identity bcz of 3 reasons:

1. I KNW U MORE THN ANYONE😉

2. Da way dev was looking at his wrist watch. .on man vl wait fr his relative so desperately specially wen he knw his baby's life in danger..

3. Ny man vl dfntly wait like dis fr only one man ..DA MAN HU CN PROTECT HIM N HIS FAMILY ...BCZ ITS A QUESTION OF LIFE N DEATH OF HIS SON..


May b maan is his frnd ALSO..but he is not a villeger..dfntly more thn that..
M waiting hw dis story unfolds...bcz specifically maan's character mks dis story interesting more n more

lets see baby tere kitne assumption theek hai 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART - 2


GEET is so anoyed with the person in the mansion. If it is possible she can threw him right now out of the house. Both not sharing good vibes from each other. Meanwhile,Parth came there. He scann Maan carefully. Dev took him in his arms and kissed him.

'Dad who is he?' Parth asked curiously seeing the weired person in his house.

'Parth meet your uncle Mr. Maan Singh. Say hello.' Dev introduced him with Maan.


Parth too felt weired as he never saw a person look a like. But he obeyed his father. He greet Maan.

'hmm to e hai Parth babua.'Maan said while chewing his betal leaf.

'dad what is he saying?' Parth wont getthe assent of his language.

Geet signaled Dev and he droped Parth on floor. She took him to a corner. 'sir please meri baat maan leejiye. Just think once again. Look at this man and sply his way of talking. Sir please think about Parth wo bachha hai. Is aadmi k sath reh k wo b humra tumhara or wo lallontap seekh gaya to?' Geet wants him to threw out at any cost so she trying her level best to manipulate Dev's decision so she can get rid of him.

'common Geet waise to jaise Parth bada sudhra hua hai. Tum dono pura dinn sabko tang karte ho. Par Maan ko nahi karna ok? Be a good host. He is our guest. Now i have to go take care of him.' Dev denied hearing her any excuse and left for his office.

Geet cursed him under breath and come there. She passed a scarcastic smile to him. 'bachhu tujhe wapis tere gao parcel na kiya to mera naam b Geet nahi.' She babbles in her mouth

Maan pulled down his glasse and scanned her. 'ka ka kaha?' He enquired.

She again gave a fake smile. 'heheh meri itni mazal jo main kuchh kahu. Anyways kya khaoge bfst me?' she asked reluctantly.

'jo hai sab le aao.' he replied carelessly.

'what?' She get shocked hearing his answer.

'ka wat? Ek baar me kono sunai nai padta ka? Kaanpur me hartal hai ka?' he again mocked.

She twisted her lips and show him the way to breakfast table. Maan settled himself and start eating one food item after another. The speed of gulping food and his diet make her eyes popped out with a shock. Parth too saw him in a shock.

Parth nudge Geet and signaled her. She bend down to him. 'Partner ye aadmi hai ki elephant. Kitna khata hai?' he asked innocently.

'kitna se zada kaise khata hai. Chiii' she felt disgust even talking about him.


Hearing her blabbering laughed but her glare make him covered his mouth with his hands. Geet instantly called Dev and tell him everything. Dev's patience give up now.

'Geet what's wrong with you? Ab tume uske khane peene se bhi problem hai? Wo itni durr se aaya hai bhook lagi hogi. Or waise b gao me log khulla khate peete hai. Now please dont disturb me. I am in a meeting.' instead of responding to her complaints he just snap back and cut the calls.

After having his meal he made annoying sounds which just taking her patience. But she is helpless having no option but to bear this man.

'kamra kaha hai humara. Huma neend aa rai hai.' he now wants to relax. Geet again made bad faces. 'ka koi paresani hai ka? Jab se aaye hai aisa sada muh leke khadi ho. Aaya ho na babua ki to aise muh na bnaya karo babua pe bura asr padega.' Maan just not leaving any single chance to irritate her. On each and every step he just pulling her on nails.

Geet patted her high heels on foot and showed him his room. Maan scann all around. 'e ka itne bade ghar me ek pankha b naahi hai. Bijali ka bill bacha rae ho ka?' he complaint not seeing the fan and cooler.

'u idiot ac nazar nahi aa raha kya.' Geet fumed and showed him the ac.

'ac vc to theek hai par pankha or cooler kaha hai. Humka nai pata humre kamre me pankha lagwai do.' He act so stubornly that grew her anger more. Without answering she gave one glare to him and step out of his room. 'lo madamva ka guusa to dekho. Ekdum jungli billi hai. Par isko malum nai hai hum b ser hai. Ab is bili ko nakel daal k dum lenge.' Maan was not very much happy with her attitude towards him. So he promised to himself that he tamed her and make her dance on his tunes.

Geet's face flushed due to anger. Parth see her roaming in his room angrily. He asked for the reason. 'partner calm down.'


'but how? Jab tak wo gvar mere sar pe chada rahega i cant help it.' she cribbed to him.

'bas itni si baat. Dont worry partner us villager ko transfer karne ka plan hai mere pass.' he assured her that he had a plan to make him run away from there.


Geet's eyes gleamed. 'really? But how?",she asked curiously.

Parth stood up and open his wardrobe. He took his bag and again come to Geet. Geet glancing him curiously what he is upto. Parth opened the zip and pulled out one glass bottle from it.

Geet' was about to shriek loud but Parth covere her mouth. 'relax Partner dont scream or else we come in trouble.' Parth cautioned her.


Geet was still in fear.glass bottle was filled with hundreds of spider. Which look horrible. 'ye sab kaha se aaye?' She asked with a panic on her face.

'cool na. Maine or mere friend ne School lab se liye. Socha tha class me chhodenge. Par dad ne sab khrab kar diya. Koi baat nahi ab hum is us villager uncle pe chhodenge. Tum dekhna wo usi time yaha se bhag jayega.' Parth grinned and winked. He told his plan and both gave a hi5 to each other.

'Mr. Gwaar ab tum gaye.' Geet said confidently.

Geet went to his room to check what he is doing right now so they execute their plan of scaring him. The moment he step in her foot was tripped on banana's peel,which was thrown by Maan, and she lost her balance.


Geet scared and clenched her eyes hard.soon she realize that she wasnt meet with floor but hanging in air. Gradually she opened her eyes and found Maan holding her in his arms. Drops of water falling from his hairs and died on her face. His perfect greek body is bare this moment as he was only in his towel.

Geet's nails stronly digging in his flesh as she is holding him tight for a strength. His sharp features was clearly visible which tooking her breath away. She was just lost for few sec and lost her track. Her mind stop thinking and breath get harder. The moment was so perfect till he open his mouth and broke her trance.

'ka dekh k nahi chalti ho ka?' He asked in an annoyed way and charge her all senses.

'you idiot leave me right now.' she commands but the realize he wont understand english. 'chhod o mujhe abhi isi waqt u gwaar villager.' she shout on him.


'jaisa tum kaho.' Maan obeyed and snatch his support instantly before making her stand on her feet. Due to whic she falls on floor and hurt her elbow and b***.

'ahh.' she winced in pain.

'ab ka hua tumi boli thi na chhod do. Chhod diye.' Maan taunts her.

Geet glared him while rubbing her elbow softly. Maan raised his hand to help her but she denied. 'mujhe tumhari helop ki koi zaroorat nahi.' she cursed him and make her stand again. Though its not easy but she manage quickly.

'waise tum eha ka kar rai thi?' he asked suspeciously.

'mujhe tumhari ghatia shakal dekhne me koi intrest nahi hai. Wo to Dev sir ne kaha hai bas isliye dekhne aai thi ki tume kuchh chahiye to nahi. By the way ye tumhara gavo nahi hai so aise bina kapdo k mat ghuma karo", she irrited again.


"Kyu tum kya kapde pehan k nahati ho ka?" He wont leave a chane to teased her and she twisted her lips and moved out.


Geet told Parth that he was not sleeping right now so they shifted their plan for tonight. Both waiting for him to sleep after dinner but Maan wont going to sleep. Slowly both felt sleepy and moved out for their room.

Both falls on their bed and slept soon. After half an hour whole Khanna Mansion was jerked with the screaming sounds of Geet and Parth. Both were panicked and screamed loud as much they can. All servents and Dev waked up and ran towards their room.


The spiders they planned to spread o Maan's bed was now playing on both's bed. One spider crawl up and sat on Geet's head. She screamed so badly and Maan is smirking on his win. Dev quickly went in and scooped his scared son in his arms. He brought him out. While other servants help Geet.

Dev was hell confused,from where these spiders come in the masion at sudden. Both Parth and Geet was so scared. Dev shouts on the servant and they instantly call pest control team.

Security confirm and allowed in. With in one hour they get rid from all spiders. But Dev was still curious how this much spiders came at suddenly.

He confront Parth,but he was silent.

'hum btate hai Dev bhai. U makde babua apne iskool se laye the humka darne k waste or ye babua ki aay b shamil thi isme.' Maan told everything about their plan to Dev.

Dev's anger grew up and he scold both. 'Parth enough is enough. Main tume kuchh kehta nahi hu iska ye matlab nahi tum apni manmani karoge. Agr tume kuchh ho jata to. And you Geet. Cant expected this from you atleast. Ye to bachha hai par tum to matured ho samjhdar ho. Kya hota agr wo spider poisinous hote or Maan ko kaat lete ya ghar me kisi ko b kaat lete. Have you out of your mind? This is my last warning to both of you. Aaj k baad tum dono ne aisi koi b harkat ki to mujhse bura koi nahi hoga. Understood.' he poured out his all anger on both for their behaviour.


'i am sorry dad.' Parth hold his small ears and apolozise. This make him melt instantly. He snuggled him and kissed him.

'promise k aage se aisa kuchh nahi kaoge?' Dev took promise from Parth and he nodded only. Dev took him in his arms and moved to his room.

Geet now hates him for doing this. Maan not only fail their plan but also torture them with their weapon. He also told Dev everything. She gave him a deadly glare and start moving from there.

'agli baar soch k panga lena. Samjhi ka.' maan cautioned her.

She turned around and stare him furiously.


'is jeet ko humari haar mat samjhna. Bloody gwar.' she warned him and moved from there.

Maan chuckled and rubbed his fingers and thumb on his stubbled face. 'maza aayega ise kabu karne me bahut maza aayega.'


Maan moved to his room. Remaining night was peaceful. Next morning Geet and Parth behave nicely infront of Dev and waiting for him to leave. Dev warned both before leaving for office.


Geet and Parth taking Maan lightly. Their every plan of torturing him,backfire on them only. Maan just skipped from all like an air.

Two days and their all plans backfire. It was a sunny morning and Parth went to play in garden area when Maan stopped him. 'ka babua aaj kuchh nahi karoge hume yaha se bhagane k liye?' He asked in a tunting manner.

Parth turned around and rested his small fists on his waist. 'next round hum hi jeetenge.' he said confidently and run outside for playing.

He running towards his tree house,when one of his servant stops him going there. 'Parth baba dont go there. Waha mud pool bann gaya hai. Aaj saaf ho jayega firr app khel lena.' hecautioned him and Parth gloomed but only for few seconds. Suddnly his eyes gleamed with new mischief. Secreatly he reached there and carefully reached up on his tree house. He collect something for his next mischief. He tied a rope's one edge with branc and and leave down. He made settings and start shouting for help.


Hearing his scream for help,Maan ran towards the source of sound coming. But before he trapped in Parth's plan Geet reached there for help and her foot tripped in the lope hole. Parth's trap catch Geet instead of Maan and she hanged on mud pool. Her head is downward and foot is trapped in rope. Maan went there and saw her hanging. He wanna help her but she cautioned him not to touch her. Geet pulled her up again and again and gradully suceeded in untying the loope. Maan and Parth turn astonished seeing how she freed her without anyone's help. She freed but falls in mud pool and get drenched over all.

Seeing her Maan and Parth burst in laugh. Geet glared both. 'Parth ruk tu abhi tujhe btati hu.' she cautioned him and trying to get up. But that places was so slippry due to wet mud and she lost her balance again and again. This make both laugh loudly.

Geet patted her hands in frustration. 'kya hua Jungli billi? Tume to kisi ki help nahi chahiye thi na?' Maan taunts her.

'ha or tumhari to bilkul nahi chahiye. Parth help me.' she commands Parth and he raised his small hand for help. But he was so small and get trapped too. He too falls in muddy water and get dirty like her. Now both have a mud paint all over and Maan have no limit of laugh.

'Uncle haso at help karo meri.' he asked Maan for help.

'to tume meri madaat chahiya ka. To firr reqst karni padegi. Bolo chachu plz humari madat kar do.' Maan put condition in front of him.

Seeinmg no other choice Parth agreed on his condition and asked for help in a polite way. Maan pulled him out and took him towards swimming pool. He threw him in pool to get rid of mud on him. Parth was cleaned up now its Geet turn.

'ok fine. Plz Maanji meri madat kar do.' she said forcefully. Maan helped her too and threw her in pool too. Meantime Parth come out and pushed him from backside. Maan too falls in pool and he clapped happily. Then he too jumped in pool and start splashing water on both Maan and Geet. It become game for him which he enjoyed throughly...



NOTE: MANY OF MY FRIENDS ASK FOR DP'S SEASON ONE. SO HERE IS THE LINK.



PRECAP:- MAANEET AND PARTH WENT FOR SHOPPING AND AGAIN ATTACKERS TARGET PARTH...
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow that was funny
They tried to get rid of maan
But that didn't work
In fact it instead made it worse for them
Poor geet and parth
Well they did ask for it
Damn can he eat or what
In the mud geet
Bless I was cracking up
No really
They had a moment our maneet
But he had to open his mouth
Hmmm still bit suspicious about maan bitwa
But that's where fun lies
Let's see what else is next
God save them all
Poor dev I feel bad
Three cartoons he is with
Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Is maan some cop or somebody
Maan is super poor geet and parth trap

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