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Posted: 11 years ago
Thanks for updating.
Geet trying her best to be optimistic, inspite of everything. Love her character. You've built her character really well.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: CutieTeju

Oh.. Poor Geet.. she is feling lonely w/o her Maan.. Yaha janab.. grumpy hoke baithe hain.. But after so many days.. mature Geet dekhane ko mili.. who is helplessly in love with her maan.. Truth janane ke baad Geet Maan se bhi aisehi khaffa rahe.. tabhi us ullu ko pata chalega..😈
Nice part.

Ullu...😲 Mera Maan ulla nahi hai... Avi loves him... 😆 Thanks Teju.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vidyaniru

Thanks for updating.

Geet trying her best to be optimistic, inspite of everything. Love her character. You've built her character really well.

I think inspite of her quietness and her zany behavior from time to time, she has depth to her; which is what I want to show. Glad you liked it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

TEASER 2

It had all started in Dev's room this morning. Dev had been in the shower so Maan had waited in his balcony taking a seat on the swing surrounded by jasmines. As soon as he got out from the shower Dev had been on Skype with some lady. It was definitely not Geet. He would have recognized her voice anywhere.

He had been incredulous as the lady helped Dev pick out his clothes. The endearments that the two used for each other surprised him for a second but he knew Dev had a habit of calling most people by pet names.

Was he simply gasping at straws here? Was Dev not serious about Geet? For a second, he wanted to shake the truth out of Dev. But if Dev truly loved Geet, what would he, Maan, tell him?

While he had stood there, Dev had headed to Daadima's room and he had followed, stopping outside the door when he heard Geet's voice.

He heard her telling Daadima that the blood pressure measurement was high. He had peeked in and seen her showing the hand BP cuff to Dev. She then called Dr. Siddharth on speakerphone giving him the BP measurements. The doctor had told her not to worry and make sure Daadima had light meals, plenty of fluids and bed rest for the day. He would stop by the house in the evening. Dev had checked on Daadima and told Geet that he had to go on an emergency site visit out of town.

Dev and Daadima had both voiced regret that they would not be able to go to her graduation ceremony. She had just laughed it off saying that it was a mere formality, it was not so important. Daadima had enfolded her in her embrace and kissed her forehead. Dev had promised her a surprise to make up for his absence and Daadima had joined in.

Neither one saw the rapid blinking of her eyes as she tried to keep her smile firmly pasted.

He had hated the situation in that moment. Why did even her blinking and hiding her tears bother him?

That explained why he, Maan Singh Khurana, was standing behind a tree in front of the staff resources library. The one place that he would never chose to go back to; and yet he was here. His brows furred in confusion as he saw her running away in tears from there. Was he getting the picture completely wrong here? Or was it wishful thinking?

Her tears bothered him. Heck, everything about her was bothering him these days.

He ruffled his hair wondering for the hundredth time today what he was doing here at college.

Why was someone being here for her graduation important to him?

Why, when she had chosen to walk a path away from him was he here; cancelling his appointments, walking on campus behind her?

Five years. It had been five years since he first saw her and yet he was still in the same place ... a few steps behind her.

As far as he tried to keep himself away, it seemed that a fine thread was always tying him to her.

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In case you missed the previous teaser...
Teaser 1

At last I am in his arms. The music is blaring in the background but my heart is singing a different tune as Maan's hand comes from behind and wraps around my middle holding me firmly to him.

Rasiyaa.. rasiyaa..

Baanwli si preet mori, Ab chaen kaise paaye

Aaja rasiya mohe, Ang lagaa le

Oh beloved

My love is innocent, how can it be at rest?

Beloved, come and embrace me

Gesuoon si kaali ratiyaan

Adharon pe kaape batiyaan

Sanwli si saanse mori, Araj sunaawe

Aake mori shwet preet pe, Rang sajaa de

This night is darker than my tresses

Conversation shivers on my lips

My innocent breaths beseech you

Color my fair body and soul with yours

Baanwli si preet mori, Ab chaen kaise paaye

Aaja rasiya mohe, Ang lagaa le

My love is innocent, how can it be at rest?

Beloved, come and embrace me

This is one beautiful VM. Do check it[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cx9ZWBA23aU[/YOUTUBE]

Anyone interested? I thought I would go for another song from the movie Kurbaan.

VIDEO CREDIT TO THE UPLOADER

Song from the movie: Kurbaan

For those without YT, search Maan Geet VM O Rasiya (Kurbaan) by Naz R

Edited by dqno1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update so far
hayeee poor geet is feeling sooo lonely and thinking to go back to daarji😭😭😭
feeling soo bad for her
love the way u described how she is feeling when she went to library, same way to hostel and how rain was linked with them
ohh so she is wearing locket now
wonder will maan see the locket or no

I am sure he will come to party but what will be the end result of party I am sooo eager to know that

I know u are busy but still saying pls update soon😆😆
dil ke haatho mazboor hoon😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dqno1

Hi Priya😃 Kaisi ho?




fine tum batao kya haal hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi congrats on the new thread! Thanks 4 da pm n note! Np ! Terrific update! Fab song! Superbly written. update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasraj123

nice update so far
hayeee poor geet is feeling sooo lonely and thinking to go back to daarji😭😭😭
feeling soo bad for her
love the way u described how she is feeling when she went to library, same way to hostel and how rain was linked with them
ohh so she is wearing locket now
wonder will maan see the locket or no

I am sure he will come to party but what will be the end result of party I am sooo eager to know that

I know u are busy but still saying pls update soon😆😆
dil ke haatho mazboor hoon😆😆😆

Sometimes you are lonely even in a crowd of people.
It is her love for Maan that is making her feel so.
Thanks Jas...
Main bhi majboor hoon boss ke haath...😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
POOR GEET
SHE IS STILL STANDING ALONE IN THE CROWD OF PEOPE REMEMBERING HER DAYS WITH MAAN
HOPE AND TRUST ARE THE ONLY THINGS LEFT FOR HER IN HER QUEST FOR LOVE
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: punam2712

POOR GEET

SHE IS STILL STANDING ALONE IN THE CROWD OF PEOPE REMEMBERING HER DAYS WITH MAAN
HOPE AND TRUST ARE THE ONLY THINGS LEFT FOR HER IN HER QUEST FOR LOVE

Thanks Punam😊

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