Mission Impossible:The Don n The Diva part 26 pg 97 updated

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Deepa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#401

part 21
awesome...
nice...
how come her system is not working suddenly?
and Maan was so scared...
this Brij is so dangerous...
and Daadima is here...
cont soon dear...

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maya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#402

Mission Impossible : The Don N The Diva

Part 22

Maan was feeling anger and worried at the same time, "what are you guys doing, you are suppose to be with him, what the hell were you guys doing" Maan yelled as he rushed out of his office, "Sir, Dev sir was on the way home and suddenly he stopped his car and got down and called someone and was talking to someone leaning on the highway tree and suddenly he was gone, we searched everywhere nearby, but," Maan cut the call before that could say anything more, and took his car by himself and rushed away not even waiting for his bodyguards to catch up with him,

"Maan, they will kill you and Dev too one day if you are not careful," an old voice echoed up, "this business will kill our whole family," the voice continued, "Nothing will happen to me and until I am alive, no one can touch my family, I will protect them, I promise you that," Maan promise came to his mind, "god please, please, keep my Dev safe, please," Maan prayed as he rushed up, he was driving like an Manic and he called all his private securities to search for Dev as he drove up.

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Geet was on her way home in Maan's car thinking about Maan, her thoughts got distracted when the car stopped suddenly, "what happened," Geet asked the driver as the car stopped, "Don't know Mam," the driver said tensed and got down from car, and Geet too got down, "is it serious." Geet asked looking at the driver who was leaning in and checking the engine, "looks like it Mam, you please wait here mam, in 2 minutes I will call the mechanic and get it ready, you please sit inside Mam," he said,

"It's ok, my house is nearby only, I will go on," Geet said, "No Mam, please, Maan sir will kill me if he knows this, just two minutes mam," Driver said panicked, "see, there is no need to panic, I will speak to him, or will not say about this ok, so you don't worry," Geet said and went and took her bag, and smiled at the driver and walked away,

The silent night, the cool breeze, the shinning moon light and lonely street, it looked perfect, Geet felt so calm and she felt an freedom, she smiled up and walked so slowly enjoy her every second, as she was walking up, she saw another figure walking in from the opposite direction, as it was dark, Geet can't see clearly but from the height and weight of that figure, it looked like a guy, Geet looked down and walked up as to avoid any kind of issues, after a few seconds Geet heard a sound and looked up and saw the guy fallen on to the ground,

"Baba ji," Geet run up towards the guy, and as she got a little bit closed to the guy her heart stopped it's beat for a second, "Dev," Geet screamed as she saw his face in the blood pool with the moon light, blood was flow from his head and his shirt was shocked in blood, Geet rushed down and kneeled before him and turning him up straight and held his face, "Dev, Dev," Geet shouted and as she held his head she found the fresh blood running down from his back head sticking on her hand, "Baba ji, what is this, Dev" Geet called but Dev didn't open his eyes,

Geet looked around the whole road was deserted and Geet can't see anyone, Geet took her dupatta and tore it off and tied around Dev's head to stop the blood flow, Geet panicked and started to shiver, "Dev Please hold on," Geet said, kept his head down from her lap and rushed ahead, she need to find someone or an public booth anything, Geet thought as she rushed ahead, and she saw a guy drive up in a bike, "Baba ji," she prayed and went and stopped him, jumping before his bike, and he too stopped shocked, "Sir, please, my friend had an accident please sir, help me, I am so new to Delhi, please," Geet begged crying up,

Seeing Geet's messy blood filled state that guy said an yes and rushed with her, and Geet took him to Dev and the guy immediately called an ambulance, Geet sat down and held Dev head on her lap and prayed up, in few minutes the ambulance came and two guys in white uniform came with an structure and took Dev and keep on it and placed inside the ambulance, "Thank you so much sir, thank you," Geet thanked the unknown guy and jumped inside the ambulance and it started,

The nurse inside the ambulance kept the oxygen mask on dev face and tied it and removed his shirt and Geet eyes filled up again seeing the Cut marks in his body and the blood running from it, her heart pained for Dev, "Bro, Bro," Dev moaned slightly as the nurse treated the wound, "Maan sir," Geet's mind immediately remembered that she should inform Maan, "Sister, do you have mobile with you," Geet asked the nurse and she nodded and gave Geet her mobile, "Thank you," Geet got the mobile and dialed Maan's number

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Maan was searching for Dev like an mad person, he did everything he can do but there was no information about Dev, Maan hit his brake as his phone rang up and he saw the display it was an unknown number, "Dev," Maan thought and took the call, "Dev," Maan screamed as he took the call, "Maan sir," Geet's voice made his stuck, "Geet, you reached home, you are ok right," Maan asked making Geet feel worse, "Maan sir is worried about me an unknown person's this much, but how will I tell him about his brother whom he loves most is in this stage," Geet thought feeling miserable,

"Geet, is there any problem," Maan asked suddenly tensed for her as she was silent, "Sir, I am good, but," Geet dragged, and Maan waited for her to continue, "Sir, Dev," Geet started slowly, "Dev, what happened to Dev, where is Dev," Maan shouted panicked and feared, Geet finally made up her mind and said everything that happened, "Sir, please don't worry sir, Dev is ok, you please come to the KH hospital sir," Geet said as she cut the call, Maan's hands started to tremble and he held the steering wheel so hard, his eyes filled up,

"Dev," he screamed aloud in that deserted street hurting his lungs, the big scream helped him to calm himself and drove towards the hospital, Maan was driving in a jet speed and reached the hospital in no time, seeing Maan enter the hospital like an hurricane made all the staffs to stand up, Maan went straight up to ICU ward without any enquiry and saw Geet walking to and fro, her torn dupatta and her suit full of blood strains, she looked a total mess, Panicking Maan more,

Geet doesn't know that the hospital belongs to Khurana's when she brought Dev, nor the hospital guys knew it was MSK's brother, they came to knew who Dev is when Geet said his details and as soon as they knew it was MSK's brother, the whole hospital was shaken and they were running up doing everything they can and that's when Geet came to knew that it was Khurana's hospital,

"Geet," Maan rushed towards her, and Geet looked at him worried, "where is Dev," Maan asked slowly, "Inside," Geet said and she can feel his pain in her heart, "Is he," Maan's voice got blocked even to ask it, "Is he ok," Maan asked slowly with a shaken voice, "yes Sir, doctor said nothing seems serious and he will be ok," Geet said and Maan slowly looked inside the glass way in the ICU door, and saw Dev in midst of the doctors, and the mask on his face and band aid on his body,

Maan walked away and stood there leaning to the wall, and closed his eyes, feeling the pain, Geet can't bear to see Maan like this, it was like her heart is crushing inside out seeing his pain, Geet went near him and saw his pained face and silent tears flowing from his closed eyes, Geet eyes filled up and tears flowed down seeing his tears, don't know why she can't see him like this, it gave her pain down to her soul, she slowly wiped his tears with her soft hands,

Maan opened his eyes and saw Geet standing there crying up, Maan even in that pained state can't see her crying, he held her face in both his hands which fit in compactly and rubbed her tears away with his thumb finger and Geet looked at him and leaned on to his chest and hugged him closely and she had no clue why she was doing so, Maan too hugged her tight and felt like his pain was reduced a bit,

"You know Geet, Dev loves me so much and he trust me more than anyone in his life, he never takes care of himself, when I scold him and asks him to be careful, he always has only one answer, "why should I care for myself when you are there to take care of me, when you are there nothing will happen to me", but today, I broke his trust, I wasn't there to take care of him, I wasn't there to safeguard him, I broke his trust and he will never believe me again" Maan said holding Geet tight, and Geet could feel the heat raising in him,

"This is not your fault; this was beyond your control and Dev knows it too, he was just moaning your name from the moment I found him, he loves you so much, his trust and believe is so strong on you, maybe because of his strong belief only Baba ji made me find him, so I could call you, and your love for him is also so true and that love will even make him alright, I promise you that, so please stay strong sir, if you are broken down, who will keep him strong," Geet said and she slowly pulled from him,

And made Maan to sit on the chair, and held his big hands together and held it within her hands, and held it tightly, "please be strong sir," Geet said, and Maan looked at her caring face, "Mr.Khurana." the doctor's voice made Maan and Geet to turn around, "Doctor, how is Dev," Maan asked jumping up from the chair, and Geet too stood up, "Relax Mr.Khurana, he is good, just lost some blood due to the wounds and thank god that the hit of his head was not so bad and Ms.Geet had found him on time, we had treated him and we just give him so seduction and he is resting, he is perfectly fine" the doctor said making Maan smile,

"Can I see him," Maan asked, "Not now Mr.Khurana, you can see him in the morning, please, let us handle him tonight, you can go home," the doctor said, "No Doctor, I will stay," Maan said blocking his words, "your wish Mr.Khurana, you can stay in that guest rooms if you wish," the doctor said and Maan nodded, "see sir, I told you na, Dev will be alright," Geet said and Maan nodded, "Geet, come on I will take you home, it's already too late," Maan said feeling a lot better, "no sir, I will too stay," Geet said thought she felt hell tired,

"Geet, I will take care," Maan said and his mobile rang and it was from his Mansion and just then he remember Dadi maa, "God," Maan thought for an minute and decided not to tell Dadi maa about Dev as she can't bear it, "Hello," Maan took the call, "Maan, where are you and where is that Dev, his mobile is also turned off," Dadi maa asked worried, "nothing Dadi maa, Dev got up with his friends and went out and said he will not be back tonight and I got stuck up with my work," Maan said and Geet was watching him,

And she can see the situation and she pulled his shirt and Maan looked at her, "Dadi maa, one second," Maan said and kept his mobile behind and looked at Geet, "Sir, you go home, I will stay here, please," Geet said softly, "Maan, Maan," Dadi maa's voice echoed from the phone, "Ji, Dadi maa," Maan replies to her, "Maan, I don't want to hear anything, just come home," Dadi maa ordered, and Maan looked at Geet, "Ji Dadi maa, I will come soon," Maan said and Geet smiled up, and Maan cut the call,

"Geet are you sure," Maan asked, "I am so sure," Geet said, "Geet, atleast let me take you to your home, so you can change your dress and have some food too," Maan said, "no problem sir, you only look tired, and I will manage and I don't feel hungry too, so please sir, you carry on," Geet said, "Ok, your wish, be in this guest room" Maan said and walked away, Geet looked at the clock it was 10.00, Geet went to the guest room, informing the duty nurse to call anytime, and went and sat on the bed,

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It was 10.30 when someone knocked the door and Geet stood up to see Maan's securities standing there, "Maan sir's securities," Geet thought, "Mam, MK asked to give this to you," they said and gave three bags, "and Mam we will be here only outside the hospital, if you need anything, just call me," one guy said and they nodded and went away, Geet sat on the bed and kept the bags on the bed and opened the first bag,

It had food parcels, and two water bottles in it, "Maan sir had sent me dinner," Geet thought and the opened the next bag, and it had an beautiful new salwar in it, "wow," Geet thought and opened up the third bag and found a two small boxes and she opened it and saw soap, tooth brush, paste in one box, comb, a small mirror, a cream, in other box, Geet was struck to see all this, how thoughtful of him, Geet thought,

And she went inside the washroom, to refresh and change herself, and then she came and had her dinner, and the food was so good and spicy just as Geet like it, and Geet cleaned the mess she created and went out, and saw the corridor empty, and she went and checked on Dev, and went to her room, she didn't feel like sleeping leaving Dev in his condition, it was 4.00 am in the morning, When the nurse came to Geet's room, "Ms.Geet, Mr.Dev got his conscious and you can see him if you want," she said, and Geet jumped up and rushed with her,

"Mr. Dev, please, don't strain yourself," The doctor was saying as Geet entered and turned to Geet, "don't disturb him much," he said to Geet and went out, as the doctor went Dev looked at Geet, and Geet went near him, "Dev, are you ok," she asked and Dev nodded "Just can't bear the pain", and he remember Maan suddenly, "Bro, where is bro, what happened, how did you find me," Dev asked slowly, Geet then said everything what had happened and Maan's pain,

"Maan sir was so pained, never seeing him crying before," Geet said, "Poor bro, I knew how he would feel, he loved me too much, even if I had an own brother na, I doubt he would can love me like this," Dev said shocking Geet, "Dev, what do you mean," Geet asked shocked, "Yes Geet, I am not that lucky to be born as Maan bhai's brother nor my Khurana's family," Dev said, "he was adopted" Geet asked still shocked and Dev nodded a yes,

Precap: What happened with Dev, Geet's fight with Breej, with some sweet Maaneet moments, Geet's meeting with Dadi maa, on next updated (on Tuesday)

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sanum23

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Posted: 11 years ago

#403

some truth which is shoking 4 geet and 4 us

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sanghita0000

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Posted: 11 years ago

#404

awesome update...feeling bad seeing maan in so much pain...I don't know but I have a feeling that brij did this...but why??...also I am confused who is adopted-maan or dev??...😕

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love2_soma

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Posted: 11 years ago

#405

magar dev ki yeh halat kisne kiye...chalo he is fine...m waiting whn geet will come to knw abt maan...her warrior...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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khwaishfan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#406

hi dear! Thanks 4 da pm n fab intense emotional update! Maan worried bat Dev! Geet on her way home n car stops - some problems! she decides to go home n den sees Dev! She takes to a hospital n contact Maan! Maan upset n rushes! Maa overwhelmed n blames himself! Geet comforts him! They r in KH hospital! Geet di nt knw! Dadi calls n Maan lies to her! Geet tells Maan to o home n she will stay! Maan garees cos of dadi! He leaves bt sends food etc 4 Geet! She is awed by his concern! Dev awakens! Geet ith him! Dev is nt his real bro! He is adopted! Bt Maan n him share a wonderful relationship! Geet shocked! interestin precap! superbly written! update soon!

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hira2010

@hira2010

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Posted: 11 years ago

#407

awesome update so geet save dev

maan cant see dev like this

geet console him

emotinal maaneet

geet taking care of dev

dev is not real bro of maan but their love n care eachother

hope dev k accident brij nai na kara ya hoo

precape intersting hai

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janvi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#408

gr8 part..

cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,

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fariya20

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Posted: 11 years ago

#409

awesome update

some one attack on dev but y he is not don or criminal

some thing is fishy about maan n his busiiness but what

is he realy a don or his raivels made a potrate about him

geet found dev injured took him to the hospital taking care him

maan is bit emotional to saw dev icu

soo dev is not real brother he adopted

precap is super waiting for next

i want to know ur other stories

how many stories u write on maaneet plzzz give me the link

love ur work

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spoorthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#410

Kya dhamake dar twist tha !!😲

I really didn't see it coming. ..

Waiting for the next!

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