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Posted: 10 years ago
LOvely update
Felt good to see Sandy behind the bars...

Jiya left dev for Diya..
she realised that Dev was not meant for her.. Maan and Geet married among the fun and masti..bechara vicky
ladkiyaan nkitna fayda uthaati hain uski shrafat ka
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb loved it i missed your updates so much😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey all😃

I m here again with another update...😊

its short, but I wanted it to be like this...hope u'll like it...😉...let's see

love

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Originally posted by: shining_moon

hey all😃

I m here again with another update...😊

its short, but I wanted it to be like this...hope u'll like it...😉...let's see

love

anupam

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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter-84




It was late and time for bidaai was near. Though the wedding was done in the farmhouse, Mr. And Mrs. Handa wanted to bid farewell to their daughter from their own home. So, with selected family and friends which were left for the bidaai they get on their vehicles leaving for Handa Mansion.

On reaching there, preparation for bidaai started and geet felt her heart heavy every passing minute. Though she was going just next door, the feeling of living in a different home than her parents was quite overwhelming. Sam and her mother helped rano in preparing the thaal of rice and flowers. As panditji announced that it was an auspicious time for bidaai, sam brought the thaal of rice near geet so that she could throw it behind while leaving her maiyka, while rano collected the very same in her anchal.

Every handa member had their eyes wet seeing the bidaai of the most loved handa daughter. Mohinder was trying to hide his tears and keep a smile on his face, but it seems the tears had a mind of their own. The elder ladies started singing beautiful folk songs for the occasion as geet started throwing the rice behind. Maan walked beside her just watching and giving silent support to her.

When they came near the entrance geet turned and hugged her mom, crying her heart out. It was as if she was a small baby again not wanting to part with her mother. They cried together reminiscing every cherished moment they spent in this very house. Geet then hugged goodbye to other relatives as well as sam. Sam was the only elder sister she had and was very much attached to her.

Finally geet came to mohinder who was standing a bit behind not knowing how he could let his daughter go.

Papaji...

His moist eyes turned to geet's watery ones and he chuckled seeing her cute pouting face. Embracing her in his loving warm arms he exclaimed...how am I suppose to let you go, my gudiya...??

Hearing her father's usual affectionate but emotional voice, geet burst out crying while hugging him tightly...I won't leave you, papaji...!!

He parted hearing geet and cupped her face wiping her tears. Maan too was not likinbg all these tears in her eyes, but he knew it was a sentimental occasion for everyone.

And how is that suppose to happen...??...mohinder asked his daughter lovingly...daughters have to leave their home one day, sweetheart...!!

She pouted and then murmured...we will ask maan to stay here with us...only mohinder and maan heard her and while maan raised a brow at her petulant demand, mohinder laughed out loud once again hugging his dearest treasure to his heart.

Oh, I love you dear and I am going to miss you so much...!!

They parted and mohinder held maan's shoulder with one hand while side hugging geet with another...maan bete, I am giving my soul today. Hope you'll keep her as much happy as she was here if not more...!!

Don't worry uncle. Geet will never be sad in KM...he promised.

Finally hugging all her friends and family, geet sat inside the beautifully decorated car along with maan and Vicky and dev sat in the front. Though not much distance was there, but the length of the lawn from HM portico to the gates of KM was distance enough to use a vehicle. Others had already moved to KM to prepare for their welcome.

Geet was still sniffing slowly making all the boys worried. Vicky looked through the mirror and exclaimed...oh no...!!

All the other three looked at him, even geet...what happened, Vicky...?...maan asked with a frown.

Woh bhai, I think we forget something important in HM...!!

Geet was now concentrating on Vicky, distracted...what...??

Yes doll, I am so sorry...!!...I totally forgot...he made a pathetic puppy face.

What the hell Vicky...!!...I told you to put the luggage in the trunk...what did you leave behind, you idiot...??...she went on totally flipping her mood.

Now, the three boys were gaping at her...what...??...now why are you staring at me like an owl...??

Don't worry doll, you got it back...he replied smiling like an idiot.

Geet frowned getting irritated with his smile after his blunder...what...??

Your spunk...he winked and steered the car inside KM's compound while dev simply sniggered and maan smiled feeling good seeing geet's mood back on track.

The car stopped at the portico and dev and Vicky hopped out opening door for maan and geet. Maan stepped out and came around offering his hand to geet, who took it and smiled at him.

They stopped at the door. The whole KM was beautifully decorated for the welcome of its eldest daughter-in-law. A beautiful pot filled with rice was kept at the threshold and a vermilion water filler thal was kept after it.

Naina came forward with the pooja thal and rotated it around the newly wedded couple, putting tilak and showering them with flower and rice.

Geet beta, now push this pot with your right leg and enter your new home...she explained with a warm welcoming smile. Naina's happiness was reflecting on her face, seeing her long cherished dream getting fulfilled.

Geet did as instructed while maan stared at her feeling a surge of possessiveness coursing through him. She is his...!!...Finally...!!...he thought seeing her enter his home as his wife.

Geet stepped on the red thal and then stepped inside the house leaving her feet's print on the floor. First naina took her to the house temple and asked her to light a lamp at the goddess feet. Maan and geet prayed for blessing their married life and keeping their family happy and together.

She was then escorted to the sitting area where she and maan where to perform some other rituals and play some games.

Sam and the girls too were there to support geet, though geet was the most familiar with the khuranas.

A thick thread was tied on both their right wrist with various knots...

Okay, now both of you have to open the knots on the other's wrist and whoever does in it less time wins...naina said as the girls cheers for geet while boys were taking maan's side. Both get at work, geet with more enthusiasm of being the winner while maan with more grace and confidence. Surprisingly, maan won the game and dangled the thread in front of her while she narrowed her eyes promising retribution.

Next was the famous bowl and ring game. Nt dropped the ring in the milk bowl and both inserted their hands inside to search for the ring. Geet was determined to win this time while maan lazily caught her hand and gave a devilish grin.

Come on geet. You have to win...pari urged her while the boys cheered for maan.

Geet tried everything to release her hand but he was nowhere relenting. She finally made a cute baby face pleading him to let go or they will be teased to death, but maan was only enjoying this time of his life...hey babaji, what has happened to him suddenly. It seems as if he is hell bend on embarrassing us, first at the altar and now here. He is behaving like a possessive jerk...she muttered not knowing that maan is now in his full right and will not back off at any given opportunity. She was a walking heaven for him and he has full intention to possess and cherish it.

Arey! What are you guys doing...??...search fast...pari complained tired of waiting while sam who caught maan's smirk saw through their own game and jumped at the opportunity...

I don't think we'll see the ring any sooner if they continued their own game...she nudged maan and added winking...kyun maan...??

Geet was turning red every second as others caught on and whistled teasing them while maan simply rolled his eyes and cursed them for interrupting. He just wish to finish it fast and have his mishty all to himself.

Leaving her hand he tried to search the ring to end the game, but this time geet got the ring and squealed in victory showing the ring. Among the fun and laughter, geet looked at maan, who was gazing at her intensely and felt a surge of desire run through her body. He was arousing her with his gaze itself making intimate promises for the night to follow.

Okay everyone. It's too late now and everyone is tired. Girls take geet and settle her in the room...naina ordered after consulting with the elder. The other relatives too retire to their given rooms. Raj, who was watching their games with them and enjoying this happy occasion too got up and came to geet...

Beta, I am so happy to have you here. Though KM has always been your home, now you are officially a part of our family. If there is any problem, big or small, come straight to naina or me, okay...??...he asked cupping face. She nodded and hugged him with a smile.

And don't forget your boyfriend will always support you, so if you ever want to complain about maan I am all ears...he cheekily added making others laugh and geet chuckle with delight sending maan a naughty warning.

Yeah. Mr. Boyfriend, we know you are her supporter but now she is My wife. So,...he pulled geet to him and said...she is no longer your girlfriend. Go hug your own wife...his tone petulant making raj roar in laughter at his son's stupid jealousy.

You are so J, bhai...vicky teased thumping maan's shoulder only to get a glare in return.

Okay, enough now you two. geet is looking so tired. Let her rest...naina chided them and took geet with her along with the other girls instructing dev to send maan after sometime.


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Naina settled geet in maan's room which was now theirs and tried to make her relax...geet, do you need anything beta...??

Nahi aunty, I am fine.

Aunty...??...ab main teri official maa hoon, so no aunty-wanty...she tried to make a stern face. Geet smiled and replied...okay maa...!!

Hmm, that's better. She placed a kiss on her forehead...you have been my daughter from the day you born and I am so happy that you and maan found your soul-mates in each other. Always keep smiling, beta...she blessed her and then left the room. Her friends were still there and thought to lighten the atmosphere a bit...

Waise geet, tune dekha maan kitna desperate hua jaa raha hai...nt giggled and added...uska bas chalta toh tujhe khud hi utha kar yahan le aata...!!

Geet simply pouted at them for teasing her and wished they would leave soon and her wish was granted and they rushed to the door to guard when maan came up.

What are you girls doing...??...step aside I have to enter my room...maan was getting irritated with all the delays. Here he was desperate for his first night and these stupid and tedious rituals and customs.

Oh!!...our desperate groom, we can't let you enter the room...sam said blocking his way while other giggled enjoying it so much. The boy gang was there too and they jumped to support their brother...

Why won't you...??...it's his first night and his room. He has every right to enter...!!

Of course he has. Just pay the toll tax and you are free to go...sam replied cheekily.

Toll tax...??

Yeah! Our neg...!!

But you people already took so much money for the shoes, you money-looters...vicky shouted in outrage.

Ahan!!...that was for shoes this is for entrance. Soch lo maan. If you want to spend your night outside or in guest room continue to argue. After all we have the whole night...sam was on a roll knowing there was no escape for maan.

Adi, just hand them whatever they want...maan ordered adi losing his patience.

Fine, what do you girls want...??

Oh! Nothing much, just 3 lakhs...!!

WHAT...!!

The boys were on the verge of getting heart attack...yaar, tum log toh bank robbers se bhi jyada demand kar rahe ho...dev tried to persuade but there was no relenting from the girls.

Finally fed up of their tu tu main main, maan took a pen from the table in the corner and pulls out the check book from adi's pocket where he has kept it after giving the girls the check for getting his shoes back. The girls were now away from door arguing with the boys. He quickly wrote the check hands it over to sam and entered his room locking it for the outside world.

He could still hear the giggling, hooting and laughter from outside, but he cares a damn. Finally they are alone and he could spend as much time with his love as he wants. He smiles happily dreaming about the night and goes towards his bed only to find his cute bride dozing off while leaning on headrest. He saw the clock which showed 2 am and shook his head at his fate.

Some choicest colourful words entered his thought for his friends and relatives as well for delaying his night and making his bride so tired that she fell asleep. Sighing he came forward and sat beside geet staring at her divine face which was glowing in the beautiful ambience of his room. The light from the candles shown on her face making it look heavenly.

He could spend a lifetime just staring at her. Suddenly he relaxed, they are together for eternity and he would make their each night as special as tonight. He saw she was uncomfortable and thought of easing her a bit. He removed her jewellery and heavy duppatta making sure not to wake her up and then lie her down on the bed. Keeping the things on the side table, he took his clothes and went into the washroom to have a quick shower and change.

He changed into a pair of pajamas and took his place on bed covering them with a light blanket. Holding her petite body close to his warm and slightly wet bare chest felt electrifying, but he was satisfied with having her close. How many nights he had dream of seeing her like this in his room on his bed. His various fantasies regarding geet, everything flashed in his mind bringing a contented smile on his face. Hugging her to himself he released a pleasurable sigh, whispering a soft...goodnight, mishty...in her ears, placing a soft peck on her lips, he closed his eyes giving into deep and peaceful slumber.


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so, here is the update...how many r disapponted like maan...??😉😆...don't worry...I have planned some different scenarios for THAT!😳

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Edited by shining_moon - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
vicky trying to divert geet from feelling sad and he got success in bringing sherni geet back😆😆these two people are so cute and wonderful bonding. finally geet ki entry hogayi hai khurana mansion mein. poor maan kitna desperate horaha hai geet ke saath rehne keliye aur yeha sab milkar usko test karrahe hai😆😆he is so happy to see his misty in his room along with him and slept with contended smile. having her in his arms😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
lo ji geet to so gai.bachra maan ne sr k liye kaya kaya socha ho ga.chalo koi bat nhi.aj nhi to kall.sabr ka phal mitha hota hai.
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
poor maan geet slept till he come in room

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Posted: 10 years ago
Yaar poor Maan sab usko loot rahe hian.. paise paise i swear Maan will take revenge for sure...

but seriously Maan.. poor boy wat did he get.. biwi tho so gayi but as he said he is contented having her with him in his house..his room and on his bed as his wife now waiting for his wildness.. dekhte hain how geet handles him
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Posted: 10 years ago
Splendid Update

The wedding was awesome and now the bidaai was really sad
even though Geet knows her husband and in laws so well yet life will
be different as a married woman and leaving her parents home where she grew up .
the games were all fun but the girls really gave Maan a hard time and eventually when he enters his room his Geet , his life , his wife is asleep , well I do think there is also a lot of pressure on the wedding night so its actually refreshing when the couple don't consumate on that very night as their married life is not going to end so there is really no rush .

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