DADI'S LAST WISH !! (completed!)

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: christipie
Bechara maan confuse ho raha hai aur ye mishty tho innocent hai nice part waitng 4 nxt part

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sparklingeyes11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Amazing updates!!!
I didnt know that u are a wonderful writer!!
This story seems so interesting! Will be waiting for updates

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: kabslocks
interesting update

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Originally posted by: maaniqra
Interestinngg

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: mishtypiya
nice updates... continue soon...

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes11
Amazing updates!!!
I didnt know that u are a wonderful writer!!
This story seems so interesting! Will be waiting for updates

Thanks! 😳

Glad you liked it. ..

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ShineXavier

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

well well well

super updates dear..😃 😃

Its quite interesting and a different concept..

want to read more on this..

update next part soon

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ShineXavier
well well well
super updates dear..😃 😃

Its quite interesting and a different concept..
want to read more on this..
update next part soon

Oh so u read it!

I think now you know where the inspiration comes from😉

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part - 3

Maan wake up!

Hello wake up now... I said now ! Y r u sleeping so much!

Maan! ..

Maaan!

God yaar ... what the hell!

Where am I!

Looking at the surrounding I could guess it was some interior of jungle! With wild trees every where n birds moving out there nests. . Blosming flowers n not to forget the breathtaking view ahead of the sun rise just above the waterfall...

It was the first time in my life I was watching something so beautiful like that! For a moment I couldn't think of anything else. ..

As reality drawn up on me I turned n was ready to burst my anger on her..when she did the most unexpected thing. ..

She came running towards me holding my hand she jumped into the water!

As I came out to take in some air.. I saw her swim across reaching the shore..

She looked like ..wow with those wet locks n that fitting dress..

Care explain!(I shouted)

I will Mr. Khurana but for now enjoy the waterfall!( I will but for now enjoy she said n walked away)

There wre lots of things running in my head but I thought to put all my thoughts aside n enjoy the moment. I came out only to find a fresh pair of clothes on the rock! I quickly changed in to one n walked ahead hearing the sound of some bike. .

She was sitting on the bike waiting for me ... now she was wearing blue jeans n a floral top...waiting for me..as she saw me she moved back giving me space...

U didn't forget riding a bike now did u??

For which I took my seat ... as we started she gave me instructions. .. For now I understood one thing clearly she's not going to tell me anything until she wishes. ..

So I gave up on asking. ...

As per her route we reached a small village. . Which had a dhaba... she ordered good desi breakfast ... which relished every bit of it..

I understood that she had already planned for whole day... ascwe headed out she took me towards a wooden house which was beautiful in its own way... looking around I found it small yet cozy n homely!

She aked me to rest for a while n went out.. I thought to explore the place a little..

Opening the back door I walked out in to the garden. . Where there were so many flower Plants. . A little ahead was a stream flowing. .. it looked all so peaceful .. but the doubts in my head were not allowing meto rest in peace

Who is she?? How am I here n most importantly how does she know me??? As I was a bit tired I thought to take some rest. .

I opened my eyes I found that we weren't alone we have guests!kids fron the village I guess. ... .she was busy serving them food .. Listening to there stories. ..making faces. ..

After finishing our lunch n lazing for a while we planned to visit the local mela! kids were so much exited. . I couldn't refuse them ...

I didn't even remember when I had so much fun. .. as we reached home it was quite late..after walking towards my room she settled on the couch n I on the bed..

So..

So let's start with KBC.. Mr.Khurana!

I won't ask u have to tell me everything on your own. ..

Ok ! I am not from this place. . . I stay very far from here I was here for dadi but ... then I thought atleast I could have some fun.. as u didn't seem to be that boring. ..

Maan I thought I would stay a little longer but now I understood it's not that easy. . She saw me here!! .. I have to leave. . I'll come back... I don't know when. ..

But who r u??

Ummm..

I'm an Angel!

I know it's a bit hard to believe me but ... I'll explain everything when we meet next time ... Please try to trust me. .

Happy birthday once again maan hope to meet u soon!

With that she vanished!

To be continued. ...

Hay pep!

Now if it's a fairytale how can it be complete without a evil character😉

So wait for the bad.. evil n cruel ...

In the comming parts. .

Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 11 years ago